The Dark Barbarian Arrives in American Comics

Perhaps in the author's writing, Bulcasso is not the absolute protagonist because the author wants to describe a "real" world. In a real world, no one person is the protagonist. This is a very high-end and ambitious writing method, but it is not suitable for online articles. Internet readers are the most patient and at the same time the most impatient group. They can follow a book for several years, one chapter a day, one chapter a week, even one chapter a month, or a few chapters a year. However, they are not able to tolerate a protagonist who is "not the protagonist" and hides behind the scenes for a long time. Instead, they focus on various "supporting roles" in various branches. In particular, the protagonist is almost at his peak as soon as he appears, with almost no room for growth. Therefore, readers will lack a sense of participation, expectation, and substitution, and will be unable to resonate. It's not that the book is not good. In fact, I personally think that the author's writing skills are at the top of the Qidian authors I have read. However, this book did not make me feel much. Except for the barbarian part, I read it half-heartedly. There is a lot of talk in the early chapters, but it quickly decreases after being put on the shelves (this is normal, most books are like this), and the further back, the less. After 200 chapters, there are even only one or two chapters in one chapter. I noticed that some of them are like this: How long has it been since the protagonist appeared? Author, don't you understand yet?

Come on, author, write it down. It's so enjoyable to read and it's all done if you feel comfortable.

The wonderful, standard barbarian protagonist of Zhennima is not like the other kind who sells dog meat with a sheep's head. It reminds me of my barbarian when he was wandering around the Great Secret Realm, and his blood was boiling! Bulcaisel looks at me! Why wasn't it Chapter 900 when I met you? I've ordered all of them! ! !

I have never played the game at all, but I think the author's writing is very exciting. Other readers mentioned that we should not mention too much about the history and glory of the barbarians. I actually hold a different view on this matter, because for people like me who have never touched this game and do not understand this game, only by knowing can I feel more empathetic and get more involved. Of course, this is just my personal opinion, and other readers may have different meanings.

The resurrection of the Seven Demon Kings is interesting. Those who indulge in self-abuse and sadism will return to Duriel Those who hurt each other in hatred and hatred will return to Mephisto Those who survive amid lies and deceit will return to Belial Those who struggle in cowardice and desire for bravery will surrender to Diavolo In Those who seek pleasure in destruction and destruction will kneel to Baal Those who move forward in pain and despair will be played by Andariel Those who enjoy pleasure in sin and original sin will return to Azmodan What is a bit confusing is that hope actually favors Constantine. Justice, courage, and who will fate favor? In the later plot, mortals and the so-called gods are struggling with the corruption of demons, and the Avengers will become Diavolo's playthings. Without enough understanding and sacrifice, these superheroes with young character flaws have no way to fight against the corruption of the devils, let alone the villains. The most important thing now is that there are no soul stones. What are you using to seal them?

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It's really difficult. As a suggestion, don't write too much about the history of barbarians and other popular sciences. This way, the audience will be larger. Keep it simple and clear. Just do it if you don't agree with one word. This is the barbaric way of doing things.

