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I have seen the first twenty chapters. Generally speaking, the author's writing is good. The subject matter is quite creative and attractive, but there are two parts that are still a bit toxic. Reading the comments, I found that many friends complained about these two points. The first point is that after the protagonist won the lottery in Chapter 8, he remitted the money he earned to his mother and uncle. I understand that the author said that it was not easy for the mother and uncle to send the protagonist to study abroad and raise him. It is quite filial to want to repay the favor as soon as possible. However, Internet articles are not the real society. Most people still want to feel good when reading Internet articles. If you get a golden finger, you will definitely not be short of money in the future. Under normal circumstances, you should It is to make the best use of the limited resources at hand to obtain the maximum profit. If you want to make money, you must invest. In the previous chapter, the protagonist has just remitted the money he earned to his family. In the next chapter, he suddenly prompted that the free time of the system has arrived, and he needs to transfer money to upgrade his membership. Then he called his family to get the money back and borrowed tens of thousands of dollars more. This contrast makes the protagonist feel too unstable, which is very disgusting and not fun at all. The second point is that the protagonist in Chapter 12 went to buy lottery tickets online and was deceived by a phishing website. Please author, you just said in the previous chapter that major hotels in Las Vegas have their own formal websites. The police are also extremely strict in monitoring illegal websites. But he was deceived by a phishing website? How can a legitimate website be deceived by a phishing website? Then I was defrauded of money and went to a bank to get a loan. What happened? I had a cheat and got worse and worse. I guess the author wanted to write that the protagonist would not get rich easily after getting the golden finger, and then set up a few hurdles to enrich the plot. However, I think this plot is really too dramatic and makes people feel that the protagonist is too mentally retarded. It is completely unnecessary. In other words, buying lottery tickets is about accumulating capital in the early stage. It is impossible to keep buying lottery tickets. If you really keep winning lottery tickets, the white and underworld will target you. It is better to be cheated when the plot develops and you speculate in stocks and futures and open an investment company. There are many such things in the real world. Writing this way makes people feel that the protagonist does not have enough experience at most. To be honest, there is a legitimate website and you can be cheated. This really pays IQ tax. I accidentally talked too much about QAQ. Generally speaking, the author still writes well and has good ideas. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

The title and subject of your book are good, the writing is clear and the ideas are clear. It can be put on the shelves, it can make money, and it can be a small hit, but it is too difficult to become a big hit. As we all know, China Literature belongs to the Tencent family and has been at loggerheads with Bytedance.

I just read the beginning and thought it was good. I just hope that I want a harem and I am not opposed to one-night stands. However, it is best not to fall in love and hook up with others at the same time and think that you are dedicated to love. This is the routine of a life-style male god. At the same time, he thinks he is deeply affectionate for the heroine and then goes to the hotel for a threesome.

There is really no need to add the character of the cousin, which would lower the quality of the work. I understand the author's idea very well. Adding a cousin can usually be cute to please readers, and it can also improve the word count. Secondly, it can cover up the shortcomings of its weak plot. But you made the cousin's character too superficial and too artificial. Do you know that when you wrote the dialogue between the protagonist and the cousin, I retched three times? Many times, instead of writing bad emotional scenes, it is better to write more plots. If the subject matter is good, the plots are okay. I hope the author can write better.

I'm confused because I have to deal with lottery tickets. Look at the stock market. Aren't futures good? There's no need to worry about it.

So many black people know that the protagonist has the ability to predict gambling. It is really hard for me to believe that humans can not be greedy and kidnap the protagonist. Especially black people with low IQs.

Let me go, there has been no update for 7 months, can I still get today's guide? Did all the editors at Qidian drink urine?

The creativity is good, and the writing and plot are killer!

The author definitely has a beautiful sister,

Very good, interesting, I will keep one in my collection