If I Cultivate to Become an Immortal, My Magic Power Will Reach the Sky

The actual content of this book does not match the introduction. It looks very similar to Mou Xixi. If you are attracted by the introduction, you can withdraw it. The identity of the protagonist is said to be revealed later. I have read dozens of chapters and found something that attracts me, but the author just doesn't write it. Alas! He is just a hammer in one place and a stick in the other. Currently, I personally feel that this book is a waste of time at best. It is neither enjoyable nor has a literary style, nor does it have a good story. I personally suggest you take a look if you are very, very bored. . .

The pace of this book is too slow at the beginning, and there are too many bugs: 1. If the protagonist is reincarnated, grows up, and slowly awakens his memory, then the world view must be consistent with this world first, and he must believe in God; 2. If it is a resurrection type, most of the memories are sealed, and then slowly awaken, then it may be too boring for a game. For those who feel that the system is a game hallucination, they have accepted rebirth, and there is no reason not to accept the existence of immortals and gods. The rhythm at the beginning of 3 is too slow, and there is no feeling like the three golden chapters at most. It has three bronze chapters at most. After reading 10 chapters, the protagonist has not started to cultivate immortality. This is a personal feeling, mainly because of the previous logic bugs that made me uncomfortable. Ps: It's really too strict to have a fan base before you can comment.

This book can be regarded as the pinnacle of mediocre style. It has rigorous logic and good writing style. The only shortcoming is that it is not exciting enough.

Although I have read the pirated version before, I still want to say that the author has written about the protagonist's thinking about where he comes from before. He should want to lay the groundwork and write some scenes about the protagonist's memory recovery and so on. But after the disappearance of Prince Hou Junji, shouldn't there be more changes in the protagonist's thinking? Has there been a change in mentality or behavior? Because the protagonist in this period already has good strength in the human world, he should not and cannot be as hard-working as in the previous period. No matter how it develops in the later period, it cannot really be written about the historical development. If the readers already know the result, will they still read it? What I write is an online novel, not a historical expansion.

I have received the most likes in chapter reviews for this book. I am the author of "Winging the Chicken". I am so happy. Add more pepper, see you next time. I will continue to advertise for you in the comments section of other people's book lists

It is a good book that can be read quietly. Bookworms or bookworms should all read it!

A very good book, mainly based on the background of Tang Emperor Li Shimin, mixed with myths and legends of that period, and a small part of history. The protagonist has a golden finger, a system panel with a general function, and the origin of the system is introduced later; the protagonist traveled through time, but he lost his memory during time travel, and only has a little memory; strictly speaking, there is no female protagonist in this book, but the protagonist has a wife, who is not married, and a son, born to a brother (female). Finally, I would like to thank the author for his careful craftsmanship of the novel! I wish the author good health, quick thinking, and a better next book

I can only watch Invincible Heroes again

The king of the Tang Dynasty paid 10 coins for one day of his life, so he entered the mausoleum to collect coins and set up a post. .

As a reader who followed the previous book, I have some thoughts, as follows: 1 is what everyone says is "just not enough." The benefits of adventure and cultivation for the protagonist of this article have been suppressed: It's an awkward system that is still being chewed up by mouth, which is really boring. Is it a bad taste? In the same martial arts, the protagonist just can't keep up with others. No matter what martial arts secrets it is, the protagonist can only say that it is a shame. Other people's mountain-suppressing skills are useless in the hands of the protagonist. No matter how great the danger or the risk of death, the protagonist can never keep the benefits he gets, there are always various accidents. This has been the case since the last book. I also complained about "Tauren's Boots" 2 is the most critical, the protagonist has completely become a puppet Readers of cheating novels are contradictory. They like to watch the system and add points to cheat without affecting the hope that the protagonist can cheat independently. While adding points, it would be great if he could study the skills independently and even make breakthroughs independently. But the protagonist of this article has completely become a slave. He chews wood when he sees it, wants to eat magic weapons when he sees them, and is completely transformed into a beast. The more I look at it, the more dull it becomes.

The writing is good, but the way of writing is too old-fashioned~ Adventure life flow with system flow In this era, reading books pursues excitement, but your writing is too lukewarm, there are too few arrangements for excitement, the upgrade speed is too slow, and the protagonist is not strong enough. It's mixed up all the way and the writing is not humorous enough. It was a good book ten years ago, but now it is too impetuous and I don't have time to watch you slowly lay the groundwork.

