The Heavens Are Full of Energy

The author wrote the battle scenes well, but from the plot, it can be seen that he is a novice. The first volume is an original world, the plot is a bit confusing, the author wants to express too many things, it is not enjoyable enough to watch, and the pace is slow. In comparison, the subsequent Holy Ruins volume is written a notch better, maybe because it has an outline. It is very refreshing to read, the battles are exciting, and the plot is also very lively. If you want to watch Zhutianliu, it is recommended to start with Holy Ruins, which will not affect the viewing experience. There is also the relationship section that book friends said. I think the writing is okay, but there is too little foreshadowing and it seems a bit abrupt, as if there is no foreplay. It can be seen that the author originally wanted to write about emotions, but during that time he was obviously affected by his grades. Was it because he failed to pass the test? So we need to speed up the pace? The plot after leaving the island is the same as the wild horse, ascending to the realm of gods, competing in martial arts at the peak arena, and defeating Zhou Haochu; a Taoist duel at Yunding Tiangong, killing Qin Tiangang; at the top of Fuso, bells and cauldrons chiming together to kill Taichi Miyamoto; finally, killing the Emperor of Tianhai at the top of Tiannan, stepping into the peak of immortality, and blasting open the gate of heaven; the rhythm is stronger than the other, which is refreshing, but it feels a little insufficient foreshadowing and lack of stamina. Moreover, the first two volumes have ended, and the first world has been written, but some holes have not been filled in. The line of the sect was suddenly broken, the plot of the martial arts and the business line was greatly reduced, and the confrontation between the two countries was not written. It feels like many things have been deleted, which is quite regrettable. I still hope that the author will write well and not be affected by his grades. Write the book he wants to write and write slowly, and he will always have his own readership.

I would like to give you a suggestion. The volumes of Bankai-ryu must be divided into parts properly. In a certain world, some people like to watch Bankai-ryu and others don't. When I watch Bankai-ryu, I like to jump to it. I usually watch Bankai-ryu that is not divided into volumes. When I encounter a world that I don't like to read, it is too troublesome to jump to watch it if it is not divided into volumes, so I usually don't watch it.

How can I put it, the protagonist feels incense based on the impression of the past life? Has the protagonist verified it? You can be cautious, but you can't regard hearsay from the past life as a golden rule! This makes the protagonist feel ridiculous. Maybe, incense is a kind of energy that can be absorbed through special methods. At most, there will be a little loss.

My first investment has paid off, it seems I won't be able to order anymore.

The chapter titles are good, but doesn't the article feel too watery?🥵

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I've seen exactly the same love story between the protagonists. The first game of "My Exclusive Dream Game" has exactly the same plot as this one, it's pretty good

What kind of life should I write about? What I write about is just like my whole life, ordinary and ordinary.

After reading a few chapters, the plot is fascinating, but I always felt it was dragging and there were many useless sentences. Some words can be expressed in one or two sentences, but they are expressed in several long paragraphs. Many of the sentences are good, but they are all put together and dilute the plot... This is my personal feeling after reading it. Generally speaking, I have an average desire to read this book. This comment was made on a whim, please delete it if you don't like it.

The writing is okay, but there are too many modifiers. One or two are just right, but when you read a few modifiers in a row, the taste changes and it feels like forced modification.

The pace is too slow, and fancy things can easily disrupt the plot. The purpose of the martial arts conference is firstly to beat people, secondly to make money, and thirdly, it is an unknown thing. There has to be a plot about Green Snake. What do people say? The protagonist joins without asking. Is this the invincible temper under the stars in the previous life? The shooter takes action to test and then has to protect (surveillance), make bets with others, and then intervene. This plot actually contradicts the conversation about meeting the green snake for the first time. It can be deleted, and it is too old. The main plot I understand is that the protagonist has excellent qualifications, a combination of fighting and training, the kind who doesn't care about anything except improving his martial arts, and has an invincible momentum and temperament under the stars. Anyway, I feel that Chapters 27 to 32 are particularly discouraging, and the protagonist Wu Jun slaps him to death, and the pretense is not straightforward at all.

I want to see the protagonist enter a familiar world of novels to fight for hegemony, and have a battle to conquer the world and dominate the world.

It was pretty good at first, but what can I say? When we arrived at the Holy Ruins, the scene suddenly changed...

Come on, it's very well written!

The protagonist was a great master in his previous life, but he can fight impressively no matter what level he is at. This is called increasing his understanding. I know the author is exaggerating about the number of words, but maybe it's a bit too exaggerated.

Come on, I like Brother Dong too

The plot is a bit monotonous. I can try martial arts for once and become invincible.

Come on, I invested, and I will reward you if you make money.