
Marry Xin
嫁歆
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 178k Words
- Genre
- Ancient Romance
- Audience
- Female
- Subgenre
- Ancient Love Story
- Updated
- 5y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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5Fans
58Chapters
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Hope Henan is safe and Nanjing is safe
There have been floods in Henan these days, and the epidemic is resurging in Nanjing. As a Chinese, I am short in stature and weak in strength, with an empty pocket and no money. Alas, I am powerless and feel guilty. As evidenced by this post, if there are royalties next month, all royalties will be donated for post-disaster reconstruction. May peace be with you.
Must collect and support! Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง.
Already pursuing investment, waiting to make a fortune. My writing has improved a lot this time, keep up the good work!
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Interview me, what does the title mean?
The big novel should be regarded as a classic romance novel about female reincarnation in ancient times. I haven't done much research on romance novels, so I'll just talk about the writing issues. The reincarnation in the first chapter is too sudden, and it is impossible to see the psychological changes of the heroine, nor the fear and anxiety after amnesia. Then the shaping of the supporting characters is a bit shallow, that's all I can see for the time being.
I'm looking forward to a book that will confer the title of God, so keep up the good work!
How many words did you write and then the mine signed the contract?
It's just finished, so fast?
I accidentally swiped an order this afternoon and saved it because my phone was almost out of battery at the time. That's why I'm reading it now. After only reading three chapters, I can see that the writing level is still quite good, but I'm still a novice. It's lacking in many places. For example: paragraphs, sentence fragments, character images, inner thoughts, body movements, facial expressions, these are not very well described. Also, when the characters are talking, you cannot write according to your own ideas, but write according to what is happening. You have to bring yourself into it, you are the protagonist. I have only read three chapters, and I didn't see your description of the scene at all. Although you described it in the beginning, it was too sloppy. Not only did your portrayal of the supporting characters be poor, but your description of the protagonist was not very good either. The use of punctuation marks is also a bit wrong. You should check it carefully before publishing. If you can't find any problems, read it a few more times, because the words are repeated in some places, which will make readers uncomfortable. Come on! Author, you are great. Be brave and don't be afraid of difficulties.
Hey, I update two pages a day, more than 5,000 words. It's awesome.