Just want to say fuck. Having read the previous chapters before, I felt that the author was of good quality, but perhaps too bland for my liking, so I left. I just saw what was said about Wen Cheng in the comment section, and subscribed to the relevant chapter. Sure enough, it made me so angry that I almost vomited blood. Marriage, or the marriage proposed by the protagonist, and almost becoming someone else's husband, I found that the author really knows how to do it. With such writing skills, such strength of working hard to update, and using such a plot to depress readers, how dare you complain about your poor grades? Would I spend money to make myself unhappy? Is this because I am not a young man and I am depressed and can't write a book? ? Isn't it true that Mr. Guo became popular just because he likes to make everyone happy? It's better for you, if you have to write something that smells like screwing up, do you think you're screwing up? Cherish your subscribing readers, you can bear this, you are a true fan.

Pepper, I'll give you some suggestions. I'll change the introduction a little bit and tell you that the protagonist has partial amnesia and can't remember mythical stories like Journey to the West. It's okay if you know this, but it's too poisonous if you don't know. Really, it looks too uncomfortable.

I felt weak while reading the novel. This is not a plot problem or a problem with the author's writing skills but the author's poor thinking. For example, regarding Princess Wencheng, I wanted to give up the book for a while. It doesn't matter whether the male protagonist has a female protagonist or not, but if you write about the regret that you can get but have no choice but to lose, the better you portray the characters, the less readers will want to read it. You just brushed it off and even made the image of Princess Wencheng thin, so that's not the problem. Take another example of the prince. The better you portrayed the relationship between the Tang Emperor and the prince, and the better you portrayed the interaction between the protagonist and the prince. In the end, the prince was helplessly defeated, and the more uncomfortable it was for the readers. The last thing is that the protagonist is not clear about what he is doing, and the reader will feel more uncomfortable when encountering helplessness. If the protagonist is for immortality, then to deepen this purpose, everyone will take the protagonist's various hardships for granted. You see, the protagonist of Gu Zhenren is for immortality. No one will feel uncomfortable if he betrays or fails in the middle. This is the price required for success. The protagonist of Jue Qin fights against everyone in the world for the sake of a harmonious world. Readers don't feel uncomfortable either. Where is the protagonist's ambition and goal in that book? If you are at a low level, you may be trying to survive, but then you have become a major cultivator, so where is your goal? If not, all kinds of losses will make readers uncomfortable and give up the book. It is a pity to throw away tasteless food. The better your writing skills, the stronger this feeling will be. Even if the protagonist is just trying to make a name for himself, it would be better than the current aimlessness. The book itself is not broken. It can be revised later, just by adding a driving force to the protagonist. Why did I come to this world in my life? For the common people, it may just be a struggle to survive, but for the protagonist who can dominate the world, it doesn't matter whether it is for the harmonious society, for the equality of all people in the world, or for the harmony of a small family. But now the protagonist is like a puppet with no ambition at all. Even e-sports has the goal of becoming a world champion.

Does the author know what history is stranger than fiction? Playing fatalistically? Huo Qubing was a tyrant in Chang'an before he was seventeen years old. After joining the army, he won consecutive victories and became Fenglang Juxu. Han Xin, who was humiliated under the crotch, directly created a kingdom in the Han Dynasty. He was only in his thirties when he died. Not to mention Liu Xiu, a son of destiny. Meteors fell directly from the sky. The history of such a character who is more powerful than Long Aotian can be tolerated in the novel. Is cheating Li Hongru stronger than them? Does restriction... Fatalism... Make sense? When you give the protagonist a chance to hang up, it's to make a change. You are slapping yourself in the face. I was given the changed items again and again, while desperately pursuing fatalism and not letting go. This... Makes me speechless

It feels like the author is just covering up what happened in history and writing it again. No matter how much you support Li Chengqian, his feet will still be crippled and the emperor will still not be him. No matter what the protagonist does, history has not changed at all.

