A Girl from the Yun Family Fell into the Mortal World

This book already has 320,000 words, and it is definitely written with care. To be honest, it is more careful than the book that signed the contract. It may be that the routine is not new, or it has no commercial value, and I couldn't wait until I signed the contract. But I am a persistent person and will persist until the end. If you like it, please follow it. Comments welcome!

Give yourself a boost, I guess there is no hope of signing a contract for 400,000 yuan, but I will definitely insist on finishing it. If no one appreciates it, I will appreciate it myself. If you like it, you can leave a few words of encouragement to the author downstairs. I urgently need moral support! Thank you all!

The story is written with great care. As the plot unfolds, the characters' personalities become more and more distinct. I look forward to the author's updates, come on!

What I can do is send you red envelopes to see if I can attract more people. Good books should not be buried.

I invested in a new book and am waiting for the update. Come on! The storyline is very interesting, I hope there will be a big twist.

This is a long creative process. I hope some people will still like it after such a long time. I believe if you read it patiently, there will be surprises for everyone.

One chapter is updated every day, with 3,000 words. I saw the update of this book on a pirated website today. The plot is full of ups and downs and is exciting. It is a good book worth reading. Although the positive comments made me happy, clicking on those ads made me uncomfortable. Well! If you can't sign the contract, no one will take care of it. If Qidian asks you to defend your rights, you don't know who to call. Bad mood! Why is it so difficult to write what you want to write?

Overall, it is a good novel, but there are too many free associations, that is, the author's random thoughts, which is a shortcoming of online novels. But for literature and art, although the pace is slow, the novel is beautiful. There is appreciation value.

This book is so good, have you signed a contract?

Keep at it, write well, and don't give up

It's finally finished, and I feel a lot of emotion in my heart. Keeping writing is not an easy task, it requires too much dedication and persistence. I am very lucky to have the support and companionship of all readers on this path of growth. Thank you all, your support has given me unlimited motivation. This is my first book. It is not well written. I will work harder in the future to write better works. Finished, scatter flowers!

Collect it first. If you stick to it, you will win. Come on!

There is a daughter of the Yun family, who is graceful and graceful; when she falls into the mortal world, she attracts the whole world; when she wanders in the rivers and lakes, her children's hearts will rise; across the seas, there will be no peace; when she looks with tears in her eyes, their hearts will be united; and the people's aspirations will be passed on to all generations.

New books are coming, everyone is welcome to pay attention!

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It's so well written. The writing was so comfortable that I started reading it. The story should be exciting. Come on 👍

Four million people just passed by and had a look

It's Friday again, so fast. How's your week going? I'm having a great time 😊

I deliberately waited until the end to read it completely. I also had quite a few thoughts after watching it, so I can only express my personal opinion. Overall, the story is quite complete, but the content is not actually rich. If you think about it carefully, there is not much plot, but the love between Yun Xi and Shangguan Mu is very impressive. At the beginning, my first impression was that the writing was good, but I couldn't accept so many characters at once. It was a bit confusing, and it felt familiar after watching it. The rhythm was not bad, but starting from Yunxi falling into the water, the whole atmosphere seemed to become heavy. For me who likes refreshing writing, it is really difficult to keep reading. The author wrote that paragraph very delicately, and the characters are full of emotions. But because I am not the kind of person who is sensational, I felt a little uncomfortable when I saw Yunxi's friends and family who were always immersed in sadness. In addition, the heroine is delicate and weak. It's not that I don't like this kind of girl. I just think she is a little too philanthropic and doesn't know how to cherish herself. Maybe it has something to do with the fact that she was born in Yuanli and has a kind personality. She should be an angel-like persona. What I can't understand is probably that Yunxi wanted to keep Xiaoyu and let her become her fiancé. Maybe the author wanted to express how stupid Yunxi is and how much she cherishes the people around her, but I don't want her to make such a choice, and I feel sorry for Shangguan Mu. Yun Xi loves Shangguan Mu. If she really becomes Xiao Yu's fiancée, then she should keep a distance from Mu. However, neither of them seems to have much emotional entanglement here, but Xiao Yu is the one who can see it most clearly. Next, Yun Ye's story took up a large part of the plot. Only then did I read the title of the book specifically and wondered if there was a daughter in the Yun family, so was the heroine not just Yun Xi? After reading the above, the later plot is a little more ideal, and I like it more. However, the fighting scenes are not particularly detailed, and it always feels less exciting. Many places are showing the emotions of the characters, maybe it is also a female channel, which is more delicate and emotional. I don't know why, but after reading it, I actually liked the character of Yuyan 🤔 I know how hard it is to write a novel, and a novel that is almost finished is already very good. I believe that the next one will be even better, come on~