Sand Sculpture System Online Discussion

Um... The author has a good idea, but is it a bit confusing? Currently I don't understand what it means to take a girl and hit her? Or support your wife in advance? Or a two-day friendship? If you don't know how to write emotional dramas, you can just write them without a heroine. Samsara Paradise and Immortals are all very popular. The whole thing is quite heavy (although it is intended to be light-hearted?). For an old farmer like me who is used to pretending to be slapped in the face, I am a little out of breath. It can be more nutritious to scold the system. Doing it occasionally can add a little joy to the atmosphere, but scolding all the time? ··· There may be a reversal in the future, but at present the protagonist is a bit too poor and weak. The tiger is strong, and rebirth is strong. But are you sure the protagonist can handle the cycle of infinite rebirth and death? Don't talk about the belief in living, it's time to pursue a spiritual pursuit (or sustenance)! It's a good time to play memes. Was it a joke about Garlic Bastard at the beginning? The subsequent jojos are all well-known to readers and have a better sense of immersion. However, yysy can play classic jokes but not old-fashioned ones. It can also pop up a few unpopular jokes so that readers can search on their own after reading and suddenly realize something new? (As a person who only knows how to talk on paper, I can't say for sure) Well... That's it, I wanted to write something, but I forgot (justifiably) to state: I'm just a passerby, I haven't written anything. If I'm wrong, please forgive me. I don't like what I said to you. Guidance can be dismissed as bullshit (PS: It took almost 40 minutes to write for the first time, typesetting, error correction and revision. It was so difficult for me! Cry... Of course it is more difficult for the author, and I feel the same way. Let me emphasize one point in the end, this is an easy article!!!)

I don't quite understand... What feels weird?

Is this really a novel without a heroine? Why is it labeled as having no heroine? Selling dog meat on sheep's heads. What is the relationship between the protagonist and the girl other than the heroine? A supporting actress had more scenes than the main character, I vomited

At first glance, there is a feeling that the system is the future male protagonist. The moment this female partner appears, I feel that the protagonist's IQ has dropped, and her ability to persuade him to retreat is maxed out. I have just read Chapter 8. If you can, please write this woman to death within 2 chapters. In this situation where you can die anytime, anywhere, there is no time for ambiguity. If you take away the darkness, it will become dark. Letting others try and make mistakes for you is not as intuitive and stressful as having the protagonist try and make mistakes by himself.

The writing is quite good (the words are poor (well, in fact, I am a hermaphrodite and I really forget to speak normally) (I don't know how to describe it) (face covering)) The book is very good and has some brains, but there are some places that feel too sudden (maybe I am too lazy to use my brains), but it is acceptable. Overall, it is very good. Come on.

I only read Chapter 6 and didn't see the sand sculpture system, only the bad mouth system.

What are you writing? It's a confusing batch.

I didn't understand it. The whole text was incomprehensible to me, an old farmer who is used to reading systematic texts.

I can't stand watching it anymore. Especially when the girl at the back appears. I don't understand what the author wanted to write. All I can feel is chaos and disorder.

I haven't watched it yet, so I'll grab a seat on the sofa.

I feel like the author doesn't have an outline and the writing is a bit messy.

Although it looks a bit uncomfortable, it's okay Vote to support it

Um, it's a bit confusing. I just read the first few chapters. There is too much nonsense in the system. I feel like I've gone too far with the jokes. I can't even understand what I'm going to write.

It feels like the author treats himself as a system and the readers as the protagonist

Ah, this... It's been a long time since I've read so many updates?

I originally wanted to give a reward, but why did I get emotional

This book is destined to hit the street because the author is too young and fresh. I am impressed by the feeling of writing online articles and writing essays. . . . .