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The author's writing style is good and the descriptions are accurate, depicting a rich and three-dimensional ancient world. The above is an objective evaluation, and the following is my subjective experience. It doesn't look good. The author's writing is obviously good, but I just don't think it looks good. There are too many irrelevant idle words, and when it gets really exciting it stops abruptly, putting the cart before the horse. In addition, some of the plot designs also made me feel too deliberate, such as giving away people's heads without attacking the village, or the scoundrels who did not attack themselves. In short, the author's writing style is good. I suggest strengthening the overall plot structure and thinking more about what readers want to see.

Is there any book friend who wants a character Please follow the following format Name: Gender: Life experience: Character: Appearance: Nationality: Please note the nationality here, it refers to the three kingdoms of Wei, Han and Teng If you choose the Han Kingdom Pay attention to the rules of names. Two characters are cheap names, such as the word "knowledge of shame", which a wealthy family will not do. Choose a double-character name In addition, the name of the Han Dynasty must have characters. For example, if you think of a name called Li Gang, just write Li Gang and Li Jichang when leaving a message Qin, Meng, Tian, Fu, Gongshang, Geng, Hu, Sui, Shi, Wei, Sheng, Gao. The nationality can only be Teng Ji, Shang, Gongsun, Lu, etc., Can only be in Weiguo After writing these rules, I think no one wants to be a sidekick 😅

I visited the boss with my work "Kamihe Star Map".

Your world view is interesting. Is it possible for these three countries to exist at the same time?

The usual protagonists are all unique, but this book has many characters, all of whom are interesting.

The writing is pretty good! Collected! Take your time and watch! Come on update! Welcome to visit us again!

Collection, investment, good writing, wonderful ideas, optimistic about you 👍

Already invested, you must continue to update, come on, come on＾0＾~

Generally speaking, the writing is very good, but it is a little wordy. Hehe~~ The structure is well-conceived and logical.

Okay, this is the protagonist. Unlike some disgusting books, the protagonist is either tortured in one way or another.

The story is really exciting, especially the character of the male protagonist. I like it the most. He is very different from other male protagonists. It is really enjoyable to watch. To describe it in one word, it is "enjoyable".

When will the contract be signed? Brother, please support me?

I think we are both busy with work and typing, so I haven't seen each other for a few days, so I came to visit 😁

The plot rhythm is well grasped and worth collecting!

I have pursued it all the way until now, and this is probably the thing I have persisted in for the longest time.

I just finished reading it, and I hope the author will make this book a hit.

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง, don't worry, keep writing, I like it very much, don't worry about other things, if you get discouraged, the taste may change when you write it later, I think you will succeed.

I found it very interesting and every character in the book was well developed. The rhythm and sense of immersion are also very strong. I hope the author can persist in finishing this book. It's super pretty, you have to believe in yourself.

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ But also a long-time bookworm, especially for a period of time I was extremely addicted to historical articles, but now I write about urban entertainment hahaha. Tell me what you think. In fact, it can be seen from the beginning that the author has a very strong writing skills. Every movement and stillness, every word and action has meaning, and the characters' personalities are vivid enough. But the lines are a little too sophisticated, and compared to the popular vernacular today, it seems a bit obscure. In other words, there is a certain reading threshold. Secondly, I briefly read one or two chapters. Halfway through the three golden chapters, I still haven't introduced the main topic. It is still describing the things between the naughty boy and the husband. The amount of information output is obviously not enough, that is, there is no hook, and it is difficult to arouse the interest of the readers within the three chapters. This is the difference between online writing and traditional literature. Jin Yong's The Condor can lay the groundwork for so many chapters before letting Guo Jing appear. But online writing is not good. There is no hook in three chapters, so many people will quit. This may be the reason why the contract was not signed. You can refer to the official residence of Master Sanjie, or the romance of the concubine in the Red Mansion.       ，， Especially the Red Mansions, it also borrowed many writing styles and language expressions from the Dream of Red Mansions, but I, who is used to reading vernacular, felt that there was no sense of violation. And there must be a hook within one or two chapters. Whether it is the dilemma of the protagonist or something else, there must be elements that attract readers. Let's say this much first. We are both newcomers and we encourage each other.

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