To be honest, the opening is quite well written, especially the one that brings the mountain down, which is quite touching. But I don't know what happened in the past two days. I read several books in a row, and it was always like this. I was a time traveler, traveled to other places, and then returned to Earth, but when I came back, I became an outsider. Then don't ask, it will take a long time and you will not be able to remember. There are people in the comments who criticize me, saying that I have been there for many years and can't remember what is normal. But please, use common sense and go back and have a chat with your grandpa and see what the other person's memory of his early days is like. The mechanism of memory does not change with time. What's more, I haven't mentioned here yet that people are paranoid about early memories. The more you can't remember the early years, the more you will catch some fragments and keep thinking about them, the more you will remember them more firmly (although you will automatically and secretly modify them). Even if we don't mention the issue of spiritual home. Okay, my identity has changed and I no longer consider myself a human being from Earth. Simply talking about memory, memory is something that gradually revives with triggers. You can't remember this thing, but now you suddenly see it. With a reminder, you can immediately recall it bit by bit, and many other details will follow. Unless you have complete amnesia, it would be the kind of thing where even your own parents would be completely forgotten if you were hit by a truck in an idol drama. Like this one, you can just wear it as a barbarian in Marvel, why bother putting an earth player on it? Isn't the identity of the Earth player just to give readers a sense of immersion? The advantage of being a time traveler is that you know the plot, common sense and thinking of modern people. If you don't have a system, that's what it means. As a result, you approved this identity on your body, but then turned around and said that it doesn't matter, it doesn't matter, I don't remember the plot, modern people's common sense and thinking have forgotten, they have changed... Isn't this ridiculous? You start from the beginning, why bother? On the one hand, he doesn't know anything and has no concept of national government. But on the other hand, he knows that he wore it when the liver was dark, and he also knows that the original world has an "original game script" - this is such a clear direction, at least it shows that he can at least understand the concept of video games. He remembers what games are and what Diablo is. These memories cannot exist alone and must be attached to other things. The worst thing is that you also made it clear what you remember and what you don't remember, what aspects you forgot, and which aspects you still remember. As a result, as mentioned before, the way you look at the world is basically like that of an alien tourist who first came to the earth, and you don't understand everything you see. Not to mention the Marvel Universe, a series of stories, movies, comics, etc. I have no impression of it at all, so I won't go into details. However, the protagonist's current understanding of the earth is at best comparable to that of the newly arrived Thor... This is too contradictory... Such illogical logic makes my head explode. When I was reading, I tried to round it up, but it never came back. And I don't understand whether it's the game characters who cross over to Marvel, or the people who play the game cross over into the game and then cross over to Marvel. Otherwise, you can just write this clearly. Now we are just a game character, so it's okay if we don't have anything to do with the original earthling players. Not yet. This game character also knows the original plot of the game. I just... Really, why bother. Why do you have to say "go home"? This kind of "going home" was supposed to be a "hometown accent unchanged" style, but it turned out to be an Alzheimer's style homecoming... Since you wanted to completely change people, why didn't you just travel as a barbarian from the beginning? Even if you are worried that the golden finger is too big, you don't have to make a fuss in your memory. Even if you have to make a fuss in your memory, can you clarify the logic? I really don't understand what you are thinking when you write this. Honestly, everything else is okay. But I still can't get over this contradictory design after reading many chapters. After reading two pages, a question mark appears. After reading two pages, a question mark appears. It is really uncomfortable.

After reading Chapter 13, the protagonist still cannot recall the memories of the original earthlings. It is really incomprehensible. I don't know whether it is because hell has eroded the protagonist too seriously, or because the muscles have been trained in the brain, and there is nothing else except big muscles...

Well, I have gone through the plot of Diablo 3 in the past few days Miss Leia is such a pity😢 Miss Witch is so beautiful😍 The love-hate relationship between the ruffian and his brother🤭 The Templars are so sad😅

Endless life does not give you endless wisdom but turns you into a retarded person.

Another "good book" is not popular. It is said to be a good book because of dark fans. After reading the first 18 chapters, I can see that the rest of the book can only be read by dark fans. The protagonist faced off against the Goddess of Death, one of the five great gods, from the very beginning, and won! ? All I can say is that it is too early and too unrealistic. These two designs are very unpalatable to passers-by, but they can still accept that the protagonist can face these existences in the mid-term (fast) or late-stage (slow). I can write more than 500 chapters, and the subsequent plot should still be excellent. If it is not excellent, I probably won't be able to write it. But I really can't stand it anymore, the beginning is so unpleasant. Dark fans, please don't criticize me, this is definitely the most rational analysis 🥺.

