Traveling Through Douluo's Book of Life and Death

The two diaphragms should point 1, what the hell is Xiao Han? Why create such a person? 2. The classmates the protagonist meets when he enters the third grade are all geniuses. He has reached level 17 at the age of eight or nine. If he waits three or four years, he will reach level 30. Each of these, I feel like the talents of the Shrek Seven Devils are very average.

First of all, the plot of the magic reform at the beginning was well written. Tang Hao was separated from the protagonist after A Yin sacrificed, and he could only take Tang San, who was born a year earlier than the protagonist, to live in seclusion in the Holy Soul Village. Bibi Dong did not have any interaction with A Yin. Instead, he stabbed Qian Xunji to death and took the newborn protagonist to escape Qian Daoliu's pursuit, and adopted the protagonist. Secondly, the protagonist's twin martial spirits are really good at the beginning. The first martial spirit is the Book of Life and Death, and the second martial spirit is the Clear Sky Hammer. Moreover, he has been taught by four titled Douluo (Bibi Dongju Douluo, Ghost Douluo and an original character) since he was a child. His background can be said to be one of the best in the whole continent except for the Wuhun Palace. But the first surprising plot came. The author actually had to create a character to make Bibi Dong fall in love with him. Bibi Dong was even more disappointed when he went to meet the master. Was he trying to force the protagonist to have a stepfather? Back to the topic, after the protagonist's martial soul awakens, he is born with full soul power of level 15 (it was later explained that the protagonist's martial soul in the book of life and death is very weak and incomplete, so it is not born with level 20). Having said that, I originally thought that the protagonist's first soul ring with such a nb start would take a thousand years no matter what. Or ten thousand years, but I didn't expect that it would be a hundred-year-old yellow soul ring. To be honest, this is the most embarrassing first soul ring among all the Douluo fandoms I have seen 😅 As we continue to watch, the protagonist enters the Royal Academy of the Star Dou Empire, and then begins a very old-fashioned plot of pretending to be slapped in the face to hide his identity. In order to avoid being pursued by the Wuhun Palace, the four titled Douluo from Bibi Dong's side established the Wanbao Pavilion to hide their identities. Judging from the description in the book, Wanbao Tower has branches all over the continent, and it is a very powerful organization (not only does it have titled Douluo behind it, but it also has the support of the empire). What I can't understand is that the protagonist has been tolerating all kinds of provocations from Xiao but he never said that he is the young master of Wanbao Tower. This kind of cliché plot is really boring. After the protagonist repaired his martial soul, his soul power was much purified, and after reaching level 19 (I am really puzzled that the innate soul power has not returned to level 20 even after replenishing the martial soul), he broke through level 20 under the pressure of Dugu Bo, and then obtained the second soul ring of the thousand-year level (it is still very embarrassing, the first two soul rings of the protagonist are one hundred years and one thousand years). Then came the most poisonous part. The four years of training in the academy were briefly mentioned by the author, and then the author told us that the protagonist had only reached level 30? Wtf? ? ? You were promoted to level nine in four years, and at such an early stage? ? ? I can't understand it. I really can't bear it anymore. And later on, it was said that the protagonist's third soul ring is still a thousand years old. The writing is not strong enough to slow down the pace and make up for the plot, right? I don't see anything that resembles the protagonist, and I can't stand the many forced advancements and unreasonable places, that's it.

It's okay if I want to add a supporting character, but CP can't add it randomly. It's not like Bibi Dong's style at all, even if I accept it as the protagonist, it's really uncomfortable to watch an emotional scene with a supporting character like Xiao.

The writing is good, keep up the good work, and will continue to support it as long as the author does not enter the palace. Update soon! The Emperor Dragon Next Door Shocks the World has already been updated to fourteen chapters. The author, you only have one chapter. You are a man and you can't say no, come on

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A life and death book A judge from the underworld emmmmmmm

Ten Douluo fanfics, five Tang San brothers, three Orphans of Holy Soul Village, and two are about dog-licking (I forgot the name of the most poisonous one in my memory. The first few chapters introduced the identity and background of the protagonist Nine-clawed Golden Dragon (soul beast) in various awesome ways) and then went all the way to Notting College to be Tang San's pet wd,,,,,

I am Da Xueer

Is this the case with this book?

Tang Ritian was cheated again🤓

If you want to give Bibi Dong a CP, don't write too much interaction with the protagonist, as long as it can reflect the love between mother and child. Otherwise, when others come to see it, they will think that you are going to accept it, but in the end, your backhand will be a king, and the readers will lose their mentality.

The setting of the original work has been changed in such a mess. How do you call this a fanfic? It makes me sick.

Heroine

…The fantasy world is particularly fond of outrageous plots. Qian Renxue's father forced her to sacrifice the protagonist's mother, and the protagonist and Qian Renxue had a passionate relationship...

It makes me anxious, especially when I am injured and have to use my soul power to heal. Do you think this is a martial arts novel? It's impossible for such a big spirit hall to have a healing spirit master! No way

Tang Xiaoqi

I discovered a huge blind spot. When his younger brother became a god king, his elder brother was also a god king. Their whole family was Shenzhen. The Tang family really became convinced of the god world.

When I first read this book, my senses were very good. Did I know that I saw Xiao Han? Then I died from the poison

A towering and poisonous novel, I don't know how many people have been persuaded to reject the role of Xiao Han, but the author also said: let me show my performance. It's too poisonous, so be careful.

When you see 114, the heroine is the most unbearable? Qian Renxue, I personally still like Tang San and his team, the protagonist is decent. As the male protagonist of this book, Tang Yuan, is he Tang San's biological brother, and Qian Renxue? Not to mention the hatred between his adoptive mother Bibi Dong and Wuhun Palace for revenge, and Tang Yuan's biological mother Lan Yinhuang also died because of Wuhun Palace. Tang Hao must take revenge. Then Tang San is also sure that after all, he killed his biological mother. What if he is really treasonous with Qian Renxue, and is going against his parents, relatives, and brothers? Based on the male protagonist's past life experiences, what kind of person is he? To give up the hard-earned family relationship for the person you like, I suggest you accept it a little bit (individually) that there is no destiny, and then go alone or find another girl... (Besides... The difference in age is too big... Even Wuhundian, Hu Liena, as a person who is very immersive in reading, I think) Of course, the heroine Qian Renxue is not set now, so just pretend I didn't say...

In this book, all the male protagonist's relatives are going to die! Moreover, the male protagonist's mentality collapsed after the death of his loved one! Only then can you become a god!

Should the life and death shop be so weak? This is an innate treasure. Even if one of the Three Books is downgraded and becomes an acquired magic weapon, it is still much stronger than the artifacts in Douluo.

Since when have realms become nothing more than cabbage? Titled Douluo may not even have things, but a bunch of Soul Emperors have them, and they're also Soul Emperors with white rings.

Is that so

Thousands of words condensed into one sentence, your circle is really chaotic╮(￣▽￣)╭

Qian Renxue

This book is so frustrating to read 😕😕

Who is the God of Death? Isn't destruction along with life? These two are husband and wife.

Even the God of Death must be cute