I Rose up After Being Struck by Lightning

Chronic poison! It's good that the male protagonist can share his spiritual energy, and it's also good if he wants to become the boss behind the scenes. There was nothing toxic in the early stage, but it collapsed in the mid-term. The biggest problem lies in his girlfriend. I think it is normal for a man to pamper his woman. It is also normal for a man to run over to her immediately when he knows that she is in danger. This is not licking, this is the responsibility that a man should have. But could you please stop writing about this woman in such a cumbersome way? Knowing that a man is going to do something: Ah no, I want to be with you. Knowing that what men do is a bit dangerous: if we die, we will die together. And what about the male protagonist? Doesn't he know what's going on? He knows! But he felt that he was safer around him, so he took his girlfriend and hid aside. I can understand, really, I can understand. Then don't separate from the main force in the first place. You don't plan to contribute anyway, right? As a result, there was a problem with the large army. You went to the police station and failed to help. You didn't plan to go to the center of the battlefield. I came to see how you turned the tide and how you acted domineeringly. As a result, you don't protect everyone here, and you don't go into battle to kill the enemy over there. By the end, I was on the edge of being OB, and I still felt a full sense of accomplishment. Oh, you are the boss behind the scenes, so you won't come forward. Then can you give me some instructions? All the actions of the monsters are spontaneous and have nothing to do with you! To play auto chess, the players have to place their positions first, okay? What are you doing? You are a waste.

This book is much better than I expected. It is not as good as the top-notch behind-the-scenes books, but it does have that flavor. The characters in the whole text have online IQs, and the strategy has a certain depth (which is rare in online books). I won't complain about it, but I will complain about three problems that I saw objectively. First, the Reborner, the Reborner character is really eye-catching in the opening scene, but he is a pure poison in the follow-up. The opening design is amazing, but it's boring if I spoil it. I'll complain about the follow-up. Why should the reborn person torment the protagonist's wife? I know very clearly that the protagonist's wife will not cheat or get into trouble, but the reader's sense of empathy is that of the "protagonist". You write a novel with a single female protagonist and create a character who always thinks about your wife. The state harasses your wife over and over again for the sake of the "reborn person", and even forces your wife to become colleagues with him. . . Author, please put yourself in your place and tell me, will you feel uncomfortable? Even if you trust your own wife, if a high-status man who likes your wife sticks around her every day, any other man would be very annoying. The second and third are minor problems, and they only have one chapter, but they actually illustrate the same problem of the author. . . Second, the setting of the male protagonist. The male protagonist carries out all the unlisted plots, telling me that he is a lawful good, and then abruptly adds a chapter in the middle, and may choose to let passers-by die for the sake of a little exposure. . . I don't hate this kind of behavior, what I hate is character collapse, and it's meaningless character collapse. The passerby is irrelevant. You can save him and tell him to keep it secret at most, or you can find an excuse to explain the civet (such as Ah Qi's subordinate, just following the original owner, etc.). There is really no need to let him die. Even if you ignore it, forget it, and don't write it in the article, it will be fine. Why should you forcefully insert a chapter in the middle of a male protagonist who implements lawful good and he deliberately lets a passerby die? Thirdly, this has been changed by the author, but let me explain why most people cannot accept that plot. Let me give you an example. Nowadays, you are completely unable to defeat a foreign war. Then the friendly forces send you guns, weapons, ammunition and manpower. As a result, you crawl around with waste and no one can defeat you. You can only rely on the help of the friendly forces. You have already begun to think about how to trick the friendly forces? It's not that it's impossible to think about, but it's too God's perspective. You've been beaten to pieces by the enemy, so you can only count on the friendly forces to save you. You also estimate that the friendly forces have a nuclear deterrent that can wash away the ground. In this situation, I really can't find any excuse to have the courage and reason to cheat my only life-saving straw, which is a direct explosion of logic. The second and third points seem to have nothing to do with each other, but at the same time they prove a problem of the author, that is, the author cannot measure the weights at both ends of the scale, but insists on playing with the scale. The second one is that the author feels that "the mastermind behind the scenes" > "the male protagonist" , and the third reason is that the author feels that "Those who are not from my race must have different hearts" > "World War" + "The Master Behind the Scenes", but in fact there is no need to forcefully compare the plots of these two chapters. It has no positive meaning and also destroys the characters of the male protagonist and the wise man. . . Actually, my evaluation is subjective. I pay more attention to logic when reading. Objectively speaking, 2 and 3 are very small problems. Only one is an unavoidable poisonous point. So, this is a purely subjective complaint, not a reference +1, but to sum up the above-- The setting, plot, IQ, and style are all bonus points, but points will be deducted for the collapse of the character + the subsequent rebirth of the reborn. This is a book that is far better than I expected, but it is also very poisonous. Let me give it a review that is worth reading. . . Above.

