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Excellent writing and imagination, just waiting for it to explode

The settings are good. Hurry up and write more. Fatten up before killing.

You have a lot of imagination, not bad, keep up the good work

There are a lot of kids in the book review section. The author please give me a moderator.

Those who say they are poisonous must have no friends, or they are underage. There are three gangs of heroes, and people who are greedy and independent will not last long. They only see the immediate benefits and don't know how to share them with others. Have you read too many articles?

Dear author, I advise you to change the plot as soon as possible when the number of words is small. The class leader and the emperor contributed their wisdom and their equipment was stolen. Once the setting is released, a large number of people will definitely be discouraged. At first I tolerated it when there were brothers who helped each other, then I tolerated the old housekeeper, and I tolerated it when there was an emperor. There are only three things to do: I contributed clues to the secret realm, my equipment was corrupted, and now I have to take care of my girl. All I can say is that you don't want to be good at all. Of course this is my personal suggestion, it's up to you whether you listen to it or not. I hope the author will write better and better.