Shocking Thunder Catastrophe

I was one of the first people to invest.

The writing is acceptable, but the writing style suffers. If you want to do a good job, you can only warm up slowly.

Benefits: Reading and voting will give you red envelopes.

It's well written, can you share it with each other?

The title of this book comes from 😅😅😅

Come on 🙂🙂

I personally feel that the title is a little inconsistent with the content and writing style. I will save it first and read the content later to decide whether to invest next month. Come on 🌹

The writing is quite good, please pay attention to the paragraphs, and the title of the book could be a bit more domineering, such as "The Shock of the Earth" or something like that. But these are my little suggestions. Come on, Ollie

How to invest? Is there any knowledgeable friend who would like to give you some advice?

Like! Reading

The armies of agrarian peoples are less mobile than the armies of nomadic peoples.

Overall, the writing is good. Why didn't you sign a contract?

Attentive. It's just that it can't be called literature, it's just a running account at best. Literature focuses on ideas, such as what is conveyed or reflected, or what is satirized. Which one do you prefer?

There are too many problems, so many that I can't tell you your good points. The title and introduction of your book don't look like a historical text. Why do you write in classical Chinese? Do you not consider the readers' feelings at all? As soon as I open your book, I have dyslexia and cannot understand what you are writing. Readers read online articles for enjoyment, not to learn classical Chinese.

After reading the first chapter of Brother Bi's masterpiece, I feel: Good! Very good! Excellent. This book has the plot of "Three Kingdoms" and the speed of "Water Margin". I pray that you will continue to have the courage to fight for wisdom and power, and the smoothness of justice. It has been hidden, I will read it carefully.