I Have a Pact with the Gods

It can be seen that the author wants to write a mediocre big brother type, relaxed fantasy article, which can be seen from the introduction, but your content does not match the introduction at all, just like I saw a plate of food and felt good, but eating it was not what I wanted at all. This is your situation Except for the first chapter, the rest is completely the same as ordinary novice fantasy novels. For example, when you fight monsters, my God, I thought I went back a few years ago. The protagonist's random thoughts completely disgusted me. I came here to read the book. It's fine that your introduction deceives readers, but your protagonist is completely unlikable. He farts at the beginning and slanders others. Although it is for the good of others, why must he fart? And the part about fighting monsters, what did you write, it makes my heart pound. In fact, it would be fine if the writing was good, but you wrote it in a single sentence, the content is too watery, and there are many words that can be deleted. No wonder you didn't sign the contract. Are you here to describe the scene? This is a novel. You don't know what a novel is. Your characters are not likable, your writing is mediocre, too slow, and the plot is not good I suggest you delete the article. For example, there are too many unnecessary descriptions. The characters must be well written. It is best to rewrite the first three chapters. If you can't write it, go to Zhihu to search for Toad and read his answers. It can be said that Toad has written about all the mistakes you have made. Anyway, I also hope that you, the author, can write well. After all, it is not easy to stand alone and I am quite tired from typing. Best wishes