The Reincarnation of Zhou Yu

Give me some advice. I read a lot of fanfiction, and a lot of it crashed. 1. The progress was too fast and I didn't write anything later. The original plot was not released. 2. Imposing an external world. 3. Others. I will focus on 2 If you want to add other worldviews, you can do it. I think the King of Glory you added is very good, and Daoji is also good, but what is the ultimate class? You have to know that King of Glory, 80% of people in Daoji know it. The ultimate group of people who have never seen it have no idea what you are writing about. They will know more after reading it. . . The world view of the Ultimate Class is greater than that of the Super Gods. The worldview is also very different. To add other worlds, the most important thing is familiarity. Not everything is known to readers. Once there are things that readers don't know, a few are fine, but if there are too many, they won't be able to understand. I have said so much and hope it is well written. I like it very much. Come on＾0＾~＾0＾~＾0＾~＾0＾~ I hope it will be helpful to you.

In fact, when I first started watching it, I thought it would be good. But when I saw the author adding some other worlds into it, I couldn't stand it anymore. I personally don't like these random novels. If you mess around like this, you will jump, and the power system will be confused, Jigong's one, Daoxuan's one, and then in the Netherworld, the Super Seminary does not know if there are gods, Jigong's one, Lieyang didn't come, where is the heaven to let those gods come down to earth to help Jigong. Just write it as simply as this, don't add other worlds, it will be very stable. I even wonder if the author has changed the style before and after. I rewarded it because I really liked the first part, but I can't stand it anymore. The last sentence, Super Seminary is a technological universe, enter some The Taoist, the Buddha, and the Netherworld are a bit messy. Even if you want to resurrect Xiao Qiao and the others, you have to resurrect according to the flow of technology. Morgana's younger brothers are resurrected without mentioning resurrection. In the end, the 1500 points I rewarded are because I really liked the previous chapters. That's it. I'm so offended. Wang Haihan.

It feels great, especially when talking about Zhou Yu's lines in Three Kingdoms Killing

Very good idea. I hope the plot and unnecessary characters can be streamlined later. Too many people, 25! Add the other miscellaneous things you add that are already there! It's difficult to write later! In fact, only about 10 are enough, too many will be messy! In layman's terms, if you want to write big, you want to add a little bit of everything, and you don't want to give up anything. One pot stew

It is recommended to start reading directly from chapter 50 onwards. Reading the first 50 chapters is as if you have not read it. The first 50 chapters are useful.

I entered the "World of Cultivation" at the age of four; I practiced the "Heavenly Sword Royal Dao" at the age of five; I practiced the magical skill "Nine Transformations of the True Spirit" at the age of six; I went through the "Nine Strikes"; I finally mastered this skill to great success at the age of fourteen; From then on, I became "famous", and everyone knew it; I got the "Throne of the Divine Seal" at the age of fifteen; I inherited the "Emperor" at the age of eighteen, and from then on I became "unique in the world" Known as the "Prodigy of a Generation", he was called the "Killing God" by the world because of too many killings and "blood-stained life". However, the long practice of "Shinto" will never end. He was riding the "Spirit Boat", "Wu Po Jiuxiao" to "Douluo Continent" with the "Six Paths Immortal", "Master of the Avenue", "Xuan Emperor", "Sword Ancestor" and others to "Douluo Continent", and founded the "Peerless Tang Sect". By chance. Under a "Blood-Stained Totem" in "Holy Ruins". He discovered the "Martial Tomb" and obtained the unique skills inherited from the "Martial God", the "Zisu Origin Jue", and wanted to "fight to break the sky", "swallow the starry sky", and "cover the sky" with one hand. Later, he accidentally entered the "Eternal Life Realm" and caused a huge disaster. Known by the "Holy King", he led the "Dragon Blood God of War", "War Lord", and "Crazy God", and invited several immortal masters from the "Dragon Clan" to come from the "Spirit Realm", and we started a "shocking war" in the "War Sky Continent", and finally killed you all. However, "The Ruthless God" took advantage of me when I was seriously injured to attack me secretly, and sent down the "Heavenly Blood Tribulation". Thanks to the help of "The Kind Death", I managed to survive, and finally walked out of the "Tomb of Gods". He created his own "Star Transformation" and "Nine Heavens Star Jue" and became the most powerful person in the world, known to the world. Unfortunately, he read this book, which led to a true energy riot, went crazy, and finally fell. I am not willing to accept it! !

