Get the Perfect Music System at the Start

I've been in circles before. Let me tell you about the movie script. The world's most valued screenwriter is South Korea, who is responsible for screenwriting. But the maximum share is no more than 15%. In China, there is a director-responsibility system. Due to salary restrictions, directors and big-name stars generally share a share, but the total does not exceed 30%. The script is divided into 45%, which is impossible to happen in any country. The majority is theaters, 50-60, publishers 5-20, and producers only 20-45. On the producer side, investors account for 70~90%, and there are very few others.

Can the first three chapters be more rigorous? This is a writer's attitude. No matter how famous he is or whether he will not produce other works in the future, this is a basic minimum respect an author has for readers. You can see the author's attitude towards life from a young age. In the first three chapters, no less than ten places can be found that deviate from the reader's sense of substitution. The most brainless thing among them is that a big fat man behaves in a violent manner all day long, and it is impossible to understand how he gained weight. A medical student carries a guitar on his back all day long wherever he goes, which makes him lose his basic thinking ability. We are all medical students attending a graduation ceremony. Everyone is chatting and drinking. The protagonist carries Ji on his back and enters the door. Sitting on the sofa, he suddenly pulls out his guitar from behind and plays and sings an original song in front of everyone, and then surprises everyone. Making a mother terminally ill is also very old, vulgar and disgusting. I want to say that although there are not many mental hospitals, as the main character of a book, a person really cannot forget to take medicine if he is sick. This medicine really cannot be stopped...!

Chapter 10, I really can't stand it anymore

I kind of understand why this book is so popular. The affectionate and introverted persona was established at the beginning, but after a few pictures, it became so out of place. Are you a Sichuan opera face changer? How can a person who has just played twice be so open? Also, what unpopular songs were chosen? I have never heard of it. Of the first four songs, I have only heard two of them by Mao Buyi. What the hell are the other two songs? Also, the style of the song selection is really speechless. Mao Buyi's song is so deep, and the other two songs are so off-kilter. In short, the first ten chapters are the most dissuading. As I continue reading, I can still resist this poison.

The plot of a book must be reasonable. I made records. You improvise lyrics and music based on the scene. You can't come up with an arrangement immediately. To arrange a song, a good producer will spend two days creating it, and then recording it. Those suona, flute and piano need to be found to be played and recorded. Then use software to synthesize it. All in all, it can be done in seven days. You took the initiative to say that you can compose improvised music at will, which is too false. Just get a piano or guitar and play and sing.

In today's entertainment novels, the first songs are Old Boy, Soothe My Sorrow, and Vomit. With so many songs, do these songs have to be used?

There is no melodious singing voice, no singing skills, and no one has certain knowledge of music theory. Even if I give you 10,000 songs, you won't be able to sing well, let alone the psychology and mentality of singing in front of people.

It's really poisonous, especially the original part. I know you are buying songs from the system, but pay attention. In this world, you say that these songs are all original by you. You just graduated from college, and then you release one original song a day, or two or three songs a day. Is it practical to combine it?

In order to post, I specially subscribed to 1 chapter from the back. I usually read entertainment articles, and I have read 10 chapters of this book. Compared with other books, your writing style is not bad, but it is a bit lacking. But most entertainment is like this, so it's not a big problem. The only problem with your book is that it starts with the Tomorrow's Sons program and Mao Buyi's song. This is true even in your resume. No one is interested in clicking in (I was attracted by your 600,000 words and more than 100 recommendation votes). If you don't copy so many classic and old songs in the Chinese music scene, you will copy popular songs that have not been around for a long time. Moreover, it's the songs and programs from last year, anyone wants to watch them. . . .

This Xia Ziling's writing is too bitchy, a woman who is inexplicable

From the introduction, I thought Mao Buyi was reborn.

It started well, but I don't know if it's because the author's writing is still blocking bullets or something else. Anyway, the plot is getting more and more addictive the more I write it, and the more I write it, the more poisonous it is, and it's blocking bullets. What the hell, why don't I just write about military themes directly? Why did I add the section about Scotland? The strength persuades me to quit. Slip away.

