Douluo's Thousands of Templates

The writing is very good. So far, there is almost no plot of poisoning, only some minor flaws. As an invincible novel, it is qualified, and the writing style is also very good, but the character of the protagonist is not obvious. When readers read the book, the character design is all based on imagination. The supporting characters are okay and supported by the original work, but the protagonist is not good. After all, this is something I don't know. How do you ask me to imagine? If the imagination is wrong and the later part is different from what the reader thinks, then the reader will feel uncomfortable! Overall, I watched it for a whole day and it went very smoothly. Only the characters in the plot need a little more description. 👍

I'm fascinated by these chapters of the author. Although all the followers have come out, there are many places where the plot seems reasonable, but when you take a closer look, it's fucking outrageous. The most serious thing is the character's personality, ideals and motivations for action. Although the text gives explanations, it gives people a sense of It feels like a group of puppets being led by you to perform a rigid drama. The more I watch, the more boring it becomes. After the novelty after the introduction of the concept of the Holy Grail passed, I was already a bit bored. Most readers who are attracted by the concept of the Holy Grail are probably the same as me, right? I have no patience with this book if you, the author, don't put more effort into characterization. To be honest, I can follow it up to this point because I like this book, but if I write it down like this, I won't be able to follow it, I'm sorry. There are solutions now, such as the chat time in Japanese light novels, which allows two or more people to talk, including not limited to allies, enemies, and third parties. It is relatively simple to add settings. Just find an opportunity to insert it. Another thing is that the choice of the plot should be based on the characters, environment and other frameworks in your book. It is not based on you. The framework was built by you yourself. If you want to dismantle it and put things in again, there must be a suitable reason. If there is no suitable reason, others will think it is outrageous. For example: because the protagonist is a time traveler, the introduction of the concept of the Holy Grail is still within the framework of your character design. However, if you ask Huo Yuhao to create the Holy Grail, you feel that it is not too far away. This is the truth, but the actual operation still depends on the author himself. It is strongly recommended that the author reads it several times after writing it. Finally, I would like to thank the author for taking the time to read my advice as a cloud writer. It is not easy to like a book. I hope I can continue to pursue it. Come on

Just when he was already fantasizing about a pure love in college in the future, and even thinking about the name of his child, his elder sister Qiao Xinmeng, who was sitting in the passenger seat, suddenly spoke. "Ahem! Well... Brother, how did you do in the college entrance examination?" Listening to the elder sister's question, the smile on Qiao Xue's face quickly disappeared, leaning on the puppy pillow beside him, he said weakly: "Ouch~ I'm carsick, let's not talk about it now, let's go to sleep." "Haha." Qiao Xinmeng rolled her eyes and snorted: "You can tell at a glance that you didn't do well in the exam. You will have a better time when you go back." Qiao Xue: Hululu (very loud) "Just pretend." Qiao Xinmeng snorted, shrank her petite body into the seat, and turned down the air conditioner a little. It is indeed a bit cold. The old man on the side just smiled, did not interrupt, and concentrated on driving. Qiao Xue did want to fool him at first, but the motion sickness was really motion sickness. After lying for a while, he fell asleep naturally, and his breathing gradually became calmer. After returning home, since the college entrance examination was over, no matter how good the exam was, my happy mother still took the family to a restaurant. In the restaurant, while flipping the pickled fish in the bowl, Qiao Xinmeng asked casually: "Brother, you should have a long vacation before going to college. Do you want to go out to work and gain some experience?" "Pfft——" Qiao Xue, who was chewing the prawns, spit out the shrimp shells. He looked at the smiling old sister across the table and said in disbelief: "Sister, it's 0202 now, you don't really dare to let me out, do you?" "Uh--" Qiao Xinmeng was stunned, shook her head helplessly, and said: "You have escaped. But you can't stay at home all the time. Tell me, is there anything you want to do?" "Well..." Qiao Xue swallowed the prawn in his mouth, pondered for a while, and said, "How about I try writing novels. After all, I also like reading novels. Sometimes I always want to write some of my fantasy things." "Writing novels?" The old man who had been talking to his parents suddenly turned his head and said: "Okay, I heard that writing novels is quite profitable now." "I think too much. They are all great writers. I, a little shrimp, just go there to have fun. It doesn't matter whether I get royalties or not." Qiao Xue complained. "Have you ever written a novel? I heard that it takes a lot of brainpower." Qiao Xinmeng asked curiously. As a former lover of romance novels, she had also tried writing novels before, but... They were a bunch of crap. "Let's give it a try, I just want to practice my skills anyway." Qiao Xue continued to nibble on the prawns, speaking vaguely. In fact, he didn't really want to write a novel, but if he didn't do anything at home during the summer vacation, he would be scolded by his mother. "As long as you have an idea." Qiao Xinmeng didn't want to undermine her brother's self-confidence. As long as he didn't go out during this period, he could do whatever he wanted at home. After eating and drinking, the group went straight back home. Since his sister was back, Qiao Xue gave up his small room and returned to another smaller room. "I'm so angry, you guys obviously favor my sister." Qiao Xue hugged the pillow and vented his dissatisfaction to his mother. "How can you compare to your sister? If you can save half as much trouble as your sister, we will be thankful." Mom glanced at Qiao Xue and gave him a fatal blow. Dragging his gray body, Qiao Xue lay down on the small bed. He was not too angry, he was just joking. Of course, what my mother said was really hurtful... "What should I write about?" Qiao Xue looked at the writer's assistant, his own creative soul ready to move. "Write)@"+? No, my writing skills are too bad now, so I am overestimating my abilities when writing original works." "Let's just write a fanfic first. As long as I stick to one million words, my writing skills will improve no matter what." "What should I write? Comprehensive comics? Dragon clan? Or special photography? In fact, mythology is not bad... Forget it, I don't want to have so many." Opening an exercise book on the desk and looking at the dense but scrawled handwriting on it, Qiao Xue was suddenly stunned. "Isn't this what I wrote when I was in junior high school? Tang Chen? Big Buddha? The beginning is okay, but when it comes to writing invincible stories, I feel it's still a bit worse." "How about adding a big BOSS that the protagonist can't do in the early stage?" "By the way, I need to make a few more templates, so that it's fun." "The heroine, well... Let's take it step by step." "That's it." Qiao Xue turned on his phone and typed seven words seriously. "That's the title of the book - "Douluo's Thousands of Templates"!" ps: I am the king of cultivating immortals Okay, I have insomnia (≖_≖)

