Demonic Tome

One thing to say, although I haven't seen the update yet, it always feels weird For example, the second volume is at least Chapter 26 and the protagonist is still paddling throughout the whole process Also, don't tell me that the guy possessed by the protagonist is in love with a woman, and then the protagonist wakes up and takes over and is still in love with each other to verify the essence. The prophecy of the spirit Also, it is very strange that the guy possessed by the protagonist is resurrected. Whether the protagonist wakes up and sleeps instead of the original soul, or the protagonist wakes up and the original soul is the same body, or the protagonist self-proclaims his memory to experience life, it all feels weird And why does the protagonist only exist in the first volume! ! ! The person possessed by the protagonist in the second volume looks very retarded and awkward, and the witch is like a memorial arch. You are no longer a human being. The protagonist saved you, and you repay the favor with revenge. I didn't expect that you should at least learn knowledge as a magician. Whoring the devil's language for free, and learning to use the dark power you possess will not be so repulsive. . .

It was quite fun to write, at least it wasn't tiring to watch, but there is a problem. Each part you wrote is too independent. The previous focus was on Hughes, but suddenly it became the main description of Thalia. It feels like the protagonist has been changed. The black magic incident in the middle is too long. It looks like an independent story, a fragment of history rather than a branch line. It seems that the main line is not closely connected. I thought the main plot at the beginning was that Hughes completed the second half of the Demonic Scripture through his travels in the world. But now it feels more like a travelogue, writing wherever he goes, and the rhythm is not obvious.

It feels like there are so few people and it's so deserted. Is the author's main position the starting point, or is it on other novel apps? Anyway, in my opinion, this is a good work. Although it is still relatively deserted, please don't give up on this novel easily because of this, and don't give up on your interests and hobbies. (Don't forget your original intention, and you will always succeed) This is the school motto of my college days, and it has benefited me a lot so far. Although the occasion may not be very suitable, I still feel that I want to give this sentence to you, come on! I wish your writing skills will get better and better, and your novels will become more and more popular. (Congratulations from a reader)

It's a very interesting book. I've only read thirty or forty chapters, and I can't count the number of times I've used allusions to satirize and criticize Western characters.

It is a well-written fantasy, but please forgive me for pointing out a few personal opinions. First, the protagonist setting is not good, and it is not immersive or interesting enough. Second, the protagonist suddenly changes, which is a taboo in writing. Third, the writing style is not deep enough for immature characters. Many old writers have this problem. It doesn't matter. The key is that the plot is not attractive enough. . . I don't know what to do about this. Anyway, I see that the author wrote very seriously in the previous parts, and he wrote so much. It's really not easy.

Aren't the devils from the abyss? The devil is from hell, right?

Come on (ง •̀_•́)งGet fatter

How to say it? Come on! Sao Nian, I am optimistic about you (´⊙ω⊙`)✧*. ٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧*.

It's well written. I put in the effort and really wanted to write fantasy well.

What is the name of the second book?

So where can I read the second book and what is it called?

The writing is great. I like it very much. I will give you all the votes. However, the appearance of magic in the magical world is really inconsistent. I hope it won't become a hodgepodge and collapse.

I really like the dungeon part. Is it unfinished?

I think this novel is quite interesting.

The book is good, but the female magician is not very good. I feel like she is the only one whose IQ is not online.

The current reading progress of the second volume has ended. After reading the first volume, I thought it was from Hughes' perspective. He traveled around the world, saw people and things in various places, saw the ugliness and evil of human beings, and also saw the beauty and kindness of human beings, and then gradually understood human beings. Such a road movie. Especially what is written in many places is quite interesting, such as the dungeon I am seeing now, the devil who cares about people, and the story about the aristocratic father and daughter in the back whose lives are OK, but money is not. There are also many places where the writing is very absurd and full of black humor. It can be seen that the author wanted to write something. However, the reading experience is not good. As far as I can see, at the end of the second volume, the female magician has been established, as well as the demon hunter and the half-elf brother and sister. But the image of Hughes has not been established. First of all, dozens of chapters are absent from the second volume. Secondly, the overall image seems to be behind the scenes, which itself makes people feel quite unclear. And I don't know the main plot, and I don't know if the author is like me thinking, it is a road book. As it stands now, I don't know what Hughes wants to do, and he has very few roles. The female magician has many roles and has a clear goal, and it seems that the female magician is also responsible for changing the map. Makes people wonder.

The update is a bit slow, maybe the author can make an announcement and update it cumulatively at the end of each month, so that you can read it all at once. (It also ensures quality, which is much better than slowly updating 1-2 chapters)

I'm very curious about whether your protagonist is the devil or the Demon. The more you write, the more you can't stand it. It's not interesting at all. Can it be changed?

Ah haha, what a coincidence. I looked at it and didn't expect to get involved in professional knowledge. I am a 2017 major in applied psychology at the School of Law and Sociology. Is the author also a psychology major? Since it mentions Freud's three-self theory of personality in psychoanalysis.