In the prosperous Tang Dynasty, Furong Garden, watch the lantern show! "I'm selling pigeons. I'm selling delicious and cheap pigeons. They cost ten cents each. I'm selling pigeons." The shouts of sales coming from afar aroused my curiosity. As a diligent writer who updates 50,000 times a day, I hate to hear others talk about pigeons. Emmm, I went over to take a look! She was facing the bouquet, with a slender figure, her long hair draped over her vest, gently held up by a pink ribbon. She was dressed in white, and the flowers shone brightly when reflected. She felt like there was smoke gathering behind her. She really was not from this world. When she turned around, she saw that she was still a young woman. She was only eighteen years old. I took a few steps forward and asked softly how much a pigeon cost. She replied: "Ten articles." I pretended to be surprised and said: "Only ten cents? It's so cheap! How many pigeons are there in total? I'll rent them all, and I'll return them to you in three days, do you think that's okay?" "Ah this?! Isn't this bad!" She said in surprise. "Why is it bad? This is a win-win situation!" "Okay, there are 14 pigeons in total, all of them will be rented to you, just seven for seven cents!" "Okay, we have been chatting for so long, and I still don't know your name!" Finally got to the point, and I felt happy, hehe! ""My name is Tutu, what's yours? Tutu asked softly. "Ah, I called the bear timid, you can call me little bear!" " Haha, I finally know her name, Tutu, it's a cute name! "Nice to meet you. Let's meet here again in three days! Little rabbit, hee hee! " "That's okay, just say it like that! "The little rabbit said shyly. I took a step forward, reached for the pigeon cage, and accidentally touched the little rabbit's little hand!!! When my palm touched her arm, the girl lowered her head, and I saw a slight blush on her little face that had just been elongated by surprise. "Then we'll see you in three days! " If you want to know what happened next time, please listen to the breakdown next time!

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It's 70 chapters, I just can't help but complain. Could it be that the audience for this work is novices who have absolutely no knowledge of history? The Emperor of Tang Dynasty and Xuanzang became sworn sworn brothers, and Li Chunfeng predicted that Li Xing would be the emperor of Wu Dynasty. The protagonist didn't understand what these two things meant?

Wear treasures but not people, the protagonist is an indigenous person. Tsk, look at this introduction, enjoy the convenience brought by modern memory, ride on the popularity of time travellers, and write about an aboriginal, it is quite good. The book can be written well, but I am not in the mood to continue reading.

The advantage of this book is that it is logically self-consistent, but the disadvantage is that it pursues the theory of destiny too much. First of all, the character Li Hongru himself was created by himself. In the early days, various noble people supported me, changed my life, and with the help of golden fingers, I experienced all kinds of strange events. That's what makes the protagonist rise. As a result, one person was renamed Wang Xuance and the other prince died in the later period, which wiped out all the efforts made by Zhujiao from the beginning of the book to the present. The existence of the protagonist is a variable in the technological sense. Converted into prehistoric species, it is one that has escaped. His existence itself represents change, and the author, Wang Xuance, directly locks the protagonist's future possibilities. The protagonist now belongs to the top group of people in the imperial court, but his fate is fixed. When Wang Xuance's script is completed, the protagonist may become an immortal. Maybe a straggler. Rather than being a variable. Because not much has changed.

Either you cheat openly and openly, or you write a story about mortals ascending to immortality. No matter how well-written the story is, no one would want to read it even if it contains a lot of rice fields. Well! All the good mood of the day was gone. I really hope that Qidian has a function to block books so that they can no longer be seen.

I am gifted and intelligent, have practiced all three religions, and have practiced countless techniques. But if you don't enter the soul, you will be like an ant, so I behave like a human being, and when I should be deflated, I will still be deflated. I am a civil and military soul, proficient in arithmetic, and when I enter the soul, I am accompanied by thoughts. But before I reach the ninth level, I will end up like an ant, so I behave obediently, and when I become deficient, I will still be deficient. I have contributed to the destruction of the Khanate and the conquest of Tibet, and have made numerous military exploits. He has a close personal relationship with the big shots in North Korea and China. But I still obey, because this world belongs to Emperor Tang, and if Emperor Tang wants me to suffer, I will still do it. What did you say? This book tells me that if I cultivate immortality, my magic power will be as high as the sky? This Qitian is the Qitian of the Great Sage Qitian. If the Monkey King is still deficient, what's the problem with me being deficient?

To be honest, after reading Chapter 21, I was really discouraged to avoid the important and take the easy. If you don't want the pig's feet to grow quickly, why don't you just change your worldview? Don't remember the co-authorship, but just remember some science and some poetry?

