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Great authors also accumulate success bit by bit. I hope the author doesn't stop and update.

It starts out a bit cliche, but gradually I start writing something a little different.

A little more, not enough to read, write quickly

When he first came up, he used his golden finger. When he met the new killer Chi Lian She, he let go of the protagonist for no reason, and was happily killed by the protagonist. You must know that a snake can feel the heartbeat of its prey. As long as it wraps around the prey, its heart will keep beating and it will never let go.

What the hell? Is this your reason? You haven't even finished writing this newbie issue and you're starting to cut it?

So you treat our investment like shit for your own benefit? ? ?

Write more, it's not enough to read, come on

In my personal opinion, the first chapter should be changed, it feels a bit awkward. . . It's okay later 👌🏻I've already invested in it

It's a bit of a routine. After reading the first chapter, I can't help but think of the subsequent plot. It's just about contradicting the teacher and being tricked, and being provoked by that Sabi school bully. It's too cliche. I suggest you get a little creative.

This first chapter has so much to say that I don't even know what to say. Nowadays, novice writers no longer use such ancient writing methods.

The character of this protagonist is a bit disgusting. He obviously has no money to open a private room, but he yells without looking clearly. In the end, he still feels that he has endured the humiliation and suffered a great injustice. It's true that ten years ago, if you said something harsh to me, I would kill your whole family, the protagonist Long Aotian!

The people on the mountain top, the soul on the mountain top, the people on the mountain top are all the masters

Congratulations on signing the contract 🙂

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I have a weak question... Is there a book club?

Why do all the popular new books seem to be disappearing as soon as they last? ! ! Half of the books I finally found are in the palace 🔪🔪🔪