Chasing Deyun's Dream Started from the Car Accident in Fenhewan

Thanks to Tongyun for the introduction. In fact, I had basically decided on my evaluation of this book before it was put on the shelves. After much thought, I decided to participate in an event to talk about this book. 1. The biggest advantage of this book is the author's great love for cross talk and his in-depth understanding of related art forms, such as talk shows, Peking opera, sketches and other art forms. As a kid from the South, I really learned a lot from this book. 2. The second advantage of this book is also due to cross talk - humor. What is reflected in this book, even the jokes, cross talk, and dialogues copied from homework and edited, are all quite humorous and enough to make people smile. After talking about the advantages, let's analyze the disadvantages. Let me start off by saying that I started looking at the table of contents around chapter 50 or 60, and finally I saw the system complaining that the male protagonist had forgotten about it, so I stopped reading. 1. The biggest shortcoming should be regarded as the core shortcoming of Routine Shuangwen: the protagonist has no real opponent. A person's value is usually realized by surpassing his opponents. Therefore, the more powerful the opponent is, the more powerful the protagonist is. But it is a pity that the portrayal of Cao Jin, He Wei and others was too shallow at the beginning, making people unable to even feel pity (referring to He Wei's review of the failure of the National Day Gala). 2. The emotional drama is not strong enough and is forced to unfold. This question must have been raised by many people, so I will only briefly mention it. Both the introduction and the ending in the early stage are too brief or sloppy, causing readers to be unable to resonate with the story, let alone express emotions. Later, it can be seen that the author has been working hard on how to improve this part, and there has indeed been progress, but it is still relatively vicious and straight (referring to the description of the early female reaction to the male protagonist's dirty jokes, as well as the lyrics of the song sung to Yun Duo in The Masked Singer). 3. There are too many golden fingers in the early stage, and it is a bit difficult to hold back later. The first is the experience book obtained from the system in the early stage. The bonuses given by the appearance card to the protagonist are obviously too strong, so why is there no need for the system to appear later (because the protagonist can already solve the problem by himself). By the time a long time passed, the system had become dispensable. And if you write it like this, it will only become more and more difficult to hold on to in the future (for example, advanced props such as advanced experience books that will appear later. If ordinary props are very explosive, how can the advanced props in the future be even more explosive?). 4. The author has a deep understanding of cross talk, but his understanding of other aspects of cross talk is very lacking. For example, when writing about Gu Yunduo, Shen Feihua, and Wan Moumou (especially Wan Moumou, I'm sorry I forgot their names), these rich second generations, they fell into a rather rigid and one-sided level. Secondly, at the beginning, when it was said that the male protagonist exposed the fake bag in Wangfujing, there was a lot of foreshadowing, but the evidence was very pale (and it looked like it was pinched by random people). 5. It is not shameful to copy from the public, but I hope the author can share at the end of the chapter what he copied and what he copied. It is both a distinction and a sharing. Why not? Summary: This book's description of cross talk and jokes is very touching to readers, but its shortcomings in other aspects are also obvious. Writing is like constructing a dream. It can be bizarre and incredible, but when the things that appear in the dream are distorted, the dream will wake up. I hope that the author can continue to work hard, observe and experience life more while studying cross talk, and continue to work hard!

This is a top-notch system novel. The protagonist travels to a different world, possesses a system, and is skilled in speaking, learning and singing. Let's see how I can tell you a cross talk Master Hou, you are still alive. Please go out less often. Uncle Yu, I think you'd better look better if you permed your head. Aunt Yu is so fair. Kong Laosan, you must not ride a motorcycle, eat barbecue, set off fireworks, or tease dogs in the past few years Chang Le, Yu Qian is drinking next door, you have the following options A. Take advantage of him Don't pay attention to perm his head while drinking B. Kneel down three times and knock down nine times to beg him to accept you as his disciple C. Let him kneel down three times and knock down nine times to beg you to become your disciple Chang Le, Hou Yuewen is about to go out at this time, what do you think? Make your choice A. Treat him to a feast of vegetables to hint him B. Take him for a luxurious physical examination C. Ask him to make a will as soon as possible Chang Le, Cao Jin is leaving the rose garden at this time, you have the following choices A. Go out without permission, chop into minced meat B. Break the cup as a sign, support the master and call the class leader C. Taunt Cao Jin, don't starve to death when you go out

I feel that many books recently are 2000, which is 8-9 pages Are they all going to the palace?