The protagonist traveled through time and became a fool. He even remembered making telescopes but didn't know about Journey to the West. I don't know if everyone can make telescopes in reality, but I know that there are few who have never read Journey to the West, and where did your nine years of compulsory education go.

1. In the 18th year of Kaiyuan, Chang'an. Chang Le Fang, Mujia Winery. As usual, the restaurant was deserted and there were few customers. The only waiter, Wen Jiu, had no work to do and was leaning at the door with his legs crossed, eating melon seeds leisurely and paying attention to the newly opened wine restaurant opposite. It has been half a month, and there are so many customers in the wine shop across the way, but in their small shop, there is not a single customer—— Oh no, there is one—— A thirty-year-old knight wearing commoner clothes and holding a long sword. 2. The sun was setting in the west. Wen Jiu spit out the melon seed shells, patted his clothes and stood up. He quickly cleaned up the mess. Baba waited for the arrival of the knight. This is the only customer in their shop! Spend generously! Great drinking capacity! You can drink three jars in one breath! Wen Jiu's salary today depends entirely on this generous knight! The shopkeeper is a woman in a green dress, with her hair in a high bun, revealing her fair and slender neck. She came to the hall with her own brew of Lang Guanqing. Seeing Wen Jiu's eager look, she couldn't help laughing and scolding: "Come here and help me! Are you as willing to wait and see? If you are so eager to wait, why not go to the opposite side to recruit customers." Wen Jiu trotted over, took the jar of wine from the shopkeeper's hand, and took a sip: "Hiss--it smells so good!" Such a fragrant wine should not be made in vain for those who don't understand wine and have no taste. 3. While talking, Wen Jiu poured the wine. Three large bowls were lined up on the table. The wine had a pleasant aroma. At this moment, a knight in white who looked miserable came to the door. Seeing Wen Jiu and the other two, the knight in white nodded slightly, silently put his sword on the table with a bang, picked up one of the bowls of wine, and drank it in one go. Even after seeing him many times, Wen Jiu was still dumbfounded for a while. After finishing the bowl of wine, the knight muttered: "Today's wine is different from usual." The shopkeeper explained in a clear voice: "This is the newly brewed Lang Guanqing." "Lang Guanqing, there is actually Lang Guanqing in Pingkangfang ." The knight said to himself, bursting into laughter, "The Lang Guanqing made by the girl is far inferior to the Lang Guanqing from Toad Ling, so you should serve me the original liquor bar." As he said this, he pushed away the two bowls of wine left on the table with a look of bitterness and hatred. Wen Jiu said dissatisfied: "My shopkeeper took pity on you and was worried that you would be harmed by drinking, so he specially brewed this mild wine Lang Guanqing for you. Why don't you appreciate it!" The knight laughed loudly: "I want to drink Lang Guanqing. , Why come to your little shop? Stop talking and get some liquor!" "Hey!" Wen Jiu reluctantly served the old liquor to the knight in white, and the knight drank it without ordering as if he had found a treasure. Wen Jiu leaned beside the shopkeeper and muttered: "Shopkeeper, is your liquor famous?" Why does this strange man in white love this liquor so much? "Not yet." The shopkeeper didn't know what he thought of, and his hand holding the abacus paused.

Although the author wants to pave the way, but hey, I don't understand anything about science, and yet I wrote such a long article, so it's hard to say unpleasant things. Fortunately, pig's feet are still human beings in two lives, and they have everything, and they have been reincarnated. I don't know what I am denying, and it is tens of thousands of words long. Besides, my memory has been awakened. According to people's curiosity, I would go back to the meeting early to verify it, regardless of whether there is any gain. As for atheists, being firm in science and denying the power of ghosts and gods are two different things. Didn't you understand this if you were a college student in your previous life? Although the author wanted to foreshadow Pig's Knuckle's psychological changes and teenage character, the writing was really not beautiful. I won't go into too much detail. It's true that the later chapters are very exciting, but I could only read Chapter 8 the second time. It was too dry, so I canceled it.

I had a strange feeling while watching it. The protagonist is always very open-minded about the troubles he directly or indirectly caused, causing misfortune to others, but he will use it to his death if he catches someone else's little leverage. This reminds me of my ex-girlfriend, and I feel a little uncomfortable. 😰

After reading other people's stories about the Tang Dynasty, I was so excited that I suddenly thought of this book again. I had lingering resentment that could not be subsided for a long time. I specially posted a copy here to see when it will be deleted or buried.