Old Fire Thief

I am a fully subscribed reader, and I really like The Fire Thief of the Past. I just finished reading the end of the first volume. I really liked the first volume overall, so I ordered all the books after reading the first volume. But just as far as the closing event at the end of the first volume is concerned, there are also some parts that are not so satisfying. Mainly <1> Emotional tone, environment and atmosphere <2> And the mysterious sense of déjà vu <3> Foreshadowing and foreshadowing <4> Protagonist character <5> Protagonist harvest and upgrade <6> The major events and reports at the end wrap up the whole volume <7> There may be some plot logic bugs In order not to affect new readers, I have posted the detailed discussion and the full text in the column. You can see it by clicking on my avatar. (And the full text is longer and exceeds the upper limit of the number of words in the post) If the author has time, you can read it. Of course, those are my opinions and only represent my personal views and feelings. It would be good if the author can learn something and gain something from it.

This book is great! When I first saw the cover, I thought it was a P5 fanfic, but the name didn't matter, but I clicked in anyway. The text is one word, beautiful It's time to talk about the text. I will transform into a white-clothed thief, use gorgeous magic, and steal the chaos in your heart. Come here, not only Arsene Robin, Kidd, or Joker, I feel that the integration is seamless. In one word, beauty In terms of relationships, to be honest, love is good, but it is a pity that it is not a human being. Besides, you have repeatedly emphasized that you are not a spherical lover. No, Bamboo Frost Falling can fulfill the love of others, good! As for the emotional drama, one word, grass The latest chapter can make people touch, one word, stability I feel that nothing in the same period of the book as you can surpass you, but unfortunately there are two points that are very hurtful. Some people can't understand it. It's very straightforward. Bai, although I also know that it is for the depth of the article, and the other is the update speed. I know that actually two chapters a day is still a bit difficult. How about stocking up on more That's about it. I hope Bai Ge can use gorgeous magic to steal our monthly tickets!

A book that really touched me. It can be seen that the author wrote it seriously. It is really a pity that the author cannot continue writing due to performance pressure. I will give you an extra 2,000 points to support it... To be honest, this is the book I have seen so far (March 1, 2021) that contains a certain element of mystery (I cannot say that it imitates mystery, this book is just absorbing) It collects some elements of the creation of Mystery and tells a brand new story. Just like Lu Youyou said, the article is made by nature, and the skillful hand comes by chance). As a previous book review said, the end of the first volume clearly shows traces of imitating the end of the first volume of Mystery. It lacks foreshadowing and is obviously stiff, but this can be said to be the only flaw of this book. Most of the books that imitate the mystery fail to imitate the core of the mystery and are completely unreadable. However, this book allowed me to regain the feeling of reading the mystery. It is interconnected and tightly connected, and it is a capitalized person in the background of a dark world. In my opinion, Mystery is a book that established the sect and created some new elements. This book absorbs some elements of mystery, namely: extraordinary comes from the outside, there is danger in not being absorbed by others, and extraordinary comes with a price. But this book also creates some elements, such as the extraordinary comes from history. It would be a pity if this book had the potential to be mysterious when it was finished. My personal guess is that the reason for the poor performance is the same flaw as the secret, slow to warm up. Mystery is played like this because Cuizu has the popularity and trust brought by several books, and many people are willing to wait for one volume to slowly lay the groundwork... But the author Wu Huo's Remaining Ashes does not... In short, I (silence) blew it

