
Releasing Pokemon in Tokyo
放生神奇宝贝从东京开始
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 24k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 6y ago
- Source
- Qidian
Synopsis
11Chapters
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I'm fucking split. What I like is that the author's group portrait style is not this messy content. The first book is obviously very good, so I have to change the style.
Author, should you write "Start with Tokyo Earth Explosion Star" or not? We have to give readers an explanation, and we can't hang on there all the time. If you still want to write it, you should give readers a clear reason, such as force majeure factors such as parents dying and having a funeral. If you don't write about eunuchs, then you have to explain clearly why they are eunuchs. It is because of lack of writing power or lack of imagination that the whole story cannot be structured.
Small opinion
The group portrait is very good. Moreover, these short stories can also be used to invisibly set off the protagonist, allowing him to show off invisibly or explain something to pave the way for the next step. But this one releases Pokemon in Tokyo. Well, to be honest, it is quite similar to the first one, and the author probably wants to write it like the first one. But Personally, it doesn't feel very good. The first point is to release animals. Release of animals feels like doing charity, like a holy mother bitch. The second feeling is not as good. Ninjutsu can create the illusion of immortality, so the cost of Ninjutsu comes out. What can those ordinary Pokemon do, blindly destroy them? Obviously not, blindly destroying them can only be conquered and then dissected, which is too low a level. So I suggest it be written that the real world is attacked by creatures from another space. The firearms were ineffective and the Japanese troops were wiped out. Increase Pokémon value. Then the world government resumed research in order to resist this powerful creature, and finally found the damaged elf ball in a different space and successfully restored it. Capture elves through elf balls and use elves to fight elves. This will lead to the birth of trainers and an increase in social status. Catching Pokémon will become everyone's dream. A Pokémon can even sell for a sky-high price. () So what does the protagonist do? It is best to have a Pokémon recovery system, and restore its story to this world by playing a mythical beast (a group portrait), play a friendly person to help life fight against the darkness you play, or play a dark mythical beast to let the world learn its power, for example: there are frequent earthquakes in a certain place, and the conquest sends a large number of researchers and trainers there. During research, a huge ancient palace was discovered. The ancient palace is filled with dense ancient writings. After some deciphering: The palace said: I guarded the King of Lava here in the era of my people! The great beast Groudon will sleep here forever My descendants will never disturb it! The result was opened by a redstone stone discovered by a soldier (arranged by the author) A sleeping giant beast watered by lava was buried in the magma. (The scene is extremely shocking) The military is ecstatic! In order to stabilize the front line, they chose to conquer Groudon. Using the newly invented Master Ball in the laboratory, he conquered the sleeping beast. But the good times did not last long. The crazy Groudon woke up on the battlefield for the first time and after successfully resisting the fierce attack of the elves in the different space, he began to attack the coalition forces in the opposite direction. The coalition forces suffered heavy casualties. The world leader of the coalition headquarters was furious. One side was shocked by the death of the coalition forces, and the other half lamented Groudon's strength and wanted to conquer it. And the organizational conspiracy to hide the shadow of the world also began to sprout, because they saw the power to rule the world. I can't edit anymore😁😁😁 How about it? Is it more interesting
To be honest, if you become a eunuch, your account will be useless and no one will believe you.
This book is not even as good as the previous one. If you, the author, write a book just for fun, I have nothing to say.
Has it been reported? Many chapters have been deleted
I started high and low, I just dropped a ball at the beginning of Tokyo's sky explosion, but it was gone I also added a bunch of extraordinary backgrounds, and as a result, I'm still catching little monsters after almost 100 chapters, and my daily writing is mediocre The system's presence is almost nonexistent
I really liked the author's first book and hope to return to that style.
Can the author change his name? This name always reminds me of the one with a knife but no umbrella.
Seriously, the beginning is boring now, are you really not going to speed it up? (゚O゚) From Chapter 2 to now, basically the little fire horse is running, the government is preparing to capture, but the capture fails, the little fire horse runs faster, the government prepares to capture, the capture fails, the small fire horse runs faster, the flame horse evolves, the flame horse runs faster, the government prepares to capture, the capture fails, the flame horse runs faster, the government prepares to capture, the capture fails. . . . The feeling is just watery and boring