I have read this book for more than a year, starting with Drunken Fenhewan, and now I don't know where I am. I haven't watched it in a long time, and I'm not even a deacon now. I always feel that Deyun Society's cross talk is suitable for listening to. If you read it, it will be more associative. No matter what, Xianxiang now has a million plus, and he is still full-time, but why is the update still so slow? Although I don't watch it, I can tell you with confidence that the sex is short and weak. I hope Sprite can continue to work hard. Anyway, it is the first book I read at Qidian. I hope it will get better and better!

I have been stocking up for a month and even changed my name. Recommendation votes are given!

Deyunshe? It was fine before, but now it smells like rice balls

This is the best cross talk novel I have ever read. Keep it up. Don't be a eunuch anymore. Book it all for me.

There are a lot of broken rules in Deyun Club, and there are also a lot of bullshit and dirty things. If you don't want to be Lao Guo's dog, then don't think about it. Yue Yunpeng said that the disciples who have walked Lao Guo's dogs are his disciples 🤫 The reason is that Lao Guo becomes his disciple when he is not popular! , Everyone else is the icing on the cake, you have to be really capable to get up, look at Deyun Club now licking Master Guo!

It turns out that I really like this sentence from Deyun Society. I am a primary school student in the cross talk world. Now that I think about it, most of you have never graduated from elementary school. This is just putting money on your own face. . .

... There is actually no problem with this punctuation mark. The author must be a core member of our agency and perfectly meets the highest requirements. One look at the use of this punctuation mark shows that he must have not graduated from elementary school 😃

If Cao were replaced by himself, nine out of ten people would not do it. If you earn 100 yuan at a time, the master will give you 2 yuan. Think about it, what would anyone really do? But later they had a falling out, and the remaining disciples' salaries increased. In the end, Cao became a traitor. To be honest, both sides are wrong.

Come on, as long as it's not in charge, I'll order it all when it's released.

As long as you praise Guo Degang's cross talk, we are half brothers.

There are many novels written about Deyun, but this one is the first one like Champagne! Respect everyone's development. The protagonist does not take away opportunities and goes his own way. This is what I love most about this novel! Champagne really loves Deyun, and Deyun boys and girls also like Champagne's works. Although he updated the chain, although he was reluctant to use punctuation marks. But his intentions and intentions alone are worthy of praise!

I suddenly discovered why cross talk is a language art. Sure enough, it is so funny and classic cross talk lines. If there are no awesome cross talk actors to interpret them, it would be very embarrassing and uncomfortable to rely only on cold words. I used to find it funny when I watched Guo Degang and Yu Qian's cross talk. But now I don't feel anything at all when I only read words without language. I admire the craftsmanship of my ancestors.

Sorry, a cross talk novel has 900 chapters, which is really daunting for me.

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It's really funny to write a novel in Champagne, it's so joyful and easy to make people laugh. Everyone's life is so stressful, so reading articles is for relaxation and entertainment. Champagne succeeds in doing this. Although it is an adaptation of a joke, you can add your own creativity while adapting it. Reading this novel is like listening to a cross talk. The funny words between the lines can really make me laugh. The champagne is really good, let me praise it vigorously.

Good updating habits are conducive to cultivating readers to follow up on updates. Champagne, your book feels like it could be better, but the update is really frustrating. The book review area has held a perfect attendance activity three times, but failed three times... How do you think this makes readers want to follow up? The book is a good book, suitable for relaxation and entertainment after get off work. The writing is light, interesting and humorous. Not only the cross talk jokes are funny, but also the daily interactions between Shen Changle and other characters. In fact, the entire novel is a large-scale comedy scene that can make people laugh all the time. But you must know that such a relaxing sketch seems to be unburdensome. If you get the fake anti-theft chapter one day, you will probably be too lazy to pursue it. After all, there is no suspense that I want to know urgently. Everyone is laughing. It doesn't matter if I laugh a few days later. So, champagne, when will you be able to flourish? Get rid of short and weak labels? Then I feel that in the cross talk adaptation, Champagne actually did a good job and incorporated a lot of jokes. I think the cross talk part is pretty good, although some of the old jokes may be familiar to everyone. But it's an old joke when you watch it live. Who can be completely innovative in every scene? Then you don't have to write a novel about Champagne. Or maybe, all of them are innovative, but when the time comes, they won't have a sense of involvement. In fact, everyone loves you deeply and takes responsibility for you. Do you think the water is probably the place where the song is copied? After all, the main purpose is to watch the cross talk, and the songs are not that important. If you watch too much, you will feel that it is boring, right? Anyway, cheers for champagne!