Alas, I voted for you. Although I followed many books at the same time, your score was the worst. I was afraid that you would become a eunuch, so I kept subscribing and supporting you. I thought about the reasons why you are not popular. First of all, it is the introduction and cover. The cover is the mask of the phantom thief in Persona (probably not very familiar with it). The introduction also mentioned the phantom thief, but to be honest, it was already very late when I actually started writing about the phantom thief. It was very outrageous. Actually, you are busy burying various pitfalls. Some of the plots are not clearly hinted and are ambiguous. Although I understand everything after seeing it, the reading experience is like "Jiang Ziya". I feel that the foreshadowing is not well buried. The following contains spoilers. First of all, Bai Ge's identity is a bit strangely hinted at. Although it can be understood if you think about it carefully, many readers today are not smart, and you didn't handle it very well. Let's put it this way, it is a very cliched plot to have both parents die, leaving an uncle with obvious status to take care of them, and then the plot of receiving an invitation to join the Abyss Relics Department is also very far-fetched. In fact, it reflects on the specific issues, that is, first of all, the author did not pave the way for the horror of the abyss and the value of the upgraded ones, and did not leave a certain concept to the readers. In the subsequent plot, The cutscene of inviting Bai Ge to join is very Japanese-style animation, which is taken for granted. Of course, this is not a poisonous point for me. This is a problem in a big market environment. You can at least make a roundabout way. Before inviting Bai Ge, that is, intersperse some hard-to-get dramas in his daily life with Ai Lian, such as "Ai Lian's vision of Bai Ge is extremely complicated", "For example, in your heart, you still have "Is it the same as before?", "For example, it's a pity that I can't go back", etc., So that readers can be mentally prepared. When inviting Bai Ge, you can also write about your hesitation in love, and you can even add a love monologue afterward, such as "Only in this way can I better protect you". This way, you are not flattering, but you are thinking of giving the best to the protagonist. The heroine is also very likable, but there are still many places where there are deficiencies in details, and there are also many mistakes in the title and introduction of the book, but there is nothing I can do about it now. I have looked at your various recommendations and there are many. The reason for such poor results is not that you are not good at writing. After all, I am reading it now. The main reason is that you did not polish the plot too much, started in a rush or did not think it through completely. In fact, the theme of Phantom Thieves is not particularly attractive. What's more, Phantom Thieves is the first volume, and the last half of the volume is particularly exciting after unfolding. The second volume of Assassin is also very exciting to be honest. It's a pity, you know. You can choose another book title, such as "Chapter of the Old Days" or something like that, and it doesn't have to be "The Fire Thief". In your introduction, add dolls, natural disasters, and some vague things, such as the Spear of Longinus (the weapon that killed Jesus), the Spear of Kungunir (the weapon of Odin), etc., So that they are broad and attractive. Summary The fact that your grades haven't come out is because you didn't do a good job in the preliminary work. Just talk about the apocalypse forecast next door. What did you write? The plot and story lines are all mixed together. It's hazy and foggy, and it unfolds very slowly. It's not as interesting as your writing. Why is it so popular? The reason is also extremely simple. First of all, the Apocalypse Forecast didn't explain much specific content. It's a standard fantasy flow template with a lot of inexplicable names. The standard fantasy flow template has an interesting start, but alas, it's actually not that good. I don't want to think about it anymore. I suspect it's not your problem, it might be other authors' problems. I don't know the details. You couldn't have offended someone.

To White Song When the wrong guards the right When the fraudster gives his sincerity When you inherit the courage and sacrifice Then the wings of the white bird spread out for protection Dissolve in the light So shine The star of light went to the sky Blooming in the morning light Then the Phantom Thief came to a grand end So the guardian kept the oath of death That was the time when you died You had no regrets and died well.                                ———1155620，，，，

This book is quite weird at the beginning, but it gets pretty good towards the end.

I hope the author can make this book longer. If possible, he can learn from Tomato's glove map technology. At least for now, it seems that a new map can be opened outside the sky.

Readers who have just started reading this book can stick with it until it gets better in the later stages.

First The End of Spreading Flowers I found the book when I was in the middle of the first volume, and I started updating it when it was finished. I almost forgot about it. I just thought there were hundreds of chapters to finish this weekend, and I saw the beginning of the third volume. I just saw the remarks at the end of the volume, and I didn't know why I clicked on it. Although it was a pity that it ended like this, I also felt that the performance of the book was terrible when I was updating it. It's very average, but I really didn't expect it to come so quietly (wry smile), but it's okay. I may not continue to read the remaining chapters, so I'll leave them in my thoughts (it seems like it's good to start the book in advance with the final remarks?). The author's story is quite good. Maybe this is why I don't feel particularly unhappy when it ends like this. It's more likely to be a pity... Then, see you in the next book! I hope that I can see a good story and my grades will not be bad, otherwise if I cut again, I will have to send the razor blade

This book is still very good, the characters have distinct personalities, but the Phantom Thief method can be innovative, and it would be more fresh if written from a different angle.

