Start with Embroidered Spring Knife

Jiaofangsi will look much better if he sleeps with Miaotong directly. He is decisive. It's not that he doesn't pay, but he opens the door to do business. She even takes off her clothes, but you feel her pulse and prescribe prescriptions. It feels like you are sponsoring a college student and letting her write her summer homework for you. I was speechless watching Ding Baiying share life and death. How could I have such a deep relationship after only knowing each other for a few days? Of course, there are advantages. The book doesn't follow the plot very much, and the characters are very close to the movie. Zhao Jingzhong's ruthlessness, Lu Wenzhao's foolishness and unscrupulousness for the righteousness in his heart, and Miao Tong's hatred and fear buried deep in her heart. Only a few strokes highlight the character. It can be said that it uses the framework of the movie to build its own story. But the same main line is not clear enough. It can be seen that the author has his own ideas and foreshadowing, and the plot can be coherent, but it is the plot that drives the protagonist, rather than the protagonist doing things to drive the plot. Under such a plot arrangement, the protagonist has a superior attitude, such as cherishing Ding Baiying, pity for Miaotong, and admiring Cui Min. However, this overlooking attitude is pushed away by the plot, which is very embarrassing. Especially in Cui Min's episode, when his woman was caught, he still maintained an admiring attitude and talked, and then let her leave. At this time, shouldn't he just grab the other party and torture her? I prefer to read fan fiction, but I am extremely tired of copying the original novel. I can read this book for a long time, but it is uncomfortable to read. It is useless to eat and it is a pity to discard it.

After reading fifty or sixty chapters, I didn't understand the protagonist's intentions at all. From the beginning, he revolved around a few women. I had no clue at all and no reason to continue reading.

I think it's well written and I feel comfortable reading it. After I finish speaking, who is in favor and who is against?

The protagonist has an IQ problem, a grumbling personality, and is frustrating to watch. The protagonist is so awesome in medical and martial arts that he is from the future world, making the Donglin Party and Wei Zhongxian chase him like a dog.

The gods lick dogs. Go write urban romance

I haven't watched it yet, but if you want to build your power, it's best to give the protagonist a loyalty system! Otherwise, many details will not be explained in Quick Travel, and it will be prone to bugs and crashes! ! ! !

I can't even understand what the protagonist is doing embroidering a spring knife? Apart from being hunted, there is no point in establishing a snobby look.

The early characterization was a bit too detailed, and I thought the protagonist was the kind of indecisive person. It wasn't until forty chapters later that my eyes lit up. There is no delay in killing those who deserve to be killed, and there is no need to wait overnight for those who can take revenge. There is a hearty feeling. 😁

Single heroine and multiple heroines in the harem? The protagonist should be powerful! The world I wish to go to is Middle-earth. It is best to lead the protagonist's men and army. Azeroth can also be used.

It's really this kind of pretending to be stupid and selling this kind of plot. It's really disgusting. You know, it's really disgusting if you slap someone in the face later to pretend to be stupid. It's like this has lowered the IQ of all these characters in the whole book, and everyone is like a fool.

When I mentioned Xiuchundao, two words came to mind: very smooth. Oops, I have completely forgotten about Xiuchundao, but those two words are basically engraved in my genes.

The martial arts and medical skills at the beginning are incomprehensible, I don't know where they come from, the author had better add something.

Seeing such praise, I went in for a swim and came out intact and refreshed.

What abilities does the protagonist have and where do they come from? I don't understand it, I can't seem to find it

I also think my wife is the most beautiful in the world. I wonder where my wife is? Damn it, I don't have a wife yet. . .

The writing is unclear at the beginning. I don't know what I want to express.

The plot line was okay in the early stage, but completely collapsed in the later stage, but if nothing else, I just came to watch the emotional line. As long as the sweet pet is enough, the emotional line is completely broken. I am speechless. Who should I choose between Yan Qie and Ding Baiying? The male protagonist is like a dog between the two.

The writing is good, it should be a small vest!

😜😜😜😜😜

Rubbish, the promised embroidered spring knife is here.

Well written, the second volume is much more exciting than the first volume

Chapter 157: Very full of internal flavor

It's a bit cheesy, and I always write around women. 🤤 There's not a single chapter without a woman.

I always feel awkward when my name appears in novels