Another person who writes a novel as an argumentative essay and talks a lot of nonsense

Please don't get hung up on issues like settings. After all, the integration of multiple worlds is something that needs to be weighed. As far as this book is concerned, as the author, I am the oaa corresponding to this world, so the power shown is mainly based on my settings. As for the plot rhythm issue, I thought about it and thought it could be solved by updating it... Wait until I put it on the shelves... As I said before, every character that appears is written after I have thought about it and it has an effect on the plot. The moment when the three plot lines converge is the first climax of the plot. The development trend of the entire story has long been buried in the story. The reason why advent is used to describe the arrival of the protagonist is because he is powerful enough. Of course there will be evenly matched battles, but this is scheduled for the mid-term moment. The selling point of American comic stories is of course the characters, and the conflicts between different characters are what I think are most necessary to show... For example, Rumlow the Barbarian and Captain America, Tony and Wayne, Deadshot and Frank Custer, and the Ancient One and Gabriel (laughing). After all, this book is not a special issue of a certain hero. For example, when Iron Man is locked up, will other heroes wait for him to come out before taking action? So there will always be different events happening at the same time, so please be patient. Otherwise, who would like to kill the Ancient One on the first day, kill Thanos on the second day, kill Galactus on the third day, defeat the five gods on the fourth day, and replace the world on the fifth day? Creation is still seven days away... I will probably not change the outline, after all, I have suffered this loss... The protagonist will never be defeated, so the plot that is promoted by being defeated is all done by those characters. But the protagonist is not a wiper, so we can't let him solve everything... I think the character setting of Constantine in my novel is quite distinct, and Rumlow is also quite interesting. Rumlow's Hydra destruction plan should be worth looking forward to... The characters of the Defenders will become the main participants in a big plot in the future... Then there is the Ancient One, who is the introduction and coordinator of the protagonist's connection with the world. The current plot is still progressing steadily and there is no deviation. The existence of the barbarian ancestors represents the past glory of the barbarians. They are part of the elegance of the dark world. It was my first time to experience my current results, and I was excited but also nervous. After all, I didn't even have a few book friends that I could talk to. I will stubbornly tell this story according to the outline, and will also seriously consider everyone's suggestions. I will continue to try to increase my abilities. I hope everyone can be a little more tolerant of me. Because my home has recently been insulated for exterior wall insulation, I can only code silently late at night in order to have a relatively quiet environment. I am really tired, and inexplicably tired. When you read a book, you don't need to know who the author is, you just need to choose according to your own preferences. In the days to come, I may rarely reply to questions posted here and there, and I may not read comments very much. Everyone's opinions and doubts put too much pressure on me... I can only work hard to code until the book is completed. Of course I will still do a survey, for example, do you like the current characterization or just the plot? This kind of adjustment can still be done, but I'm afraid that if I focus solely on the plot, it will look dry... Can you guys give me your opinion?

I just finished reading Chapter 298. I know that the Hell Demon King is resurrected, and I know that there is a Hell Demon King hiding in the dark, and I also know that there is a God of Fear in Asgard, but I still stay in the Holy Mountain, and no one actively searches for relevant information. The big movements in Asgard are still unclear. You write like a barbarian who has fought countless battles? The crayfish is pretty good, is there any subjective initiative? Even weak AI can change its behavior pattern according to changes in external information. Why don't you, a living person, not change your action pattern? The way you act is no different from when you didn't know the Demon King of Hell was coming too? How did you design this plot?

For now, the author keeps talking about how awesome the protagonist is, beating up the universe-level bosses. But the fighting scenes are just like the level of Demi-Gods and Dragons. . . . . .

To be honest, I can't stand it any longer. Did the author have this in mind and write it? Jumping around, the smoothness is really bad! Goodbye!

The character of the protagonist is so awesome that he doesn't like this and can't stand that. If you are so awesome, why don't you kill him again in this world?

The live-action dubbing of the book is really awesome, and I don't have much time to read it and want to listen to the book without feeling uncomfortable 😢

What did the protagonist do to his soul, was it repaired, and how did he finally break through and become stronger? Please give me some answers. I've been reading for a long time and I still don't understand.

I don't understand Savage's attitude towards Jessica and Rumlow.

I don't know why no one is watching