The League of Villains of All Heavens

Too many self-talks. Also, the first copy is too long. After a world with the lowest force value is forced to be so high-end, high martial arts, fantasy, how to write, good themes are written badly.

The author's writing skills are not good enough, but he just wants to make fun of the word count. Yue Buqun's speech is just like that of modern people. Ancient actors have a catchphrase of "ya ya bah". I don't think you should write about ancient times.

I, Shen Nong, have a profound Taoism and have long ignored such little poisons! This is a dividing line 🔨———— After reading these dozens of chapters, I feel that the most poisonous point is the psychological fluctuation of the protagonist who shows his talent and refuses to kneel when receiving orders. This is indeed a bit poisonous, and it can be said to go against the low-key approach he mentioned earlier. Don't judge modern people, modern people do not take the blame. This is the author who has read too many Shuangwen novels, and looks like a dragon. I feel like the part about pretending to be dumb at the beginning is just a little joke made by the author. Don't take it seriously, there is no need to criticize! Overall, this book is a good book. The author has just started writing a book. I feel it is still very good. Everyone can support it! Big cheers for the author, I'll keep it for two days before reading it, and I'd like to show my respect by giving you a few recommendation votes! (Manual registration🐶)

No matter what others say, the author will update it in large chunks.

I haven't updated for so long. Is it because of cutting?

I really don't want to waste my traffic on a piece of shit.

After grinding for a long time, I wrote hundreds of chapters in the first world of The Deer and the Cauldron 🙂

I'm so convinced that the broken jar broke. After the end of The Deer and the Cauldron, what was written was bullshit. You will become a big boss in the future, and then someone will send someone to lick you now? Shit, then there is no need to develop geniuses in the future, just let your future self provide resources to your present self. The time is confusing, the settings are confusing, the plot is confusing, and the relationships are confusing. I don't even know what you think. This type of book ranks you first and last. I'll leave it at that, if you can finish the book (not unfinished, normal ending, more than 1.5 Million words). I live broadcast from the palace! Become the last eunuch in China!

When the emperor issued the imperial edict, other princes knelt down to accept it. The protagonist stood there and said that this was his true intention. There must be some occasion when he said this, right? Does the author want to express that the protagonist is different? The protagonist is a modern person and must follow the rules of that era. Of course, if the protagonist is invincible, then you think I didn't mention the above. 😐😐

I finally gave up. Are you writing about the heavens? You wrote about time travel, The Deer and the Cauldron, right? You wrote about the astronomical texts! You are actually able to write a world consciousness in a world with low martial arts in The Deer and Cauldron that may not be found in a world with high martial arts. He also wrote that even the children of destiny in the world of cultivating immortals may not necessarily have his awesome son of destiny (Wei Xiaobao).

Seeing that Wei Xiaobao finally became an eunuch, I felt relieved

Don't others say that Yue Buqun is the master of a sect and has no way of governing people? As a group leader, he was passive and slow when faced with the upgrade task. He was a ruthless person who committed suicide in order to practice martial arts and ended up being labeled as a bastard.

It's so long-winded, the first chapter is full of disdain for my colleagues, thinking it's a high-level comment, but it turns out that it's just like a bird's eye view, and it's not as good as what others have written.

🤓 Please call me the Prophecy Emperor. As expected, 600,000 is less than six eunuchs.

Let's discuss some of my thoughts on this book and the parts that I feel are quite toxic. 1: Prince of time travel, you entered the sect's mansion, and you knew that the sect's mansion was to cultivate strong people, but you still hid your strength. Isn't this cerebral palsy? ? ? Let's take an example from another perspective. For example, if you are a student, the teacher says that you are very talented in learning Mathematical Olympiad, and then you hide your strength? ? ? Second, the strength of the Ming Dynasty should be higher than that of Swordsman, and martial arts are easier to obtain, because the royal family has them. You don't want to show that you have the value to cultivate, and to obtain resources, you have to struggle with the martial arts of other worlds? ? In a word, I don't have the strength yet. Liu has hidden talent. This is cerebral palsy. It's very uncomfortable to watch. I won't watch it anymore.

