Eight Major Rivers and Lakes

I love the background and characters, and the non-delayed writing makes me feel comfortable. Type the word "Add update" on the public screen and the author will update it quickly

The paragraph is too long, please divide it into more paragraphs, otherwise it will be difficult to read. Moreover, there is no main protagonist who does not have a strong sense of immersion, the style is okay, and it can be seen that the word count is not good enough. You can go and see how other martial arts style authors write. It's easy to be dissuaded at the beginning of this book. Just practice writing and get used to the style of online writing. The early stage of writing a novel is difficult, so you have to be mentally prepared. It's extremely easy to get scolded if you don't write well. Don't be a eunuch. No matter how bad it is, any ending you write must end, otherwise the reputation will become bad. At first I thought I had traveled to the Qing Dynasty, but please note that male videos are written in the Qing Dynasty and are not rebellious. I don't know whether others will criticize them or not. I won't watch them anyway. If you write something that is deviant from history, you should pay attention to the style of online writing. After all, it's easy to get scolded. Note that just by not segmenting, a man with quality will start complaining. The above is purely a friendly reminder. I hope that the next time I see the author's new book, I will read it again.

What a waste, all of them were eaten to death

Seven pushes a day! Come on, author＾0＾~!