Many young fans appeared in the Deyun Small Theater where school had just started. Before the start of school, Shen Changle specially performed a new cross talk. Shen Changle: "There are so many people today, and I can see there are a lot of new faces. Thank you all for coming all the way to support us, and there are so many gifts. Don't send flowers next time, just give cash." Hou Zhen: "Good guy." As the audience cheered, the cross talk slowly unfolded. Shen Changle: "Just kidding, I have to introduce myself before I get on stage. My name is Shen Changle. Let's tell you a cross talk." Hou Zhen was helpless: "Shall we discuss it? If you don't introduce me on stage, don't make gestures to me, okay?" Shen Changle: "No introduction is needed, Hou Zhen, the eldest grandson of Hou Baolin, the master of cross talk." The audience gave a burst of warm applause. Shen Changle continued: "We are two of the few highly educated people in Deyun Society." Hou Zhen: "Wait a minute, what kind of high education do I have?" Shen Changle: "Harbin Buddhist College, I went to the Harbin Buddhist College for half of the time and came back to talk about cross talk." Hou Zhen: "Oh, what's going on! Deyun Society is all literary. Hua desert, average education dropped out of junior high school. "What about you?" Shen Changle said proudly: "I am from the Imperial Electric Factory!" Hou Zhen curled his lips: "Like Harvard, from the Imperial Electric Factory?" Shen Changle continued steadily, from the husband in the movie "Widows" in which he participated, to the mice in "The Wheel", to the stuffing in "Meat Buns", extending to his college days, turning around and talking about the most unforgettable things in college. Shen Changle: "The most unforgettable thing about my university is bed check." Hou Zhen: "How do you say it?" Shen Changle: "The hygiene requirements of university dormitories are very high. They require clean and tidy floors, neatly placed items, and trash cans. There can't be any garbage in it." Hou Zhen: "Wait a minute, there can't be any garbage in the trash can. What's in it?" Shen Changle: "Nonsense, have you ever seen a wife in a wife cake?" Hou Zhen: "It's true. ..." Shen Changle: "Our school was pretty good at that time. The more prestigious the university, the stricter the bedtime inspections were. It was like the school next door to Harvard University, where Zhang, the female student union director, was as thick as a black bear and as strong as an ox. He has a naughty body, a pair of red eyebrows, and his eyes are as thick as iron brushes. He is as ferocious as a canopy, and he is invincible. " Hou Zhen said helplessly: "Is this Minister Zhang?" Yi smiled: "This is Li Kui! You can't do it without seeing the faces of the seniors clearly. From now on, except for the six of them checking the bed, no one will be able to control them!" Hou Zhen: "What a guy!" Shen Changle: "Men, women, old and young, all have to shout "Xue" Hello, sister, there are eight pots placed in the dormitory, and they are not even a little bit crooked. Back then, Liu Huaqiang didn't understand the rules and didn't ask his senior sister to go to school. Zhang Dashuai was beaten to pieces while hiding a garbage bag on the train." Hou Zhen: "Oh!" Shen Changle continued: "The principal talked to Senior Sister Zhang and had a bad attitude, so she was expelled. Sun Wukong bought a thermos and didn't put it all together, so he was forced to face the wall for 500 years to redeem himself." Hou Zhen: "Hey, this is the senior from the department next to my university. So powerful?" Shen Changle: "This is not the Department of Chinese Language, the Department of Physics, the Department of Economics and Management..." Hou Zhen: "That is?" Shen Changle: "Fuck you!"

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