Summoning Scroll of All Things

That's it from the beginning, talking about the system and erasing it. Wouldn't it be better to be more plain? Your half-life treasure does not necessarily have to summon things from other worlds! Isn't there such a thing as a secret book in the world? Is there no treasure of genius? When you become awesome in the future, can't you think about summoning things from other worlds?

It's so miserable. It's almost 300,000 words and not many people have read it. Chapter 3 persuades Daqi to quit.

Would anyone like to bring in a protagonist who gives up struggling and giving up on life before he reaches a desperate situation? ? ? This is not a waste, this is a real waste... It is better to describe a protagonist who found that the scroll was useless, worked hard to survive, and died in a bloody battle... If you insist on his death once.

I am an old bookworm. Personally, I don't like the beginning very much, I don't like the protagonist's character very much, I don't like the system and erasure… in short, I don't like the puppet protagonist.