Fate-Changing Alchemist

After reading more than 20 chapters, I feel that the author's writing style is good, and the logic and development of the entire story are also relatively reasonable. It's just that the writing is a bit confusing, the protagonist does too many tricks, and many things he does are incomprehensible. For example, establishing a women's personal guard army is a bit taken for granted. Just find dozens of them as personal guards. Forming a personal guard? Regardless of women's natural physical strength, differences in body shape, and emotional personality, let's just say have you considered regular monthly blood loss? It's fine on land, but it's a big problem once on a boat. There is also the microscope incident. What is the purpose of giving the microscope to you? Is it to promote the development of the UK and contribute to the British people? Not to mention selling lenses, although the money is a lot, it is definitely not worth the protagonist's time. I initially thought that the main character was doing this to improve his social status, but later on he inexplicably turned into selling lenses. There is also the Rabbit Hunting Association, which is obviously a ticket for the big business groups in the upper class. When you don't have enough money at the beginning, it's okay. But when you have money later, why don't you join in quickly? When there is still plague, either you just watch things develop and take advantage of social chaos to develop yourself, or you simply publicly release plague treatment medicines and solutions to improve your social status. If you do this well, you might even get a knighthood. As a result, the protagonist actually secretly asked a few so-called young men to sell it secretly, making it seem like working underground. Having said all this, I am not saying that this book is not good, I just hope that the author can have an overall idea and not just hammer here and there. Too messy

As long as he doesn't write that kind of civil science stuff, it's still good. I don't know why he's always not popular. Isn't this author more powerful than the 2020 version of Fighting to Break the Sky on some monthly voting lists?

The writing is good, but the theme is confusing. Running account?

The base of the main foot seems to be a combat medicine, right? After all, whether it is for self-protection or for hegemony, such a powerful combat potion should be firmly in your hands. No matter how many times you dilute it and sell it, if the opponent suddenly turns against you, after all, the author also said that the effect of the potion remains the same even if it is diluted, but the time is shortened. In the latest chapter I saw, the protagonist sold 1,500 combat potions at once. They can kill 600 of you in two hours just with a pile of heads, brother! I also like this kind of self-promotional article, but you are so high that it makes me feel like your opponent is forcibly outwitting you, and it makes me very uncomfortable. Of course, I am relatively cheap myself, so I will still insist on reading this book for a while, hoping to see something different.

The writing is okay, but it's just messy... I can't figure out who the protagonist is.

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This is a running account, with no details at all.

Originally, I was developing and making money at the beginning, and there were more or less details. It was good there. Later, I started recruiting people for training, and it started to look bad. Maybe the author didn't portray any special roles in the army. It was nothing to watch. He went to plunder, and he didn't describe the opponent in particular. Not to mention a battle of wits, just a battle of courage. No, it's just a bunch of girls jumping over and winning. It's too boring. Why they want to rob is not explained clearly. In the early stage, there is no money, so it makes sense to make money. When you get rich later, is it just to make money? There are no other conflicts or problems, and you just keep making money?

I haven't read it yet. The introduction attracted me and I'll take a look.

These chapters are a bit better than the previous ones. Just write about how the protagonist promotes changes in the world. If nothing else, you can add anything about cultivating immortals.