Qilin

Admiral Toot

It looks okay from the front, but I feel like the protagonist, Golden Finger, is completely useless. It's no different than a genetic system. Then there is the underworld of fusion, which feels like a failure. From the front, I was quite looking forward to it, but from the back, I was very discouraged. It was obvious that I had researched the gene, but then reincarnated, which felt very outrageous. Write it down carefully and cultivate small fields. I feel like I can still take a look. I don't understand why it was written in such a messy way and some nonsense settings were added. It feels like it disgusts readers to me. It's a pretty good book, and it makes you feel like you spent a lot of money writing it.

Zhou Lang's clever plan to calm the world, he lost his wife and lost his troops! ! ?

I think the pace can be a little faster. After all, most people who come to this book come here to read Company of Heroes.

I am very much looking forward to the protagonist kneeling and saying to the sky: "The fire of karma will fall from the sky, and you will be annihilated in ashes."

Xiao Qiao

As for traditional published novels, the protagonists of traditional literature are miserable. For example, Yang Guo is really miserable... Tradition is cruel... Unfortunately, reality is even worse. In a dark place, people are not as good as rats.

Governor

Character ability collection building. You can help me conceive of the abilities of other characters. Template: Character: xxx Gene name: xxxx Gene ability: xxxx Gene weapon: xxxx Gene armor: xxxx Gene engine: xxxx

Xiao Qiao

It's useless no matter how many skills you have. You can't defeat even the beast body of the same level. What's the use of dividing the levels into elementary, intermediate and advanced? This is not training, this is technology. Ge Xiaolun's invincible body can't win at the beginning. The alien soldier, his level is not as high as others? Thorton's third generation beast body, one ax can't cut the fourth generation Liang Bing in half, although Liang Bing doesn't do much. Output, so it doesn't mean you have a high level, it still depends on your combat ability and genetic ability. Your ultimate skill can only blow up an earth star. Others, Reina, third-generation divine body, can self-destruct stars if controlled by others. If genetic ability is not good, the same is true for Apex. Immortal Phoenix Body, with bells and whistles, and fourth-generation divine body, it is basically difficult to die.

To be honest, the author can make the world view bigger. After all, there are countless worlds outside the world, and the protagonist system is just gone. It's not that I looked confused. The dark plane system and the system are two different entities, right? (*^▽^)/★*☆The system is obviously more advanced. And when you go to negotiate with Tiandao, shouldn't you do everything possible? If I first use the system to create something that can destroy this universe, threaten the way of heaven. Submit it to someone and later the author will write out the system.

I'm here! Come and catch me! (Trembling)

Emmm, let me give you an opinion The protagonist is now recruiting troops to build his power in ancient times, but what I want to ask is is it useful? It is useless in ancient times, even if I die in modern times, I will be your chairman. But can the trained subordinates fight alien wars? Can they affect the divine wars? It can be said that you are looking for Denogene in advance, but if you find it, can you afford it? As for the resources of the team at Chao Seminary, they basically rely on the Lieyang Star to support them. Why spend a lot of time building forces that are basically useless? Don't have a subordinate who can cultivate immortality to the plot, then bye-bye. Check the outline and revise it if you can, don't let yourself go I guess you want to cultivate a group of elites in ancient times, and then record the dark plane information, and then resurrect them later, but you want them to have combat effectiveness, and give them a first-generation super soldier at the end. Otherwise, why are you resurrected? It all depends on the system and there is no explanation of these functions. I suggest that we quickly enter the formal plot. Spending a lot of time building forces to make soy sauce is unjustifiable I am not a fool, and I also hope that this book will become popular, so I would like to offer my opinions and avoid lightning protection zones.

At present, it seems that the protagonist wants to form a force of his own. My suggestion is not to make it too big. The remaining forces in the Deno system like Dukao are about the same. After all, the protagonist will most likely join the military, and if his force is too big, it will not be beautiful.

The writing is usually very good, but from time to time there are a few poisonous points that are so big that it makes me quit. Apart from those few big poisonous points, it's pretty good ennnn. . .

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Da Qiao

The way of heaven in this world is the author. If the author wants Zhou Yu to die, he must die. Everything serves the plot, and both deaths advance the plot. On the other hand there are too many people.