This is the second book review I have posted in the past few years since I came to Qidian. The purpose is to dissuade some people who like me don't like the word count. This book is basically going around in circles. The author explains the same thing in one chapter and then writes two chapters. After that, the supporting character reviews it and retells what the author has explained before through the mouth of the supporting character for 250 chapters. I can't stand it anymore. In fact, the whole story is quite interesting, but the author is too ruthless with the word count. On average, the content of 2 chapters talks about repetitive things.

Isn't this book label a behind-the-scenes leak? The character of the protagonist is too poisonous

After reading Chapter 250, the pig's trotters and brains suddenly got shit, and I was so angry, damn it.

Not bad, well written. Remember the martyrs and pay tribute to the heroes.

These chapters are a bit too watery. Not to mention a lot of things that were repeated over and over again, including the entrance section, which was simply unwatchable. It is recommended that such low-level slap-in-the-face plots be kept to a minimum.

Hi, what a great book, the author would like to create a book club!

Wait for a recommendation vote, come on!

After reading Chapter 23, I probably discovered that there is something wrong with this book. If there are pitfalls in the content, I will continue to follow it if it is well written. I personally think the author's writing is quite good and the writing style is also good. But one thing that makes me unable to read is that there is too much content, it is not easy to digest the information, and each paragraph is too long. This writing method should be more like the writing method of traditional novels rather than online novels. For reference, the number of words on each page of the better online novels currently on the market will not be too many. The author has gone the opposite way.

This Yang Jun seemed to have a high IQ when he appeared in the early stage, but when he started to calculate this and that, he felt like he was straight up. He is the kind of person who doesn't have that IQ and insists on making plans. His intelligence sources are secretive. If he has an advantage, he just wants to use pig brains to waste his money? Is it still a secret? He dares to plot against the protagonist when he regards him as a saint. He is so powerful at plotting against a saint. I feel like this Yang Jun is either a reborn person or a secondary character who regards himself as the protagonist, or a character promoted to advance the plot? Besides. The author hurry up and put it on the shelves! ! ! Short, small and a little watery. . . .

I don't understand why the protagonist is not allowed to cooperate with the country, let alone what will lead to research. The definition of country in the novel completely depends on the author.

In the novel, the country's side is completely retarded. In other behind-the-scenes novels, nine points of irrefutable evidence are created, leaving the country to figure out the last point. As a result, here, the protagonist gave half of the unclear evidence, leaving the country to figure out the rest. Intelligence analysis is most afraid of subjective assumptions, and it feels like the country is completely treated as a fool.

A book that was banned a few years ago has been republished again. I really don't want to give up! !

Let me tell you what I think about this book: First of all, let me talk about the advantages. I think the biggest advantage of this book is the creative setting. Runes can create aura in the soulless world. The protagonist also creates monsters through aura. There are many kinds of runes, but only two types have been found now, which play such a big role. The second is that the character's IQ is considered online. Why do I say "approximately"? Because the official IQ is not qualified, because no matter what the author's guesses, the ideas are all come up with by Colonel Yang. At first I thought it was good, but later I found a big problem, the author He told all the official guesses about the protagonist, the demon clan and You, and let it be known as the guesses. He also told all the thoughts that had a little bit of brainpower as Colonel Yang's thoughts. Many of the ideas can be guessed by those of us who like to read novels. Why is it that only Colonel Yang can guess the official ones? Are others trash? Also, it's best to omit the official thought process and just mention it later. It's embarrassing for us if you write it down directly. Don't you think it's unfair and unnecessary for the author to write down every official meeting for us? I think the following four points are very important for novels to become popular: writing style, setting (realm setting, cheat setting, background setting, etc.), Whether the character's IQ is online, and the most important thing is the cool point. And I think this book has not been put on the shelves until now because it is very fun. Chaos, I read a lot of novels, and I found that as long as they are interesting, the writing is a little readable, and the main line is clear, it is easy to put it on the shelves. Your writing is not bad and the main line is clear. The novels that have been put on the shelves now should be interesting and confusing, and there are very few. The editor is optimistic about you because your setting is good. You can take a look at your book to see if there are many places in your book that you have cut off when you are about to get better, or you have handled some cool spots poorly and it seems that you are not happy at all. Originally, you should have been "high energy from the front" as soon as it was put on the shelf. In just a few chapters, you wrote that humans can't defend You's attack. The monsters and You fight are inseparable. Then You uses the backhand and the monsters can't resist it. The protagonist's highlight shot must be consistent. In line with human speculation about the protagonist as a "saint", the protagonist must be quick and powerful, and he must pretend to be powerful. Write these ten or twenty chapters. Even if you can't write it today, you must write the protagonist's appearance at the end of the chapter (you should also know that this is called a chapter break). Don't think this is very cliché, but readers like it. You can see which of the novels that are good at pretending to be awesome has poor results, even if their plots are cliche.

Well, there are only eleven updates on the shelves, which is too little. Diligent authors usually become popular quickly. If you want to be popular, you'd better have fifty updates on the shelves, and then five updates every day. This is my experience after reading more than ten books recently. Of course, your content must be good and it must be enjoyable to read.

