Traveling Through the Masses in the Late Ming Dynasty

This post is a complaint area for this book. Please add it to the top. If you have any comments, please post them here. I am a newbie and it is my first time writing a novel. Please give me more advice. Please point out my mistakes and I will seriously revise them!

Which part of the late Ming Dynasty is this?

Buy more ships and cargo ships, hire seamen to sign long-term contracts, and go directly to the Americas for development. First, inspect the base areas on the west coast of modern America, and go back and forth for about 3 months. As long as the population replenishment can keep up, hundreds of thousands of people can be sent a year. Taiwan serves as a forward transfer station. The people sent here will first do a good job in spreading epidemic prevention, select young people for military training, and then pack them and send them to the Americas for half-farming and half-fighting, and directly push them across with musketeers and cavalry.

The travel time is too long, and there are still many things that cannot be framed. Maybe the author hopes to treat the Ming Dynasty as an industry and slowly develop it, so he can write more content. In fact, it is not necessary. There are many things that can be written, such as the handling of the relationship with the Ming Dynasty, and the relationship with the Western colonists The handling of relationships, the relationship with the people of the Ming Dynasty, the relationship with the Japanese pirates, etc. Can also tell the world that the truth occurs within the range of artillery, political power comes from the barrel of a gun, and it is very easy to write millions of words on internal affairs such as the education of the people. The main thing is that it is enjoyable to read.

If you take people through time travel and don't investigate them, then just accept them once they arrive, aren't you afraid of leaking the secrets? It's too adaptable. It can cure cancer, but it's not easy to choose people. Choose some capable or skilled people who have cancer. There is no planning at all. After earning 8.5 Million from the first transaction, you should sell some building materials and build a small base first, instead of buying some industrial machines. The place to stay is not ready yet, so we just do this and that, and the locals are grabbing it, and if they don't, you are grabbing that one. It's such a failure in writing.

A little strange! Chuanzhong has guns and cannons that are more than 200 years ahead of the competition, as well as a 10,000-ton steel ship. Are they still afraid of Zheng Zhilong? ? It's just a group of pirates, just a fleet of mostly wooden ships of one to two hundred tons. Just use two steel wheels to ram them at full speed. Just raising waves can capsize these wooden ships.

I feel like the author is very sophisticated, Mark~

The more people there are, the greater the possibility that secrets will be exposed. This is inevitable. The consequences of secret exposure are far greater than the benefits brought by more people. The ratio of risks to benefits is too great.

I am the author, and I welcome readers to leave comments and discuss the next plot together!

Almost every novel in which more than one person wears characters at the same time is a bleak business. Not many people saw it!

Are you here to discuss the plot together? La La La

Group chat is easy to be blocked, and the information and verification need to be rigorous. The game of thoughts and ideas, the darkness of human nature, etc., Test your writing skills.

It feels more and more boring as I follow it. It feels like reading a history textbook or listening to a history class. More than 80% of the text is narrated by the author. It feels like it is not watching the time traveler again, but a modern person narrating the historical events of that period. Everything is from the author's perspective, not the time traveler's perspective, and readers are seldom used to understand the situation through the time traveler's mouth. Basically, the author is constantly narrating. In the group travel stories I read before, some of the main characters had pig's feet or all of them were pig's feet. However, this story gave me the feeling that there were no pig's feet, and the time-traveling characters were just ordinary chess pieces in a big event, no different from the natives, and there were not many dialogues.

I have read a few books and read them, but they are all about colonial foreign countries. They have no sense of involvement and are too broad. I still hope that this book will slowly liberate the Ming Dynasty, have a sense of substitution, and add more characters and events.

The latest chapters are a bit rough. I came here to read the novel, not the popular science and history. There are also too many descriptions of the geographical environment. Not much is told about the plot, and there are very few character descriptions. It's all about popular science. If you keep doing this, I'll probably give up.

In ancient times, you could call yourself someone, me, me, me, niche, or me. Don't call yourself "boy", which is too ugly, too servile, and too cheap.

It's a good novel, but it's a pity that the time travel also involves a slut, which is so disappointing.