American Natural Disaster

After thinking about how important inspiration is to the author, I would like to congratulate Lao Cai on finding his inspiration and breaking out of the cycle of being unable to update alone. I will give you a reward of 15,000! Although you are no longer young, you can still read code words in the future, with a young heart and passion 😁

Comment: The beast's blood is boiling When this book was first published, it was at the time when online writing was on the rise! Think carefully about how the martial arts novels are quite satisfactory (compared with online novels, the inner force of "Yunlai Zong" That's pediatrics) Because the author was fooling around while studying, he entered the online literary world very early. However, there was a certain person who was not doing his job while studying. He read the banned books, and for a moment, he was led by the eunuch author for more than ten or twenty years. Therefore, this novel has a lot of dishonest book reviews. It is obviously a good novel, but no one has reviewed it! What is the purpose of always discussing ancient books? Tell everyone, do you want to use your age to pressure readers to reward or subscribe? All right! I subscribed!

The book is very good and the story is very telling. However, the protagonist is too old, not handsome, has no emotions, has no woman, and has no children, so most readers have no sense of involvement. I guess only old bookworms who are tired of the usual routines might like this kind of thing. After all, everyone's time is limited, and they don't have so much energy and time to pursue unpopular things. Speaking of strength, it is not so strong that it calls itself a school or has profound thoughts, such as the Three-Body Problem. It's easy to please no one and not be popular anywhere. What a pity.

2021.01.11. 21:15 The author has not updated yet, so he clicked on the APP for the third time. I will remember this grudge first.

To be honest. It's not considered a top-grade divine book, but it definitely qualifies as a top-grade good book. The mastermind behind billions of books does not write any of his works. The real mastermind behind this book remains. And it interprets the protagonist who is similar to a super body. The villager system of Taoyuan Village is the most likely way to realize the virtual game I have fantasized about for a long time. However, it is impossible in reality. I only enjoy myself in novels. The appraisal of good books is completed. Note: This is for blind people and those who skip lines. You will believe me 😁

Author, if you don't read the first person in your opening sentence, you are just a noob, and I don't know how many people will be offended. Qidian was founded in 2004. In July 2008, I took over the pirated online novels I read on my MP4 for the first time from my cousin. It is now just 12 years old. During this period, I have witnessed the changes of countless online novels and the rise and fall of many authors. But according to your logic, wouldn't I also be a "novice"?

This book would have been much better if the protagonist was not so crazy. What has already happened is repeated from the perspective of the protagonist. It has no other effect than disgusting people. Using the brain to constantly forget all kinds of important information to weaken the protagonist is the worst setting. If it is like this, why not just forget all about the protagonist's own abilities and become a fool?

And since it's all over, a spoiler for readers who don't understand, it's the protagonist who turned himself into a spirit b. Because his woman died, he had the will to die, so he started to become a god and seek death, and then maybe erased himself. My own memory also compressed my own human abilities, and then modified the lifespan, or the lifespan is decided by the readers, so if you like it after reading Chaoshen Notes, the author will write it down Then I will take a look at the ending and see if the answer is revealed.

Reading this book is really (a good thing) a lot of work, why the brackets? Because the author was looking for trouble and the chapters were pieced together randomly, of course I gave up reading it! Should we abandon authors who cause trouble to readers in this way? Of course I have to give it up! The chapters are in a mess, and the plot is even more incomprehensible (but I heard that the editor still has some readers who can understand it). After hearing this news, the author who wiped out my intelligence in this way will wait until now if I don't give up! (Although he claims to have been chasing books for more than ten years) Think about this author, he is very talented, every novel has received great praise, and the results are both good and bad. Every novel is either a eunuch or a eunuch... So the author went crazy and wrote a novel that no one can understand, and sent away the two crazy fans around him! It was so good that someone actually understood it, and then a certain editor who had a habit of cutting off his sleeves actually understood it too! Aha! The editor and the author conspired to rewrite the opening chapter, so I was abducted back. Before I even read the writing, I was abducted and asked for money to buy the chapter before I could type it and curse the author. What's that called? On the shelves... I haven't heard of it for more than ten years. It took me a long time to think of this old term. I would like to advise readers who want to criticize others to read the book carefully, touch their pockets, and then evaluate whether the author is worth subscribing to. Don't criticize and seek justice. Without further ado, I will taste it first and then decide how to blackmail this eunuch!

After reading four chapters, I saw descriptions of Natasha, Fury, and a S. H. I. E. L. D. Agent. (Captain America was not described in detail, so I will not comment on it). What I want to say is, can these three people write so OOC? Natasha entering the protagonist's town was like Grandma Liu visiting the Grand View Garden. She did not show the psychological quality of a senior agent at all. One moment she was very surprised that someone among them could lift two tons of weight, and the other moment she was very surprised that everyone here could speak eight languages ​​and could also speak the most difficult Chinese in the world. I won't complain about this being the most difficult in the world, but there is one thing to say, this is the world of American comics. Why has Natasha not seen this after living for so long? How can you be so surprised? Another agent named Pete, since he can go on missions with the Black Widow, he should still have some qualifications. However, as soon as he heard that eight languages ​​can be learned in this town, he forgot all discipline and tasks, and immediately ran to the town yelling and preached, which probably meant " This is a place of miracles, this is a miracle of God, the person who created this place must be an awesome god, I want to live here, yes, yes, yes, yes." And Fury, the king of agents, director of S. H. I. E. L. D., Just based on the words of Natasha and this agent named Pete, did he want to blow up this town with missiles as soon as he opened his mouth? Just because the people here speak eight languages ​​and someone can lift two tons, you don't want to investigate anything and just want to blow up this place? The author knows the concept of an official organization blowing up a small town with a large population? How come the author can write so outrageously about three people in just four chapters?

