Completing the Journey of Life

It feels like your novel will either be a big hit or die because of ink.

The only problem I have right now is that the writing is slow, or there are not enough chapters. The slow writing is naturally not enough to read, and at the same time, because of the strong atmosphere of life, the main line seems to be progressing very slowly. Actually, I had a lot of fun reading more than 20 chapters, but waiting for updates chapter by chapter seemed to drag on. So, if you don't increase the update speed, you can only wait for a while before watching, otherwise it will be uncomfortable.

My daily dramas are very plump recently, so plump, I can't eat enough of this dog food. What about the main line? Being with my senior sister is too sweet, I want to watch a martial arts fight.

I think it's a martial arts day, senior sister, can I still be saved?🙂

Being able to see the problem is not the key, the most important thing is to solve the problem. The biggest problem in this book is that there are too many daily romances with the senior sister. And repeated over and over again, it's all shy, quarrelsome, the pretentiousness of a little daughter, nothing new. This point needs to be restrained as much as possible, and a small branch line should be opened for the protagonist to get busy with business. Just don't show up with the senior sister in chapters three or five. Feng Yuxiu is a very good branch plot. I feel that the author has written a very good foreshadowing and prelude. After reading the prelude, you will know why Feng Yuxiu became like that. Rather than being a martial arts fanatic who became crazy, it is better to say that after his wife died, his family was ruined, he became abnormal, neurotic, and had a strong tendency to self-destruct. That's why he does things like in the movie. It is obvious that he is not pursuing the ultimate in martial arts. He is just like the Fire Cloud Evil God, either beating others to death to vent his anger, or being beaten to death by others and freeing himself. We can deduce its ending. Only the state can use this kind of madman who licks the blood without injuring himself. Being taken in by the state before committing a crime is equivalent to being put in shackles. It is easier to obtain better medical resources within the system, so that Feng's abilities will be used in the right way. And Lin, Gao. I remember that I was also the protagonist of that movie. The protagonist could accompany the protagonists of these movies to complete a short side mission, eight out of ten, with a better participation and more compactness, and then come back to eat dog food. Don't just give me some advice, just stay with your senior sister for a few days, then pay attention, and don't participate yourself, just hug your senior sister and watch others busy. As for what theme branch to open, it goes without saying that the author's own choice is definitely more professional, that is, every theme should not be daily. No matter how well written it is, it will be difficult to keep reading. After all, it is a web article, not a diary. Even in romance web novels, there is no way of writing down daily accounts.

A book review from a ten-year-old bookworm seeking refinement! The biggest highlight of this book is the description of the martial arts system! Muscle exercise, including descriptions of An Jin, as well as traditional martial arts and modern fighting, such as boxing, jujitsu, and taekwondo, the differences and fusion of these ring games do not belittle anyone, but highlight the characteristics of traditional martial arts, and also make some assumptions and explorations, which feel to be based on real-life exploration. It feels like it is done according to the author's fantasy, using traditional martial arts training methods to train, and setting some rules to allow traditional martial arts to be fought in the ring. The results may not be very good at first because of unfamiliarity, but you can continue to adjust and improve, and become a modern fighting event! This is completely different from the descriptions of Chinese martial arts and martial arts in Xiaobai. Com. They always conjure up "hidden masters and peerless geniuses", and then create based on the realm set by Dragon Snake "holding the elixir, not bad", as if this can highlight how awesome traditional martial arts is. But traditional martial arts is horizontal and vertical, with the right person standing and the wrong person lying down. In fact, the more obscene you are and the less willing you are to face reality, the farther you will fall. The society does not believe that there is such an awesome person who is indifferent to fame and wealth and can defeat the world boxing champion without taking tens of millions of dollars in rewards. Only by adapting to the rules, creating rules, and standing in the ring to fight can traditional Chinese martial arts have a chance to stand. Flaws: The traditional Chinese martial arts and martial arts are so well written, but they are just a side story! 🤫, in fact, the theme of this online article is pure love, and the theme is the protagonist and the senior sister's boredom. So it should be placed in the girls section, and the results will be very good. Since it is placed in the boys section, I feel that this kind of arrangement is very confusing. In modern society, the martial arts life of traditional martial arts, the protagonist falls in love in three chapters, and deals with the martial arts life in one chapter. Or 80% of the chapter is about having an affair with the senior sister, and 20% is about martial arts life, practicing martial arts, or talking about business and martial arts with friends or opponents, and at the same time flirting with the senior sister... Is it a good day-to-day writing? Very good! But, it's top-heavy, and it feels like the protagonist just licks his senior sister every day when he's not doing his job. Where does this martial arts come from? So either post the book to the girls section, or increase the number of things like teaching disciples, running a martial arts gym, practicing martial arts, and promoting traditional martial arts to ten times the original number, and then spread the current pure love content into it. I feel that the proportion is right.

Although I am a mixed martial arts fan, I still like reading this kind of novel. I always think that people are the strongest. I hope the author does not want to be a eunuch.

To be honest, I can read it, but the pace is too slow, and it feels a bit like a farming novel. The whole story is written around the senior sister. I was a little surprised by the writing.

Baoqiang's most handsome moment

As title.

Author, the label of your novel is Time Travel. Why can't you tell it's time travel? And it's classified as science fiction, so you put it in the wrong place.

I'm playing. I'll post a single chapter about the eunuch. All my recommendation votes will be in vain.

The story is more realistic and feels great. The warrior image of the protagonist is completely established. It's okay if it heats up slowly at first, but it will gradually heat up. The classification is time travel. I hope to understand the choices of the world and unify the story style while retaining the essence of the original work.

It has been identified that this is a dog food article

There is a kind of ruthlessness in the bones