Grass, paraquat, grass grass grass grass, can't stand it

Well, after reading the book review, my personal interpretation may be different, but I think the beginning is okay. After all, some of Maomao's songs are really touching, but some of the plots in England are a bit inexplicable, such as Winnie and Zhou Xiang, who were manipulated to target the protagonist. Looking at it all the way, I didn't feel that the protagonist had touched the bottom line of the so-called big boss, and then he just came to see his mother, and then he was inexplicably targeted by the whole world. I won't talk about the little gangster, it's quite normal. Black people don't say it either, it's quite normal and they are arrogant because of their talent. So I don't understand why I'm talking about it. Is it just disgusting? Or will he play the role of a disgusting person after returning home? In short, this character can only disgust readers. Let's talk about Zhou Zhou in the hospital. In the first part, it can be said that he just wanted to make money, but the protagonist didn't target him. Later, he realized that someone was behind it to target the protagonist,? ? ? Why? For what? Inexplicable. And that young master whose name is that, to be honest, with this status and using that method to contact the protagonist, really, it is extremely low-key. You know that the protagonist is looking for a book, and you have managed to get the book in your hands. Why don't you do this to gain power? That's it? Shaodong? You are looking for someone to cooperate with you. You can also say that you are asking for help from someone, brother. How can arousing others' resistance lead to cooperation? Can you lose money if you offer help in times of need and pay to sing songs? Is it really appropriate to make it seem like the whole world knows that the protagonist must find the book within two days? The excuses I gave when I opened the door were too low, and I even beat the dog to look at its owner. You, the boss of a big company, have a dog that specializes in blackmailing people. You don't mind being embarrassed, and you use it to show off your power? When I saw it, I thought she was a gangster leader, but now the identity was pulled and there was Winnie. The protagonist felt that there was something wrong with this woman, but there was no evidence and there was nothing to plot against, so we still had normal contact, which was quite normal. Then on the plane Winnie suddenly gave a devilish smile... Where are you leaving this matryoshka doll? A strange matryoshka doll!

Some foreign plots are a bit disgusting. I don't know why they are set like this. It is originally an entertainment genre and always feels like watching other genres.

There are some parts of this novel that are inexplicable. For example, what does the woman's dream in Chapter 47 have to do with the protagonist? The protagonist also wants to help her fulfill her dream. People she just met on the street, including friends and acquaintances, are not included. Is it just because she is a woman? Are Chinese women busy with hundreds of millions of protagonists?

This Xia Ziling is a bit annoying. She received all the fans and rewards during live broadcasts. She pretended to be aggrieved when a couple broke up and was scolded. If you don't want to be scolded, don't do live broadcasts. No one inside knows that she is the protagonist anyway.

Is it a harem? If not, we won't waste each other's time.

It feels very bland, without any climax. Usually those who write this kind of novels have a small climax followed by a big climax. The whole journey is dull, uncomfortable and depressing.

Not to mention sentimental songs such as Old Boy, Xiaochou, and My Deskmate, even milestone-level songs like Blue and White Porcelain will make you feel tired if you listen to them too much.

Forgive me for not reading the following chapters. Finally, I spent some money to give a reward and comment, that's it. Respect is mutual...

The part where Xia Ziling passed away was really a bit of a pushback... (Only expressing my personal opinion)

You're a naysayer a lot 😰, come on, come on

Just write about entertainment. It turned suspenseful for no reason. What the hell? I backed off.

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The author's writing is good, but his performance is limited by the songs. The song selection at the beginning is an important basis for readers to retain. Anyway, if you choose to play piano, violin, etc. In the later stage, what are you afraid of? Just use blockbuster songs! Can you see it after hiding it until the readers are no longer interested... Really, except for Mao Buyi's song, the other choices were not very good.

Teacher, why don't you change it? Synthesis will directly copy our Maomao's life? Using his songs, if he was on the show, it would be a bit too humorous to write a book here. It was really fun to copy from the Chinese music scene to the European and American music scene and then to the Japanese music scene. Looking through the catalog, there is still a big fish. After harming Maomao, Zhou Shen's songs are also harming, right? That chapter is really written with extreme humor. It can be seen that you don't know how to sing at all, even It makes me suspect that you don't listen to music at all. Zhou Shen's voice has been kissed by an angel. Haha, your male protagonist is not like this. The fish tail behind the big fish is a bel canto chant. It's not that simple. Ahhhh, what the hell?