Ultraman: I Became Dark Lops

It feels okay. It's just that the system is a bit toxic.

What the hell? Isn't this about Dark Lops? But how come the way of doing things is so righteous? ? ? Did I come to see you write Ultraman Light? ? ?

To be honest, author, I may not be too satisfied with your writing style. My personal taste may be small and I am a little picky. Because as a whole, you are just talking nonsense, and if you add that stuff into a ball, your writing style is just a mixture of various things mixed together with no pattern at all. Some of the plots you wrote made me so embarrassed that I almost got cancer. The protagonist is either a cold-blooded villain, an elegant gentleman like Jia Gula, or a funny person like Aizen. But your funny method is a bit too nonsensical and over the top. Note that the overall writing style seems too casual. When you write an article, you should also pay attention to the reader's feelings and look at you from the reader's perspective. For this novel, reading your own novel many times will help you revise your writing style in the future. I really want to complain about it. Someone did write about your subject a few years ago, and I have also read some very good ones, but it is a pity that they are all eunuchs. If you are willing to insist on writing, I suggest you change your writing style, because your writing style really makes me embarrassed when I see it. (Scored twice)

I hope you can add pictures to the Ultraman and monsters that appear in the article.

Can the author add Ultraman Cang Yue 😃😃😃

I stopped reading after reading Chapter 7. Damn it, what kind of university is this? A group of female college students all became nymphomaniacs when they saw the protagonist. I'm afraid he came from Yichun Academy.

Realistic films either block everything or not block it at all. This only blocks China, but there is no need to do this in novels.

Supplementary pictures

Cerro's noodles

After all, if you don't know how to act cool, don't pretend to be cool. It makes people feel so embarrassed. It's okay for your cards to give consciousness, but during your subjugation process, do you think there are too many people reading your novel?

Is there a female protagonist? If not, I suggest the female Salome [seems to be the name Hesatia] or the monster girl. Anyway, it depends on the author.

Being poisoned by these system tasks, I don't like it very much. The subject matter that is completely manipulated by the system will make people feel that they have no life and no thoughts of their own. Come on, the author. 😢😢😢

. . . Why is the operation of returning to the main world a bit confusing?

Your system is too poisonous. If it's open, it's a fight. Ultraman's two big bosses. Isn't this funny? Don't you want to grow up? 😁😁😁

Can you write well? I'm too good at it. I feel so stupid.