The Rise of the Brass Teapot from Hong Kong Island

It's a good start. The subject matter is quite new, it's the Brass Teapot movie. I hope to continue writing.

The writing is too messy, and it looks rushed. The theme and idea are very good, but the writing technique and plot design are even worse.

As long as you keep writing, your grades will go up quickly. Mainly for golden hands, write more.

Are there too few gangsters in your novel? I have never heard of Helianshe being one of the two major gangs.

Very good, come on! 😁👍👍

The author should use this book as a writing practice, and the next book can learn from the Hong Kong TV series The Greatest Man in the World! That one is really good!

It's interesting. I'm used to reading novels where the protagonist becomes a god all the way. It's interesting to read this. It feels like I used to read Legend of the Seven Realms, but the writing style needs to be improved 😁

Is it possible to become a police officer if you have a gang background? Think about Song Zijie and Chen Yongren

I recommend a new book by Bin Tie. It is quite interesting to start from the Hong Kong Comprehensive World.

Come on, keep it first

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง Big

I feel that the pig's feet are really speechless. If you have a golden finger and can't use it well, how can you turn it into a golden finger for money? Such a person is not suitable to be a pig's trotter! Wouldn't it be good if the pig's feet were given the ability to copy? Wouldn't it be nice to have a super brain, super physique, super long life, etc.? How difficult was it for a modern person to make money in that era? As long as you have the first pot of gold, forget it, slip away

Thank you readers for your support, because I am an amateur writer and have many shortcomings. You can give me more opinions and make progress together.

There is a lot going on in the company these days, so I came back to rush it out. If there are any typos, you can correct them and I will correct them in time.

I have thought about the Shenguo style for a while. After all, newcomers are not very good at cheating. Relatively mature reminders are suitable for practicing A Samurai with You is now online.

Several protagonists appear once 🤫

There are too many supporting roles, and the protagonist has no sense of presence.

Thank you for your comments. The previous typos and loopholes have been fixed. It may have been a while ago and my writing skills are unfamiliar. I will continue to work hard.

There are too many typos, which affects viewing

Seriously, did you guys have an agreement with the author who wrote Brass Teapot and Goldfinger? Or maybe it was written by the same person. Why do they all like Fatty Pig's Knuckles?