Does it feel strange at first? Yue Buqun has a system, and he also invites the protagonist to join the group. The protagonist's soul is as strong as iron and courage, and the god Zhu Zhu is ignored. Then the first mission in the group went to The Deer and the Cauldron. Then I jumped directly to the published chapter. To be honest, it was not well written. First of all, there is a "way of heaven" in the world of The Deer and the Cauldron, and what kind of destined protagonist is Wei Xiaobao? Can't be killed? It would be too much to try too hard to cheat Wei Xiaobao just for the sake of the plot. Also, "The Deer and the Cauldron" took more than 400,000 words to be completed. …………

Little brother, what's going on? After The Deer and the Cauldron came out, you have such a good idea. Why did you write so many chapters at the beginning of The Deer and the Cauldron? It makes people want to stop reading. Write it according to your current imagination. You will be the strongest shopkeeper in the next book. Come on, write more about the interactions and battles between all the organizations in the world, such as the Lord God and the chat group. Foundation, system merchants, time traveler's guild, Ten Thousand Realms Tower, Zhutian City, Immortal Qin, Shenhan, Buddha, Tang, Dao and Song, the original world that is the best in the world can be written in Wu Ming, and there are also various mixed martial arts worlds, not too many, as long as the author has a big imagination, and the writing is not too boastful, if your book is not popular, I will give you an Olivier. It's just a matter of imagination. The exchanges, births, and confrontations of the major organizations in the heavens. Don't read hundreds of pictures in the world behind you. Anyway, I won't look at a world with so many pictures. Thirty or so pictures are about the same. I hope this book is positioned as the exchanges, confrontations, and births of the major organizations in the heavens.

This Ming Dynasty's exciting plot really dragged the world along. Finally returned to Ming Dynasty. What the hell, just skip it and go to the new world. Abandon the book! Brothers. This author's brain is different from ours

At the beginning, I said that others are pretending to be cool and treat the ancients as fools. If I don't do the same, is it okay? Under normal circumstances, he would be exposed by opening his mouth, and his words, deeds, and behavioral habits would be even more stupid than pretending to have amnesia. I said it myself, the round one is like a hammer.

Tianmingliu is an absolute failure. The best you can do is to accept Wei Xiaobao's luck if it's a bit better. How could such an arrow come, someone else happened to block it for him. And it can directly affect other people's perceptions. Especially since other villains can influence them, why can't you? How likely are you to say that someone can influence the world of "The Deer and the Cauldron"? You can even influence people in other worlds, so why are you special? Logically speaking, those of you who have traveled through time are protected by your system organizations. Otherwise, people like this who still have destiny will be killed by meteorites falling from the sky. If someone comes to practice special powers in the future, they will not be able to use them in other worlds. This kind of low-martial world can affect people's thinking. At a higher level, did you just travel through time and be directly transformed into a slave?

Has this been reported? Sudden 360 degree lick? Those who cannot be killed and cannot enter China are all in China! Either blend in, or kill until all those who haven't blended in are dead, in which case everyone will blend in! Protection is a bit disgusting!

It's disgusting to read, Chapter 33 is very poisonous, a bunch of villains feel very friendly when they see Wei Xiaobao, 😰, when the protagonist kills Wei Xiaobao, there are Qing soldiers coming to help block it 😰, the way of heaven in your low martial world is really active! The writing is very abnormal. Except for the protagonist, all the other characters are imbeciles? ? Personally, it's really hard for me. I was looking forward to reading a novel, but it turned out like this. Now that this book is on the shelves, it is reasonable for me as a reader to comment (bad comments), right?

The protagonist was originally a small character, but suddenly a big boss god came. The main god was described as being very powerful, and then this big boss god knelt down and licked the protagonist. The turn was too fast. The protagonist should become stronger little by little, but the author suddenly writes about how awesome the protagonist will be in the future, and the sense of immersion in the protagonist suddenly disappears. Anyway, the protagonist will definitely be awesome in the future, and there is no desire to read it.