Konoha's Dog Is Happy

I feel like the ninja is too idle. He just stares at the protagonist every day when he has nothing to do. The protagonist is a civilian, and the third generation has sent people to keep an eye on him for 7 years. A civilian child who has lived under his nose since he was four years old is suspicious. Whenever something big happens in the village, he has to ask about the protagonist's situation. Apart from keeping an eye on the protagonist, the ninja has nothing to do.

The description of the plot about the night of genocide is better, but this plot is too long and not enjoyable. Also, it takes a long time to write and improve the Yile Store, which is too much. After all, everyone is here to see Naruto, not to see the opening of the store. I hope this plot can be deleted later. I also hope that the rhythm can be. The above are all personal opinions. If they are different from your opinions, please do not criticize 🙂

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I hope to be fat and fat😁😁😁

Seeing how the author wrote that the Third Hokage is so hypocritical and shameless and even more of a villain than Danzo, I feel that when the protagonist grows up, Obito will be number one on the must-kill list, and he will definitely be second.

You learn to fly the God of Thunder at the age of eight. Don't you know what are the prerequisites for learning to fly the God of Thunder? First of all, a large amount of chakra, then spatial talent and proficiency in sealing techniques, and strong physical conditions. Tell me how an eight-year-old child can be satisfied?

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​In the process, the protagonist will become stronger and start a revenge plan. At the same time, he will also change his mentality and start saving many people. Actually, at first, I didn't think about saving Zabuza and them. But later I felt that it was difficult to protect Xiang Rin and Sasuke in times of crisis with only shadow clones, so I thought of finding helpers for them. Zabuza and Haku, Raiga and Ranmaru are all characters with potential, and they are bound to each other. We can use the life and death moment to collect them. And later on, I also want to save Asuma, Jiraiya, Neji and others. Nowadays, there are too many Naruto fanfics of various types. I'm not arrogant enough to think that I can write a lot of popular fan fiction. I just hope that some of the more positive characters in my writing can have a good ending. I just wrote and wrote, but I didn't have the guts to write the part of "Shippuden".

It feels like the third generation directly asked you to write without being a human being. Is it interesting?

Is the author also a Naruto fan? Come on

The writing is not bad, the thinking is very clear, and the most important thing is to deal with the overall situation. After all, the original work is just a comic and does not need a reasonable world view. The novel still needs a complete and reasonable world view. If it is just a fight between five villages, the results may not be very good. I hope the author will persist.

After reading the text, it proves that I can create a series of my own.

Author, the content in your introduction is different from the content in the book.

It's pretty good, I hope I can stick with it

I remember that Jiraiya also seemed to be able to do the sealing technique. Even though he was not seriously injured, why would he still think of using a corpse to seal something like this? Are there so many people who don't know how to use it? Also, the Death Ghost Seal was probably used by Minato, the Hokage. Why did even Katsuyuki have to die? Was Minato Namikaze afraid of being cuckolded after his death? So both people have to die.

It's a lot of nonsense and too bland. Are you writing a romance novel?

Skills are basically reserved for the late stages of the big game! A group of people were speechless, and a shadow of a clone was blown up to the sky! While saying that he had no combat experience, he went out to fight monsters everywhere. Ikage Clone has been active for three months and still uses skills that consume a lot of mana. Rasengan, Sealing Technique, and Flying Thunder God are both medium-to-high mana consumption. Flying Thunder God

After reading it, I felt a bit nondescript. Farewell🙏🙏

When I saw Qiyu, I thought he had his abilities. Haha, the rest is just a running story. Nothing can be changed. I just follow the plot, lead an ordinary life, and have no ability at all.

Author! Can you please stop writing about Eight Gates Dunjia? Flying Thunder God and Rasengan are enough! You can learn some other ninjutsu, you don't have to learn the Eight Gates Dunjia! I didn't mean that the Eight Gate Dunjia is weak, the main thing is that out of 10 people who write Naruto, 8 or 9 will practice the Eight Gate Dunjia!

In fact, I don't think it's necessary to keep Danzo and the Third. The protagonists are already good enough, but the best time to kill them is the Chunin Exam, which is coming soon.

Why doesn't the author believe that he has such writing skills? Which writer either got scolded or grew up like this while being scolded? Even the current great gods are scolded. Is this the end? Are you willing? 😭😭😭I can only support you silently! Come on!

Why does Dian Niang think I will like this book... I don't like this style either