Elf World: I Am the Lord of the Ocean

The sauce is bubbling, a cup of milk tea, hot popcorn, crispy snow cakes, raisins, and a small bench in the front row to read a big book~

Being severely plagiarized

The daily writing is really good, but there are a lot of major poisonous points, so I gave up. 1: The system can talk, complain, and bargain. I can't stand it. 2: No solution to the magic change. After strengthening, the attributes of lobster and seahorse are close to quasi-gods. What is the meaning of the existence of such a demon-turned-quasi-god? What's the point of starting from 0? It's better to go out and give it to the quasi-god directly. 3: Speaking and appearing directly to the quasi-god. When the protagonist was still a shrimp, he directly locked the Lugia egg remotely and signed the contract remotely. He was speechless. 4: After the system is updated, time travel is now possible. Directly convert from fandom to fantasy Wanjian. Just give up If there is nothing to write about, just finish it early. It's really a pity that the owner of the museum poisoned me to the point of abandoning me before I could persist. The main daily writing is really good

Let me tell you something. Chapter 440 is really a bit troublesome before we get off the ship. . . . . After disembarking from the ship, another system arrives. Pig's trotters officially activate the golden finger, and officially start to follow the plot and enjoy the plot benefits. This should be the beginning of the excitement. So if it doesn't end, this book will have to be at least eight or nine hundred chapters before it can be concluded. The plot on the ship is indeed a bit delayed. But the author, don't change the outline and delete the plot. If you ruin the rhythm, it will be worse. This situation can only be improved by the next book. After all, according to the introduction, getting off the ship is the beginning of the excitement. But it hasn't started yet. . . .

Poison Point 1: The system can speak. Poison Point 2: Knowledge can be shared. Although the premise of handing over what you have researched to others is communication, my personal feeling is still poisonous point. Poison Point 3: Is ten years old considered an adult? ? The author wrote it for adults, not for minors. Reading a book is worse than watching anime.

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Iron Claw Lobster, Spiny Dragon King, Menas, Ning is also a dragon tie master?

The plot of the dungeon was quickly passed without any sense of immersion. It would be fine to go to other parallel worlds, the Ultimate Cave, Rainbow Rockets, or comic plots. It's too embarrassing to be involved in the digital world.

It's getting more and more fantasy. There are too many plots running at the same time, so that each one is not explained well. The deadline setting makes me very tired to read. It has been a long time since the relaxing plot has been overused. Obviously, the interaction between Pokémon has always been well written.

Come on, come on, if you have any comments or suggestions, please come here. If there are any supporting roles, please mention them here.

The power grid from Rayquaza haha

This lineup is about faith. Kirbymon blocks the train with his body

I can't finish reading the third golden chapter. Goodbye.

I want to ask, except for Arata, are the two trashes following the protagonist all the time? When I saw these two, it was said that the protagonist should follow the protagonist when he opens a gym. If you don't know how to write partners, don't write it. Why do you insist on adding a few trashes? At least they all have their own characteristics and uses. You feel like they are just adding a few burdens for the sake of water numbers.

The impression is average. The new book starts with ten or twenty chapters. The progress is slow. Why is it slow? Because there are many dialogues and explanations. I talk to the system and explain this and that every day. How to put it, I feel that many of them are not needed or necessary in the early stage. When I first came, I discussed world invasion or not, and then the plot did not advance much. It was very slow. It just feels like there are no hot spots, it's just mediocre. It's a wonder that it can retain enough readers to read in the new era. It's not that the writing or setting isn't good, it's just that there's something wrong with the previous pacing.

How to say it! If you are particularly fond of Pokémon, I don't recommend watching it. After all, the male protagonist likes to kill Pokémon to get materials to eat. It's a miracle this thing didn't get caught.

The idea at the beginning of this book was quite good, but it fell apart in the second half.

After reading a few chapters, is there still a living system, and does it talk so much? You originally thought the system was running away, but you found another way to break through your destiny, but it turned out that the smart grandpa system took you flying? The grade is now low

The Pokémon in Cerulean Gym should be so cute.

What I want to read is real Pokémon, not fantasy novels covered in Pokémon skins.

The new system doesn't work. I couldn't stand it anymore when I saw the protagonist extract talents from the Pokémon from the Cerulean Gym to Magikarp.

I watched the pirated version and thought it was okay, so to show my sincerity, I gave a reward of 5,000

I didn't follow up after reading chapter 800. I'm waiting for the new book. When the new book comes out, I'll think about the add-ons or lineup, and this one will almost be finished.

Will there be more time-travel plots later? If you don't travel to the main world later, you won't care about it. The main world should be the main one.

Author, you have to hold on. I think it's pretty good. Don't care too much about what other people say. Don't let it suck.

The red-faced dragon is so handsome

I have read it many times before, but I have never read it. I have just started reading it because of the recent book shortage. Now that I have read the free chapters, I feel that it is quite to my liking. I like to read the kind of elf novels that push levels, but I don't like to level up quickly. This book feels okay, and it can be regarded as my food.

When will 923 be released, or when will the author add it? It's hard to read if a chapter is missing.

Freezing bird! Freezing bird! Invincible!

Update soon, I will give you the last monthly ticket