I Am a National Treasure. Do You Love Me?

The three views are very upright, really good. Don't pay attention to those criticisms, write according to your own ideas, absorb good suggestions, write slowly, don't rush, you can see that there are a lot of foreshadowings, gradually fill in the holes, maintain a good rhythm, as long as it does not crash or 404, it will definitely become popular.

The protagonist's character is too idealistic. It's a joke to have no desires and demands. Life is all about fame and fortune. It is a joke that the protagonist with superpowers turns himself over to the state, and men are not lustful and do not like beautiful girls, which is the failure of this book. The protagonist, who was born in Qidian Welfare Institution, struggles to make ends meet every day and sometimes fails to eat three meals a day. You can imagine what will happen to him after he has super powers.

The structure and power are not commensurate. It would be okay if it was Iron Man-level power. It has planet-level capabilities, but its vision is limited to the country, and its autonomy is low and it is left to the planning of national agencies. If you want to write about the growth of a small character, don't give the protagonist Shuang Wenlong Aotian's power. Putting the protagonist in the frame of a national hero is as inconsistent as asking the entire Justice League to go out to catch a thief. And with such a powerful power, I only think about kindness and justice in my heart, without any inner entanglement or rebellious thoughts... I have no selfish desires at all, and it feels unreal.

When did being a coward equate to having a correct outlook on life?

If there really is a superpower and it is possible to inherit it, I estimate that pig trotters will be raised by the state and supplemented every day, and the ovulation periods of more than 300 beautiful women will be calculated so that one trotter a day can be used to give birth to children.

When you write like this, have you ever thought about how you can refuse the unreasonable demands of a few people, but how can you refuse the demands of all mankind? There are people in power with superpowers who can study it. What will happen if you know that you are immortal? And it's still a time when all diseases are gone! Few people can endure this kind of temptation, especially those in power. Therefore, experienced people, such as me, find it very embarrassing.

The student party is not strong enough. I will reward you with 100 points to express your support. Please give the author a try and stop praising me. I really like this kind of subject and hope that the author can write better and better 🌹🌹🌹

The idea is quite attractive, but the content is a mess

I am also drunk. As the only superman in the world who is related to the future and destiny of mankind, he is actually asked to do something that the police can do to be a hero, or even a star, and treat the decision-makers as idiots? Although the plot is fantasy, at least it abides by some basic laws, right?

Except for the first chapter, which is a bit interesting, the following chapters are all full of words. Is it interesting to introduce the escort team? It's useless to write this at the beginning. No wonder the results are not good. The first few chapters should at least produce some results to attract others to read. How much do you pay for writing this opening chapter? Who is your bodyguard? Is it interesting?

The writing is too desireless. Everyone has desires, but the protagonist doesn't even have desires.

Recommended? Not bad! A small congratulations, keep up the good work! 😁

It was quite interesting at first, and I thought it was in the style of an invincible novel. However, after about ten chapters, I lost interest. This should be a daily article, but there is no trace of daily life at all, and the pretense is weird and weird. It feels like a big stone was smashed on the chest on the street in ancient times. It feels very weird. Surfer it to the country for protection? There is really no need for protection. It is true to eat and drink together, so the focus should be on using one's own abilities and pretending to be bad in daily life. As a result, the first ten or so chapters focus on being studied 😅 Also, how can I write about the feelings of the supporting characters in the first chapter? What a drama, it was so real for the first time in many years, I was dumbfounded Generally speaking, it is very average, the three views of the protagonist are correct, but he is too impersonal and fake. After reading more than ten chapters, I feel that I have no ideas and pursuits of my own. Is this a human being? ? ? Even Superman. . . Diaosi has desires after all, and saints also have selfish motives. You are just a super robot, right?😅

Beautiful thought! If I don't cut you into slices, I'd at least have to draw blood and semen every day, and arrange for a woman?

The best thing about this book is the idea at the beginning. After you get super powers, you report them to the country. The more you read later, the less you feel. I feel a little frustrated and not happy at all. I just read the book for fun. Maybe this book is not suitable for me.

I never understand why the male protagonist keeps having affairs with so many women? It's disgusting if you do it too much.

Generally, the Emperor's Golden Pole series. The first thing the country did when they found out about the existence of Superman was not to rush him to a research institute for preliminary research and extreme super power testing, but to give him a suburban villa and then let him wander around. It's so fake.

After watching it for a long time, the official was always pretending to be a ghost and using the protagonist as a fool's tool. Are you sure it's okay to write like this?

The operation failed, so I came to offer incense. The doctor may have cut a major artery.

It's funny to see a lot of discussions in the comment area about whether the three views are correct or not. How can there be any correct or incorrect views in the world? If you don't agree, go check it out. I think the main flaw of this book is not the problem of the protagonist. The most important thing is that the main line of the story is unclear, the story is bland and boring, the plot is too unrealistic (the detachment from reality here is in the details, not the plot itself, don't be too bold), the author's writing style is also average, and the emotional description of the supporting characters is too blunt (most books in the starting point are like this, and this is the case for new authors). The above are the main shortcomings of this book. As for the protagonist's personality, it all depends on preference, and it doesn't necessarily have to be realistic. After all, all the protagonists in all the books are exactly the same, and a lot of fun is lost. In addition, the setting of this book is more attractive, but the author's writing is more general, which makes people feel that the gap is large, which is unpleasant.

666 Writing 👍 The subject of surrender may be considered poisonous by many people I am very curious about how the plot will develop. Now that animals are protected, the country will also arrange marriages, and the action country will definitely restrict surveillance. Did other superpowers suddenly appear? Or violent struggle between countries? Fighting between factions?

The author's writing is okay, it looks pretty good, six votes support it.

The creativity is pretty good and the writing is passable. But the plot writer needs to think about it carefully. I feel that the recent content has been a bit delayed. Keep updated, recommendation tickets are available every day. If it doesn't collapse in the future, I'll make a full reservation when the time comes. Come on!