The Trainer Starts with a Contracted Tsundere Cat

This cover looks a bit familiar, it clashes with other books

What's in the brackets at the end (a kind of elf) (a kind of legendary elf) This is very funny.

After seeing the latest chapter, to be honest, when I looked back at the comments and chapter list, I decided to abandon the book because I just couldn't stand it. There are several reasons for abandoning the book. 1: The competition is too long. More than a hundred chapters are all about the competition, and other novels are already very long at 10 chapters. 2: The subject is unclear. I don't understand whether you write about elves or love. The first half is about elves and the second half is about love. 3: The heroine has so many roles, why does she write about her sister?

Although I understand, I am still unhappy. . . .

There are too many interjections, mud horses, cowhide, and snails, and there are parentheses at the end, and there are more than 50 chapters. It really challenges the limits of others, and it is really off-putting! One or two is fine, but if you keep doing this, it will only persuade you to quit.

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I feel like I'm reading a romance novel.

I kind of want to give up on the awkwardness of pretending to be cool. I don't feel like interacting with the elves. I feel weird about the training. Cultivating the elves relies entirely on System B. I don't know what the author wants to write

You can take two or three days to write for any test, but it's the same old routine of pretending to be B. If you have that time, you might as well write a practical assessment. Don't forget what the theme of your book is. The point is that even pretending to be B can't bring you pleasure, so it's better not to write at all.

The book is a good book, but there are too many swear words. It's really uncomfortable to read.

Brother, Secretary Kim has seen too much 😅😅😅

Write slowly! Overall the outline is pretty good! Come on! !

The author greatly hopes that you will not abandon the book. Support you

Why continue to feud? Why pretend to be like this?

It feels similar to "Starting from the Contract Elf"

Luo must be the heroine. If not, I will quit the Internet literary circle 😁

The subject matter is good, but the plot is not that good.

I am currently reading Chapter 58, and the reason for writing this review is that I really like this kind of subject. The current feeling is that I can't see it. I feel like the author's writing is a bit childish. Give a few examples. The male protagonist said that he did well in the written examination, and Lin Ran said that he was wrong about you. The setting of the eldest lady being overly self-aware and competitive is okay, but for a written test where the results will be released sooner or later, it feels childish to question her so seriously before the results are released, as if she has an IQ problem. For another example, the protagonist helped his suddenly rich friend get a training plan. The protagonist was embarrassed to say that his friend didn't show any reaction at all. Brothers are still settling accounts, not to mention who doesn't know that the protagonist is short of money? His friend could just say symbolically, "If you need money in the future, feel free to ask for it." It would be better than saying nothing at all. However, I look like someone giving candy to a primary school student. Just say thank you and that's it. It's very childish. Competitive people have strong self-esteem. They cannot accept being slapped in the face over and over again when they say I will surpass you. "I will surpass you" they say at most once. In addition to verbal descriptions, Lin Ran's competitiveness can also be expressed through demeanor descriptions. Always talking about "overtaking someone" is not competitive, it is the jealousy of a primary school student. Funny and nonsensical are not the same as childish, I hope the author is more confused. The above three places particularly impressed me. Different worlds may have different ways of dealing with people, but the basics are the same. The characters in this book are basically based on such events, which makes me feel that the characters in it are particularly abnormal: they seem to be young and serious, but mature and overall seem very childish. I hope the author will be thoughtful when writing, pay more attention to character expressions and scene design outside the plot, and polish the overall plot. I like this subject very much, but if I continue like this, let alone subscribing, I have no desire to continue reading.

Does my sister force the ending?