From the Backyard to the Future 2002

It's a very good book. It's like thinking of myself a few years ago in the dead of night, making me cry, but there is no chance to change.

I looked at the classification and found that it is not real life, so the introduction of the novel needs to be changed. It seems that there is a plan to abuse the protagonist. If you are purely interested in writing a book, just pretend that I didn't say it.

I have also read the previous book, and I found that the author is very fast-paced. I wonder if he is not good at describing details. Many things are skipped in a few strokes. As for making money during the summer vacation, there are at least more than a hundred chapters and the battle ends in Chapter 30. This section could have been a small climax and laid the foundation for the early economic foundation, but in the end, school started like this. In addition, detailed description can make the characters more three-dimensional, fuller and more spiritual, and the story can be more colorful. Attention! Notice! Pay attention to capitalization and bold. If you are not good at it, don't write the main text blindly. Practice your skills with other topics, and let you be responsible for editing and writing the main text.

Please give me some advice. The subject matter is good and the writing is okay, but it is not logical. Anyone who encounters such a huge event after traveling twenty years later should be filled with thoughts about this matter, reviewing the details of this matter, looking forward to the future, and how to use the information obtained from the time travel. Readers are also looking forward to this, instead of reading about how to take the college entrance examination, how to evaluate scores, how to apply for a volunteer, and small conflicts with some people, etc., Try to be as concise as possible at the beginning of the novel. After all, the rule of three golden chapters cannot be lost. One main plot is clear, and several sub-plots have to be slowly buried. Seven or eight chapters have been written, and even a small climax has failed to capture the reader.

The subject matter is novel, the storyline is good, and the writing is okay

Come on, the old book is better than being an eunuch. It's better to update it every day.

Is this book a eunuch? Good idea

Slow updates, slow pace, no details. What a waste of subject matter!

I scold myself for being worthless, but is that okay?

Can you interpret this as traveling through the future in parallel time and space, or do you mean that since this is in the future, the memories of the future will not be changed?