No One Understands the Spiritual Qi Revival Better Than I Do

Although no one read it, there was only one comment. But I still want to do a survey. What do you think of the first volume of Spiritual Pulse? Good-looking or not? Is it acceptable for the protagonist to be so dark? When I was writing it, I felt that the protagonist was a bit dark, and I was afraid that readers would not be able to accept it. However, writing about spiritual veins is like snatching the soul halfway. If Li Ge has nothing to do with the protagonist, the story will not be so exciting, which is very annoying. After much thought, I decided to write it according to the original setting, but I was worried that you wouldn't be able to accept it. Hey, the author of Poujie is so humble. He only has dozens of collections, and he doesn't even add them to recommended collections. He really doubts his life. Please tell me, especially if you can't stand it, tell me where you are dissatisfied. As for the plot, I will change it if I think it makes sense.