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Disadvantages of this book: The writing is average. The first and next paragraphs often feel vague and poorly connected. The protagonist can tell that the author wants to use Lin's death to enrich the protagonist's image. However, the appearance of the first supporting character Lin is too confusing, and the description of the battle scenes is difficult to describe in one sentence, especially the paragraph about rescuing Lin. It can obviously be written all the way, but it is inexplicably skipped. Then the next paragraph uses Lin's perspective and subsequent descriptions to make up for the previous plot. It's a bit overwhelming, and then uses memories to flesh out the protagonist, but the description is too embarrassing and too dry, and it makes people abandon it. Advantages: The material selection is still good, but how to coordinate it after the protagonist's stage is enlarged in the later stage will test the author's overall view and writing style. Generally speaking, this book is very dissuasive, but the author seems to be a newcomer. I have a piece of advice that may be a bit unpleasant. In the Internet writing circle, if you have not given up all determination to improve yourself, quit as soon as possible, otherwise you will end up in pain and poverty. Finally, I would like to add a word of encouragement to the author.

If you feel like you don't have much poison tolerance, I suggest you skip Chapters 15 and 16.

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