Global National War Game

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง Both are fighting 😭😭

It's really well written, I hope I don't want to be a eunuch anymore

Well, let me make some suggestions by the way (from my personal point of view, I just hope that the author will think about it and complete this work better) First, I hope there will be some commanders and management heroic units. After all, it is difficult for the protagonist to be comprehensive in this kind of war; Second, I hope the protagonist's character can adapt more quickly. In fact, I was a little annoyed when I first met the two women and felt that the protagonist was a bit of a licker; Finally, I hope the author's writing will get better and better, and I hope this book can be completed smoothly.

There are very few books of this type, and they are easy to write. Come on, author

The starting point is 500,000 words before starting to work hard. If you have confidence in yourself, stick to it.

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It is best not to involve wars between countries at the beginning, and the character creation can be more fleshed out.

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Okay, okay, it's a bit like Eternal Kingdom, which is pretty good.

Let's talk about the arms and attributes. There should be heroes or generals if there are arms. Isn't the attributes of military classes and classes too suppressed? Doesn't that mean that one person becomes a god? Is it still necessary to write down the arms?

It looks a bit familiar, the introduction looks a bit familiar

What is the role of the fat man? Personally, I feel that his appearance has little effect. The role of the tool man is not reflected, except for knowing a little information.

Stop writing some hydrology and reading several chapters without any plot.

Dear author, I feel that there are too many villains in your novel and too few decent descriptions. I feel that there are only a few passers-by who are decent. There are many villains and they can be found everywhere. There are also rich and powerful people. Give them a little space. The country's combat power can appear a little. It's not enough to describe a few policemen. There is emotion in reading novels. People who read this subject generally like plots that are smoother. If there are too many villains, some readers will be unable to control their emotions (the sense of involvement is too strong and they will be angry).

Basic knowledge, information, etc., Try to show as little as possible, it feels like the word count is too low haha, if the situation changes significantly, you can come out and read the basic information~

It's too little. Let's put it on a bookshelf for a few days.

What does that fat man do? I feel like something bad will happen. Everything depends on money.