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I read the book for work reasons, so I'm surprised that no one has read this book. In my opinion, there are many reasons. It can be seen from the beginning that it wants to follow traditional martial arts, but it can also be seen from the middle that it wants to add mythological concepts to turn the tide. But, the plot is slow, inconsistent, and the narrative is long-winded, which is terrible for a novel. From what I can tell, I wasn't even interested in what the main character was doing at the beginning. I was given a divination and read it after more than a dozen chapters, but I immediately lost interest in reading it. Later, I just got a feel for the protagonist, Hao Gongming appeared, and after more than ten chapters, I immediately went crazy. I know you want to write a group drama, but you have to have a protagonist. You can use the protagonist as a narrator to take everyone to see their story, but you can't throw away the protagonist and start a new one. The second is that the plot is repetitive. Fighting is indeed necessary, but fighting for the sake of fighting is very boring. The main plot relies entirely on fighting, the characterization is weak, and there is no emotional drama. Not to mention in the middle and later stages, people die for the sake of dead people, one after another. Martial arts are inherently unpopular. When you plan to write martial arts, you should have the awareness that no one will read it, make no compromises, and tell a good story. It's a pity that in the end, we both made compromises and failed to tell a good story.

Both of them agree. I want to know what kind of book Kangkang is 😏

Came here from some book review section. With two subscriptions, I wrote something on a whim ten years ago. After more than one hundred subscriptions, I committed suicide. I can't hold on until I finish 30 words, but you can make one million, 🐮!

Dear friends, if you are lucky enough to find this book, I hope you can add it to your collection. If you are lucky enough to find it interesting, I hope you can pass it on to the next two recommendation votes. If God bless your soul and you find it touching, I hope you can call your friends and come to support me. I'm so hospitable, Yu Qiannan looks at all the friends coming towards the world in the book. I also try my best to bring this red heart and a cup of aftertaste to my friends.

The male coach is not handsome. He is not handsome and has no sense of substitution.

Let's take a look at the style of Million Words and Two Subscriptions. I haven't read the book yet, but all the supporting characters like you pig's feet are men. What are you thinking?

Damn, just two subscriptions for one million words? Click on the follow button to encourage me.

Come and read the sacred book with a million words written by both of them.

I came here to review the book, and both of them ordered what book they would like to read The phoenix will come when the sky is high, and the flowers and butterflies will come.

I never dreamed that book reviews would bring so many people here

I also want to read the book about Two Uniform Determins.

I'm just curious about what book Kangkang wrote about.

This author is too miserable (ಡωಡ)

I took a look and found that the writing style is okay and has the feel of traditional martial arts novels. However, online articles now may need some refreshing and fun feeling. Many descriptions are vivid but protracted. It seems difficult to understand at the speed of ten lines at a glance. I suggest the author make the article smooth and easy to understand, and learn from it. Some of the exciting points in his novels are foreshadowing to attract readers. The author's writing skills are okay. The shortcoming is the control of the plot. The plot network must be interlocking and clear. The author's plot lines feel stuck together. In the middle, I was a little confused, and the priority of the description was not clear enough.

Originally, I wanted to think about it myself and see if I could become an amateur writer, but then I was thrown cold water on the reality of you as an author. I haven't read much of this book, but as far as the three golden chapters are concerned, the writing is quite good, much better than some more famous books. I think the reason why it is so popular is that the current audience for martial arts is really not good enough. I really can't imagine how the author persevered. If it had been anyone else, it would have been impossible to reach 1 million words. Many books have signs of becoming popular when they have 50,000 to 500,000 words. Although some are only popular for a short while, they have achieved results at least, and a small number of them have begun to ferment after being put on the shelves. The easiest way to judge a book that has good results is whether there are people who criticize it. If someone criticizes it, it will become popular. If people criticize it and they are too lazy to criticize it, then it will be really cool. Nowadays, novels that are popular are mostly with relatively novel titles. The setting of the novel is interesting and has its own set of ideas. As long as the writing is not terrible, it can actually achieve results. . . Simpler? I don't know much about it. After all, I feel like I have hope after seeing so many writers who become gods after just one book. This may be an irrational idea that I can do whatever I want, which is a bit silly. Although the author's experience has hit my idea of ​​becoming a writer, but how can I put it, things that haven't happened to me are not profound enough, and I just have this hobby. Here I want to ask the author, has this book been on any list? It doesn't matter how long it stays on the list, so I am still a little fanciful O_o,

I heard that both Million Words have been ordered. Come and take a look. The chapter names are really literary. But martial arts are not popular now! What a pity

I'll give you a monthly pass, it's so pitiful

Is it true that both orders are equal?🤭

I read Chapter 1 and the quality is very high. A few rhetorical devices are a bit awkward. But generally the quality is very high. Your performance... Plus you are affected by your performance, so your performance in the later period may not be very good. You made a mistake in writing this book, and you wasted a lot of energy. On this path of originality, three golden pieces are indispensable. The level of your first picture is really high. But unless you are famous, you won't be able to attract many people. Most households in Qidian now eat based on their merits. I don't say anything these days, that's all.

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on.

Order both and collect them. Support them.

Let's see what two uniform lengths look like.

Let's take a look at two orders 😁

Let me take a look at the million words ~ What is the concept of double ordering?

From the book review section 🤭