Preaching on Earth

I Want to Become a God Too Much, but it was awkward to read, and the writing was very contrived. Several chapters were dedicated to writing about the boss's younger brother in a certain small city? I can understand that you have been grinding on this character for so long, but it is not very appropriate to make the protagonist disappear for several chapters for such a trivial matter. This kind of passerby you take away with a few strokes costs a lot of pen and ink. Even if you want to portray an impressive villain, you can't portray it like this.

TJ has already written four books, and I can no longer read your books.