Shenhanji

The writing is interesting and worth recommending!

The writing is quite good and worth reading!

I have invested in collecting it. The whole book is still very good. It is a new fantasy genre and the calligraphy is very good. I have watched Douluo Dalu, the third young master of the Tang family, and your beginning is somewhat similar to this one, and may be more or less borrowed from it. A few reminders. The first one is your introduction at the beginning. It seems that it is of no use if you delete it directly. I glanced at it and skipped through it. It was so dense that I couldn't understand what it was. The world view and so on still seeped into the article. Don't point it out at the beginning. Generally, it will be difficult to read and it will easily persuade people to quit. Secondly, your introduction and the following text appear in a long and dense paragraph. Online articles are usually read on mobile phones. If you write a long paragraph that is densely packed, it will be difficult to read, and it will be easy to delete it irritably, so it is better to change it and break it into several paragraphs. The third point can actually be ignored, that is, the plot does not have much refreshing feeling. For example, it makes people think of it as soon as it is mentioned. I have watched so many that I can't remember the name of the protagonist as soon as I return. I haven't seen much, and I can only see these problems for the time being. The plot of the whole book is very fast and smooth. There seems to be no discontinuity. The rhythm is also very good in all aspects. Keep up the good work! I'll give you a reward when you sign the contract!

Book friends, thank you for your collection and recommendation! I will try my best to write better and more exciting!

I have written almost 30 chapters. Can any book lover give me a review?

Thank you for your support! Your support is my motivation!

I read the chapter titles... Waste material flow, dissolution of engagement, divine book, the book spirit is an old man, and then borrows the golden finger to rebuild, and counterattacks the genius. It is inevitable to think of Dou Po

This book is a fantasy + calligraphy style, not a waste material style! 🙂