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Quite imaginative! Collected! Come on update! Welcome to visit us again!

It is best to write some books that are in line with the current trend, such as rebirth articles, dog food articles, etc., So that more people will read them.

This is my first time officially writing a light novel, and there are a lot of things I don't understand. I don't have the capital to find an artist to draw illustrations. If you have any comments about the novel, be sure to put them forward!

Received, well written, keep up the good work!

I think some paragraphs are a bit too long. Maybe it's my habit. I feel tired after reading a large paragraph.

Emmm, it's just a personal habit. If I can't stand a long paragraph, I recommend the author to revise it when he has time. There are also chapter titles that are not attractive, and I don't want to open them after just one glance. Plus the reading experience is not very good... emmmm

It is recommended to add a title to each chapter, otherwise many people will just leave after reading the introduction and read the chapters without titles. This is how I read novels.

The writing and the plot are okay. The first chapter could be divided into different parts. It would be more discouraging. Newbies still have to follow the general principles. There is no other way. In addition, just pay attention to other details. It's not a big problem. Come on!

Em, it seems that the author likes to play games very much? The first chapter is all about fighting, which doesn't feel very engaging. The description of details is still very good, but the plot of the story is not clear, and there are many complicated places that are difficult to understand. Personal opinion, cheers~

Let's occupy a building first and come on 😁

Come on, come on, come on 🌹🌹🌹

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What a great write-up, keep it up and remember to visit again.

I am here with my new book "Become a Rich Prince". I would like to ask the author, I am also a novice. How can I attract readers to read my book?

Let's take a look. I changed it and deleted it to 45,000. Let's see how many others have written (laughing and crying)