The creativity is good, and there is nothing wrong with the writing. I was put off by the first-person perspective and the indescribable chapter ordering. I feel like the author is trying to be pretentious, and if this book doesn't change much, I will most likely write it off.

I can't even understand it, I haven't figured out the cause yet, it's still in the first person, I'm torn apart

The main character in this book is half-nervous, which is a failure, but overall it's okay!

Thank you for the refinement, Then I thought about it and came back to read your comment a few times. Are you saying I don't understand it? Are you just reading this comment a few times and still not understanding it? Then I will write it directly for you. Let me think about what it is about. For example, at the end of the chapter, the blue man who traveled around the world with Qinggong on water accidentally ran through a very smelly valley. He thought about why it was so smelly, and then ran away quickly, but he did not expect that a man walked out of this valley twenty minutes later. Dad Peach, whom I miss so much, Then Chapter 2, xx Notes Hey, after having a big bowel movement, I feel refreshed all over, and I can't eat anything randomly in the future. Although it won't be bad, it will be mixed together in the intestines, and the taste is worse than ordinary farts, Then this is connected, right? In this way, there will be no sense of smoothness when reading, but it cannot be used multiple times. It can be a coincidence, but readers will get tired of it every time it happens. Then how does the end of the first-person chapter connect to the next chapter? I want to think about it... In this way, the main Jiao wrote on the note: Ah, I have to receive XXX later, I almost forgot, oops, Or, I will go to XXX tomorrow, how about it? Then the next chapter, the third person, I was very anxious to be waited for by the person who almost let the pigeon go, Then I finally waited for the graceful and belated old man, Or it was the latter plot above, This way it would not be abrupt Really, I have read novels for many years and written them for many years. Maybe I have read them better than you. Many, because I have been reading Internet articles crazily every day for several years, so I may have thought of a way. As an author, it is not easy for you to change your position when reading what you have written, see the loopholes, and think about how to change it I didn't say anything nonsense in this article, so don't delete it.

The old bookworm said that he stayed up late to read this book and voted for recommendation. It is really well written. Please don't be a eunuch. Please, author.

Postcards from the Ghost Would you like to write another one? What to write?

When will the author's new book come out?

I feel that the whole book is like "God's soliloquy in his life" or "a psychopath's soliloquy in his life"

This should be regarded as a farming article, why is there a passionate label? Not passionate enough in every sense of the word!

The last few chapters have been a bit poorly done. Xingye's movies are relatively unpopular and not many people have seen them, so don't take it for granted that everyone knows the plot and every character. Please be more considerate to those middle-aged people who are busy with work and don't have much patience to watch movies. They have money😏 and the rewards for subscribing are vague.

Post a long comment to explain that it is readable, but it is controversial, but it is still acceptable. This author is writing a book seriously.

I am really afraid of eunuchs. This book is well written and has a strong story. It is comfortable to read and suitable for old bookworms. It is not too violent 🙂

It's a very good book. I read more than 80 chapters in two days. The story is wonderful, but what I like more is the author's writing style. It's just strange, why is there no option to vote for recommendation at the end of the chapter?

Then about how to maintain the continuity of the plot when you write the first person and the third person back and forth... You can consider connecting individual scenes to make it a little more dramatic, but if it is not the main plot, just connect it with the opening I can't think of how to write anything else, because I have never written a novel that switches between two persons and I have no experience at all.

I was a little confused after reading the first few chapters, but I felt very happy as I continued reading. It's just that the updates are a bit sparse and I'll give you the recommendation votes in the future. Let's see how much we can update in half a month

This fat guy can't help but look like it's been so long and he still hasn't had three to five hundred chapters. Don't tell me how busy you are at work. You're coding all the time at work. Even your boss knows!

Personally, I really like this way of seeing the protagonist's influence on the world. He rarely appears and gives other people a chance to express themselves. It feels like the mastermind behind the scenes.

It was okay in the early stage, but it was too messy in the later part. The main character in the green and fat section was level 6, and then it changed to level 3, and Natasha was level 3, but after about 200 pictures, it became level 1 again. I was speechless. For the sake of the plot, it was forcibly weakened. Do you think the readers are fish? Only seven seconds of memory? ? ?

It's very well written, I just feel like the names of each chapter (very random)

The author has nothing to do and a lot of code words. I'll just It's a good night and I have nothing to do to show my courtesy. Subscribe and give rewards and vote monthly