Days of Future Past

It's a book I like very much. It's the worst Zhetian fanfic I've read so far.

Exotic

Ah, it's almost free. Why don't you wait until it's free and read the next chapters😜😜

I'm really speechless. I haven't become an emperor yet, no, I haven't even become a saint. I'm tortured to death by the Immortal King and Emperor every day. I finally read a few chapters of the normal plot and wandered into other worlds. Can you improve your cultivation quickly?

The writing is okay, but I don't like the protagonist. I don't know what to say about the protagonist's character. He hesitates in doing things. How can he still regard this as a dream after traveling 5 years? Can normal people do this? Even if there is a tragedy in the end, the middle process is enough. As a result, the whole book has been about tragedy. The protagonist has a system and can change his own destiny appropriately. If the protagonist's character is changed to be more decisive and passionate, this book will be better. (Personal opinion, personal sense)

This book is really poisonous. I have subscribed to it for more than a dozen times. It feels like I have read a pornographic article on a female channel. 🙂

In fact, the author should make the protagonist have a better relationship with Ye Fan. After all, there will be many enemies in the future. Don't bother with some stupid stuff about licking Ye Fan, because the protagonist will definitely fight side by side with Ye Fan and No. 10 In the future. Some people nowadays just spend no money to read books and just keep pushing them. What happened to the relationship with the protagonist? Should the protagonist be allowed to face future enemies alone? What else do you write as a fan? Just start by exterminating the darkness and pretending to be whatever you want, but who would read such a novel? Since writing fan fiction doesn't even have the most basic affection for the original work, then what bottom line does the author have? To be friends and comrades with Ye Fan is just to lick? Then the person who said this probably doesn't have a single friend. After all, Ye Fan, as the protagonist of a short book who fights against darkness, is more upright than many people. Just like Guo Jing and Qiao Feng, you can rape their treasures and their women, but do you dare to insult people like them? I'm afraid many people will criticize such an author to death

One more

In fact, your writing style is good and your imagination is rich. Instead of writing fan fiction, you should write about the same book! For example, the era of the Corpse Emperor! The era of the Supreme Emperor! The Age of Emperor Fire! In this way, you have a framework, the content is good-looking, and you can use your strengths. Think about it!

You actually spent four chapters preparing for the arrival of King Hua Yunfei. The previous King Li Qiye did not receive such treatment.

I felt extremely embarrassed when I saw all the exaggerated dialogues and all the pretense and slaps in the face.

This book can definitely be ranked among the top three Zhetian fandoms. Whether it is plot layout or other aspects, it is excellent. Come on, stay tuned💪

I always feel that Hua Yunfei in the first few dozen chapters is too indecisive and has too much time to take care of others.

He suppresses the protagonist too harshly, and everyone will step on him. Every time there are people who are far beyond the realm to kill, doesn't the protagonist have any backup plan? The protagonist seems to be the reincarnation of the Immortal King of Six Paths of Reincarnation, so he is bullied by a group of ants? Abuse of the main article?

The writing is very good, and I think there is something in it that is very good, that is, as the author said, he does not interfere with Ye Fan, and Ye Fan has everything he has.

You wantonly reveal to others even the secrets related to Emperor Huangtian and some of the Holy Ruins. I don't know how much you know about the original work. There are some things that the Emperor dare not reveal lightly. He can only guess and dare not reveal them. The protagonist dares to speak recklessly. You must know that there are some secrets in the original work that are tabooed by heaven. Really... Goodbye

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Already in the trap, already voted, don't be a eunuch, come on!

Come on! After completing the defense, save more money to write the manuscript.

The big number is out of money, so the small number rushes over to open an automatic

I don't even know what kind of mentally retarded article it is. Yao Guang, a 5-6 year old child, describes it like an 18-year-old. She is someone else's child and doesn't want to get rid of it. She also thinks about this and that. Isn't this a stupid pig's foot?

Take it, Huanhuan, this is my last monthly ticket. Jpg

One more vote at the end of the month

Chapter 400 doesn't make much sense anymore, it's a bit silly and feels like the span is a bit too big.

Author, why don't you change your style and stop writing fanfics of Chen Dong's trilogy? Generally speaking, when readers read this book, they don't want to read it just because of the title. The audience is too small. The new book Ancient Emperors is not very popular. After reading the introduction, they have no desire to read it.

The Chaos Body, just the Chaos Body, is doing something like the Chaos Star Body. I have never heard of it, and I feel it is very conflicting. I have complained about it a lot, but I can't complain at all.

Update soon, I'll give you the monthly pass 🙂

Do you update the climax every day? ? ? The author has grown up, and the climax becomes meaningless as soon as it drags on!