It starts with "Understanding the Buddha and the Demon", and the main text begins with the "Buddha and the Demon", but the main line is still God's, not to mention that the Buddha and the Demon are not lovable. Is this a religious "baptism"? Publicity? Or what? Hehe.

Ah this

Attention, those who are ready to watch The protagonist reveals the secret of his time travel

It's the protagonist's brother again and then he joins the group. I'm tired of this routine. It's poisonous.

Among the ten novels written about Douluo, eight are about Wuhun Temple, one is jungle and one is with a group. Some people say that there are too many groups 😅. Another point is that Bibi Dong brought it upon herself. It was obviously she who broke up with Yu Xiaogang when he went to look for her and gave her the breakup fee (the guest token of Wuhun Temple). She had two chances to choose, one after killing Qian Xunji to clear the suspicion, and the other when Yu Xiaogang went to look for her. Being raped once and turning into a black man makes everyone feel the pain. So if Tang San's mother was killed, wouldn't it be forgiven even if he committed an act of destroying the world?

I didn't expect that I would be the first one to adopt the gem sword form of the blue silver hammer.

I don't accept anyone, but if I accept you, I will give you my daughter. 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

After reading dozens of chapters, I feel that a template like the Creator that can inherit the divine status is a bit novel, but overall it is too messy. Most people who read fan fiction just want to have a new taste of the same old dishes. If this book was not on the shelf of Douluo and separated from the fan fiction, it might have done much better. The introduction of Cthulhu personally feels that this alone will dissuade a group of people, so... Come on, author.

Personally, I think Dou Er is a failure.

Why Blue Silver Hammer, why not Haotian Grass, eh?

Tang Chen Creator Mode Plus Blue Silver Hammer

Dou Er completely confused me... I can accept the invasion or write Dou Er intermittently, but this time I directly ran to Dou Er and lost Dou Yi, which really confused me. The writing of Dou Yi is very good. Suddenly... It gave me a feeling of nothingness. The following seems to be the invincible Dou Yi, and Dou Yi is just a wedge with dozens of pictures 😵

Author, are you letting yourself go more and more? All transferred to Douluo II 😥

It's annoying to see a bald donkey! This means that if the protagonist doesn't flirt with women, there will be no heroine!

Qian Renxue, I really think she is mentally ill. Will you die if you practice hard? What's not easy when you have strength? The same goes for Tang Hao. If you don't take revenge, don't look for opportunities to resurrect your wife, and don't care about your son, you are helping others to forge iron. If you have this time, what will happen if you capture a few soul beasts? I can eat it for a long time. Who is the wife to blame for the death of someone who sleeps every day?

It's true, deceiving people and getting poisonous. The introduction said, Dou Yi, but in the end it was Dou Er until it was put on the shelves. Who would watch if Dou Er hits the street?

The plot of Dou Er is too long, right? What about the main plot? Shouldn't we be fighting?