Broken Fantasy of Slitgam

A super readable book, I was so blown away! If you are a newbie reading this, just listen to me. Just go through the prologue a little and write down the information. You will know after reading the first volume, it is beautiful! So delicious! The realistic description with a little bit of blood, the dark environment, the atmosphere, the feeling is simply amazing. When you read, you won't know where the foreshadowing is. Maybe that sentence is a clue or a foreshadowing. The story is really well written! The only thing is that the author's appearance description is not very skillful. I hope to improve it. It is really a good unmanned series. I like this book very much as I like the novel style of gray fantasy. I hope you won't stop updating!

My first impression when I saw this book was how similar it was to the two Japanese hard-core fantasy books "Grimgar in Ashes and Fantasy" and "Goblin Slayer". Of course, this does not mean praise or criticism, just like the elf said that the thieves in Longjing were "cunning". In fact, I really like these two works, even though I have not finished reading all the novels (of course I will definitely finish the animation). In short, I hope the current plot and rhythm can be maintained, and I hope to see more of the author's own style. Of course there are some small details, I think we can still lay the groundwork. For example: on the way to the fairy town or during infiltration, the cooperation with some tactical plans drawn up by Longjing, etc. Although there may be some details, what I see is more that Longjing is alone looking at the town map, thinking, and planning a route. Rather than mutual interaction. In addition, I personally feel that the team seems to be too focused on Longjing's planning. Although a multi-headed carriage is not good, a wise man will always make mistakes. Just like the early teams of Gray and Fantasy relied too much on Manado. Finally, a small personal opinion. Sister Nian can actually be equipped with some lightweight projection props. Arcane Vanguard seems to mainly rely on telekinesis to wield swords and shields. It should also be a good idea to properly project some props or sharp blades such as daggers. The other is certain skills of Jedi Knights and Sith Knights. The application of Longjing's magic power should also be able to create an effect similar to a heavy fall or light body through upward and downward thrust, or to strengthen the grip for a short period of flying over a wall, or it can be attached to a large weapon like the stunt of a certain ancient X school... Finally, there may be an auxiliary function depending on the team configuration. There is room for support or central defender, and I also hope to see some larger-scale collaboration in the future, as well as the introduction of the gods (from the word of the ninth god, it feels that there should be more than just the goddess of light and the evil god) If possible, I also hope to have more room for dialogue with the author. May the blessings of my Queen Hekate be given

1. So? Is studying just to live, work, support your family, and just live your whole life? It's very true, but there is so much helplessness in this world, how many people can escape! 2. The preface gives me a sense of plainness and quiet beauty. The main text of the first chapter breaks out of this framework again, and the main text is here, so there is contrast and it seems attractive enough. But for those who are watching it for the first time, even if you tell them that they can skip the sequence, I don't think many people will skip it! 3. The characterization always feels a bit narrative, so I suggest you find the right direction! Don't ruin the sense of immersion. The article is very interesting, please like it! Come on

I came across this book by chance. The content is good and the plot is compact. Big boost to the author! !

Author, I would like to discuss the plot with you. Both adventures are won by relying on chemical knowledge. They are based on reality, alternating hot and cold, and I know all about dust explosions. Should I also add some fantasy plot? Since there is magic, Longjing can learn some unique magic (preferably one-time, I feel like Goldfinger). It's just that the routines don't need to be the same, it will be very boring (I read a lot of novels, so I know a lot about the routines and hope to see something different) Also, I concluded that Dou Po became famous because he set a goal, which was a three-year agreement to save his master and his father. The plot is coherent, you write the situation according to the situation, and practice your skills in the early stage. In the later stage, we can complicate it and connect the various adventure tasks. For example, the first time, they were almost robbed, but that group of people did not die. You can arrange the next task to stumble the protagonist. The Conan I can think of usually has ordinary plots. The occasional plot version or the fight with the man in black are all very enjoyable to watch. (Not that kind of cool article). We don't necessarily have to imitate them. We have to surpass them on the basis of learning from them and write our own things that others don't have. Come on

Well written, keep it up and invest.

Note to readers: This book will not be very long, it is just a prequel. But it is definitely the author's hard work. I will also make progress slowly. I hope everyone can make suggestions and the author will adopt them. I love you (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

Not bad! Collected! Take your time and watch! Keep it up! Stable updates! Welcome to visit us again!

It's a bit short. When will the new book be released?

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Author, since we have finished writing, we will finish the book?

Recommended on the 19th, double updates are being prepared, I hope you can support me, thank you ( •̥́ ˍ •̀ू )

I would like to see the recommendation vote ranking list. Does the author show it there?

It's just that the final battle was simple and ended a bit quickly. You may be used to the protagonists in other novels being unable to defeat and then turning the tide, although it was not easy or involved sacrifices.

I have only read one chapter 😁 but I can tell that the author's writing style is very good. I'll take a look at it more next time I have time, so I'll save it for now.

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