To be honest, this book actually has great potential, but the author did not stick to it. Many people who are tired of reading will come to read this fairy grass, but the author has no patience and perseverance. Although it is wrong to say this, the main reason is that the results are too poor. It should be that many people are keeping books. The update speed is too slow. The reason is miscalculation. The author thought that the results were too poor. It is really a pity. This book is really a pity.

Let's make Bai Ge's new suit appear Try using PR to make an animated picture (actually I just want to make an animated picture, but the drawing is a bit rough

I drew Ai Lian based on my impression. I didn't know what color the eyes were, so I painted them red according to my preference It's a very crude drawing⬇️

In the distant past, humans stood unstoppable between heaven and earth. The brilliant and boundless fire of civilization radiated across the boundless universe. The unimaginable technology seemed to have stolen the power of the gods and was dominated by humans at will. Even the gods of the past could only hide themselves at this time. Like all stories, mankind gradually fell into civil war due to its own pride and prejudice. Large areas of buildings were destroyed, and death and despair enveloped all mankind. At this time of despair, the old gods came back to the world. What they brought to mankind was the gospel of the cessation of war and the judgment of mankind's evil deeds. All participating countries during the war are guilty, and all murderers are guilty. The guilty can only be pardoned by death. No one can stay out of this world-class war, which means that all human beings are guilty. The gods of the old days gathered at the gods' table to discuss how to execute humans. A god who imparted the first firewood to humans had compassion and love for humans. While the gods were not paying attention, he stole the gods' tablecloth in full view of the people. He carried the fire of civilization and fell to the earth that was on the verge of collapse. He used the cloth as the sky and blocked the sight of the gods for humans, and the false starry sky was born. After this disaster, human beings have lost all civilization and the social system has fallen apart. The gods who brought fire could not bear the suffering of human beings and threw themselves into the divine fire, paying their own wages and summoning souls with their souls. A large number of historical relics from the abyss emerged on the earth. Only then did humans take this opportunity to develop into the current civilization again in just a few hundred years. Human beings survived, but at what cost? Inside the false starry sky are human beings who do not know the truth and yearn for the real starry sky. Are the Old Gods still searching beyond the stars? What is waiting for mankind to lift the tablecloth for the first time in the future? Free? Still desperate. What did Bai Lu see? What else is hidden? Why do the deaths of large-scale upgraders cause disasters? Are there really no ball joint lovers in this world? As the son who first unveiled the false starry sky, can Bai Ge steal the firewood of survival for mankind in the future?

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What is written? Does it look good?

So are you revising the book now, preparing a new book, or has your account been banned directly? How about sending me a letter?

The author has been out of contact for two years. The maintenance of the readership depends on management. The management gave the author an account renewal membership. It can be said that he has completely withdrawn from the network. It is a pity. It is a pity and even feels inexplicably sad. However, everyone has their own ambitions. I hope the author can live well.

Tokyo Foodie was removed from the shelves 😅 Before it felt like it was on the verge of being removed from the shelves, the train was too fast

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What happened if the new book is gone? Can you give me an accurate letter, brother?

