Douluosier

The writing is very good, and the imagination is great I have also fantasized about studying the relationship between martial souls, soul masters, and soul beasts, and creating soul rings and soul bones. However, the author, your pace is a bit too fast, but if you plan to develop Zhutianliu, then it is okay. Otherwise, if you just write about the protagonist who is almost invincible in a few hundred pictures, even if you write about Dou Si, you won't be able to write much, and you may even collapse

Good guy, the low-end version of Fujiang. I don't know how many can be divided into.

Martial spirits are cells? It's interesting. Let's keep it for now.

The introduction is quite interesting, I hope it doesn't get too toxic.

Murderous aura, bloody clothes, bone weapons, can't find one 🔨

Damn it, you are so good at pigeons. For most of the year, I thought you were in the palace to serve the emperor.

In fact, in the original work, it seems that the master said that Wuhun Palace raped people. There are many unreasonable things here. 1. Forcibly pulling in geniuses will only bring in traitors, and no organization will do this. 2. If what he said is true, then Phoenix Man and Xiao Ao will definitely die. They don't have the same background as Tang San, and they also traveled to the mainland? Joke. 3. The master is a member of the family. Even if he doesn't want to go home, he still thinks about the family and not others. 4. You will not blatantly force someone to do it, which will only affect your credibility. Even if you want to kill, it will be secretly. After all, who knows who did it. Don't forget that family, nobles, and clans are also very important in killing other geniuses. After all, that's what his thinking was.

I read more than 70 chapters in one go. After reading it, I feel very good overall. Let me tell you my opinions first. First, the protagonist problem, because the protagonist has had a low sense of existence for a while. It will be confusing at the beginning and you can't tell who is the protagonist. But gradually you get used to it. Maybe the author will have a better solution to the protagonist's current schizophrenia (it looks like it, but I don't know what this situation is like). Second, there is the issue of female protagonists. Currently, there is no intention to have a female protagonist. I personally feel that no matter what kind of novel is written, there should still be a female protagonist, but it cannot be messed up. There are many types of people who fall in love with each other at one glance. In that case, it is better to read Xiaobai's novels directly. Synthesizing martial souls, there are too many martial souls. This depends on how the author solves the problem of the protagonist in the future. If the protagonist will be synthesized into one later, it will feel like there are too many martial souls. If it remains like this, it will feel like there is something wrong with the protagonist Fourth, combat power The problem is, fighting a titled Douluo with five rings. Although Dugubo is level 91, he feels that his combat power is too high. When he reaches six or seven rings, he will not be able to fight a god. The span of combat power is too big Fifth, transforming the martial spirit. I feel that this is a bit too abnormal. Before It's the same martial arts spirit (Zhu Zhuqing and Zhu Zhuxuan's part). After the transformation, they brutally tortured others. They have the same fourth ring, and the increase in combat power is a bit outrageous I personally feel that the writing of this article is very good, and there is nothing uncomfortable about it I don't want to comment too much on the writing. Although I have been reading novels for seven or eight years, I have never mentioned the problem of writing, because not everyone is good at writing at the beginning. It has to be practiced, and one day it will be good. The overall article is good, non-toxic, and some are slightly poisonous. You can start reading it

Why not popular🔥🔥🔥? It's obviously better than other Douluo fans! Is it true that everyone who reads fanfiction now has unique XP?

To be honest, this book satisfied all my fantasies about Douluo Continent's martial arts. After all, what attracted me at that time was all kinds of strange martial arts.

To be honest, the author really wrote this book very well, both in terms of imagination and emotional expression. However, the author's main problem is the writing style. The author has the plot, but the writing style is not good. It describes the feeling, but the description is not clear. The plot of the article has a vague feeling.

Study hard

If you give up halfway on everything you do, what else can you do?

How much more can I write? Not scheduled for the Far North?

Nice. Do you think I'm talking about a novel? I'm talking about the author's imagination. I felt so comfortable reading this book!

The writing is quite good. As long as the fighting power does not collapse, it is one of the few Douluo fan works.

This should be the best level among Douluo fans, right?

I hope there is only one female lead, Zhu Zhuqing, thank you. (Just my personal thoughts, please don't comment)

This is the best Douluo fanfic I have ever read.

Different from other Douluo fans

Great, Sbarasi, very good! The emotional drama of Ma Jia is very well written. I have always been worried that the protagonist will take the high road of ruthlessness and coldness, but no matter it is Shenhao and Ling, the two girls Xuan, Mu Yu and Qian Renxue, or Su Bai and Hu Liena. Each of these emotional lines has its own characteristics. Especially the last two emotional lines fulfilled my regrets about the original work The treatment of the original work is also very good. There is no bad treatment of Master Tang San and no beautification of Wuhun Palace. It can be said to be impartial and the original characters are also quite distinctive. At present, So far, there are no poisonous points The author is also very skilled, so there is no need to underestimate himself. Whether it is fighting or emotions, this book is also outstanding among Douluo fanfics In the end, I hope the eunuch will not collapse the plot.

I read it in one go, it's good, I've collected it

This is one of the best batch of Douluo fans. It looks good.

It's beautiful and very interesting. There are many self-created martial arts spirits.

Damn, this book is really well written. I consider myself among the top 3 Douluo fans.

The creativity of Cell is very good. I want to read this kind of martial arts book.

I found a green seedling and it felt good

It's quite interesting. Please keep writing, the author (ง •̀_•́)ง

The Other Shore

Except for Soul King's extreme exaggeration, the author has his own plot, unlike other fans who can't write without following the protagonist.