I was confused by the recent chapters of Liar. I just became a saint and raised my style. It took so many chapters to write a liar. I lost all my strength in the moment of water. Others first suppressed and then raised. You are rising to the sky. Then you stepped on the mud and wrote. You knew that the liar would make trouble at the wedding, but you didn't resolve it all one day in advance. It's not like this to create conflicts. As long as the liar appears at the wedding, no matter how perfect you handle it in the end, your wedding will be a failure.

The plot is okay, but the character of the protagonist is a bit baffling. I mentioned earlier that the protagonist's father and grandfather sacrificed themselves for this land, and then how the protagonist loves this land. The protagonist in the back acts but always hides it and does not communicate formally with the country. Does the protagonist think that his own wisdom can compare with the wisdom of the country? Don't the protagonist know that joining the country is the way to maximize his abilities? Don't the protagonist know that this is a war between Blue Star and the Dark World, and that every time he delays here, there will be more sacrifices? Especially the way the protagonist creates and expands the demon clan to protect humans is simply baffling. In any case, these are two different races. Doing this will cause a lot of troubles. Didn't the protagonist think of it?

The novel started out quite interesting, but then it became more and more fantasy-like. Maybe it's because I've read too many hard science fiction novels. I prefer the protagonist to lead the evolution of the overall technology and ideology of humans and monsters, the improvement of social systems, the integration of races, the exploration of planets, and the exploration of alien planes. At present, the protagonist is slowly tricking and tricking the master into something that is extremely boring. This kind of routine has been written in a novel a long time ago, and it is more interesting than this novel.

Sigh... When I first saw it, I thought it was a fairy grass. After adding it to the bookshelf, I thought it was a poisonous weed. Now I see that it is a poisonous weed. The author will make his own decision and I will withdraw it.

Let me talk about my thoughts after reading it. First of all, the creativity is good and the writing is okay, but there is a poisonous point that runs through the early and middle stages of the book, and that is Yang Jun. This book can be said to have only one poisonous point, and that is Yang Jun, but the scary thing is that this poisonous point runs through the early and middle stages. It is not unheard of for one character to take on all the poisonous points, but the poisonous character keeps appearing, and every time he appears, he is more or less poisonous. This is very powerful. For the character Yang Jun, I believe the author wants to show him to be resourceful and extremely intelligent, but to be honest, this character gives me the impression that he is smart and has a lot of loopholes in his plan.

I feel that the way to handle the monkey is wrong, and the result is even more disappointing, and I can't stand it anymore.

After seeing Chapter 208, I regretted subscribing for the second time. The plot is protracted, and the author's plot before it was released had two poisonous points. The first one is structural, regardless of priority. The protagonist or this idea is what we want to see. We want to see the protagonist cultivate and develop, and show off and slap in the face, but a bunch of supporting characters take away the scene, and it is still a meaningless plot. For example, if the protagonist goes to the front line and the heroine insists on being together, is it necessary to spend two chapters? It's okay that your writing skills are sufficient. You should know your own shortcomings and win with plot and imagination. Exploit your strengths and avoid your weaknesses so that you can show off your weaknesses. And the pace is very slow. Don't write unnecessary psychological descriptions. Don't repeat what has been explained before. You only need to write one or two chapters about interesting things in life, but if you don't finish it, you really feel that the protagonist's IQ and EQ are insufficient, and the plot is seriously lagging. The second one is Yang Jun. You want to write about Colonel Chu, but your writing skills are insufficient, and you are writing about a person who thinks he is smart. No matter how sacrificial a person is, he will not be popular. Because as long as he makes a wrong judgment (without the author's forcible cheating, human beings would have become extinct), mankind will fall into a situation of eternal disaster, and he actually gambles. The most disgusting thing is that during the first war, his nervousness was not about the details, but about questioning his previous judgment. So, may I ask, was it because he gambled with the fate of all mankind before? He has no confidence at all, so why should he gamble? He is self-willed and does selfish things in the name of self-sacrifice. This is how Yang Jun makes me feel. It can be said that if you imagine that your subordinates are such people, you will know how you feel.

If you think of the hydrology at the starting point as porridge, which does not resist hunger but can still make you full, then this book is like sour rice soup. Not only is it not full, but it is also watery after eating.

The author quickly added a shape-shifting demon. The maggots that ate the protagonist's aura and poop became a spirit. It is estimated that the spiritual maggots who did not eat poop at the starting point became the shape-shifting demon.

From suddenly an enemy pops up and wants to kill the protagonist to suddenly confessing to the protagonist In the first part, he was filled with hatred, but in the second part, he immediately? ? ? The protagonist's state of mind was also affected I was completely confused The span of these two chapters was too big, and it was so poisonous that I was not mentally prepared at all, so I retreated first.

The protagonist alone cannot develop a system. Aura, runes. We have to cooperate with the country. And aren't the aura and rune technologies great? It can maximize the technological advantages of human beings. Why engage in demon clan? Those who are not of my race must have a different heart

The creativity is pretty good, but the plot is average

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This book is really good, it's a pity to end it so hastily.