Still can't help but want to complain a few words. . . Because I am afraid that people will criticize me if I talk about secrets here, let me start with Asimov and briefly talk about why this book still has major flaws. The Three Laws of Robots were proposed by Asimov and serve as the cornerstone in his Robot Trilogy. Many online novels, including this author, will draw on them when writing about robots (here it is an alchemy doll, but it is not important). This is not a problem. When you have reasonable and interesting previous works to draw on, you do not necessarily have to innovate on your own. But the problem lies in the creation of robots. For readers who have read Galactic Empire, we do not want to simply read the classic three laws again, but we hope to see something that extends from them that is different from the intersection of the author's worldview. In other words, we do not want the author to imitate this "table", but rather want to see this "inside" Specifically, how robots kill people when they satisfy the three laws is an extremely charming question. Asimov's books mention many methods of passive killing or logical killing, the core of which lies in finding ways to circumvent the laws or strengthen the weight of one of them. In this book, a simple sentence of "emerging from bugs and self-evolving species" casually gives robots the right to kill, which makes people suspect that the three laws are as unbelievable as the Bible. If you add a decryption process and make up something like "putting the alchemy doll into the human category, so self-defense justifies killing", it will definitely be far better than such a random explanation. Other problems are similar. It is similar to the mystery or the daily appearance of Arknights is not a fatal point, but what I want to see more is what happens after these things collide with the author's own world. I don't like to see random animals that just copy the grading system, and then copy the concepts casually and never use them again. I don't like to see 008 appear suddenly after the climax without any foreshadowing. I don't like that the protagonist can jump repeatedly in front of a sixth- or seventh-level villain at two or three levels and still survive. I hope to see more new things from the author, come on.

Well, I still like this book very much. I started reading Wuhuo's book in my freshman year of high school. I can always remember borrowing a classmate's mobile phone to read the novel, and enjoying the joy of life and death in the book alone in the corner of the empty classroom. When I was a sophomore in high school, I suddenly saw on the weekend that there was only one chapter of the update that I had saved for a week. My heart skipped a beat. I saw that the book was finished. To be honest, I was angry and annoyed at the time, so I gave up the book. Thinking about it now, I feel a little sad. A work must be the hard work of the writer, with up to one million words, and the writing cycle is based on years. I think, as an author, it must be harder than all readers. The dream finally lost to reality, but I still want to say thank you to Wu Huo. Although the update has been discontinued for more than a year, and the previous readers and authors will probably not come back, I still hope you will accept this late apology and blessing. Maybe the few words I wrote will be read to you one year later, two years later, if this book has not been taken off the shelves, you may see what I have written now, and you can still remember the original intention of my writing, even if it is very depressing, it is also very chic. Alas, I won't say more, I hope you will come back, make up for the regrets, and continue the story of Bai Ge. I will keep the synchronous subscription open. I hope that one day, I can see the story of "Old Days" continues in the scroll bar of my mobile phone.

The writing of the last lesson was so good that it made me cry, but at least it was within the scope of my acceptance. According to the thoughts of my abusive master, I estimated that Bai Ge would be disabled (he recovered after the third level upgrade, but left serious psychological trauma, and the crazy mask was even crazier), Zhushuangjiang turned into a vegetative state (later awakened by the rainbow of upgrade), and many other ordinary people died. Sorry, sorry, I am not a devil, I am a warrior of love.

Will the book be released? Are there any new pitfalls? Hey, if you don't plan to write, please come out and explain it to the readers.

This book is such a pity😭

I also subscribe to a book called The Spiritual Scholar. It's also something I think looks good but not too hot. I don't even know if 50 people have subscribed to that book, but the author can't stop updating it 4 times a day. Of course, this is because I don't have back pain when I stand and talk, but the results of this book are really not bad. Best wishes.

Let's just watch it first and wait until I change it later. I should delete the previous post first, it's so uncomfortable

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Ai Lian may be a true heroine, but I personally don't agree with it. Instead, I slowly fell in love with the character Zhu Shuangjiang (Just like Ling'e in "My Senior Brother is Too Steady", she should obviously be the protagonist, but it just feels very ordinary. I can't say I like it much, but not Chang likes Yunxiao, the kind who doesn't have a heroine and is willing to abandon the book if something goes wrong) I don't know how the author will arrange Zhushuangsheng in the future. I feel that she is quite popular. The senior brother has to force two heroines. The author must think carefully about how to arrange it to avoid the situation of book friends tearing up.