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The author is writing for the first time, so I can understand both the good and the bad, but I am an old bookworm who started five years ago, and I am picky, so I gave up on the article. Let me tell you what I think about this article. Of course, I have only read the first few chapters, not much. Judging from the first few chapters, the character of the heroine that I wanted to write was not well expressed, and the supporting characters, who are the characters in the original text, are so clever that they look very stupid. Also, um... I feel like there are some foreshadowings, and the relationships between the main and secondary lines are not handled well and need to be improved. The above is my own feeling, just a suggestion. I hope you will continue to work hard, come on.

I like this novel very much and recommended it to my best friend. She also thought it was good. What moved me most about this novel was its ending. In each story, the author arranges the supporting characters well, and their endings are all happy, and the original male protagonist who made the mistake also received punishment (a lonely life). Really, after following the update for so long, I was moved by her ending every time, and even cried a few times 😢. I really think he is a very gentle and lovely person. Nan Xing is just an ordinary girl. She doesn't need to be like other quick-travel heroines who can cover the sky with one hand and be omnipotent. She just needs to be a salted fish happily. (I personally like Nan Xing's character very much) Xing Xing is very responsible, gentle, cute, kind, and has her own unique way of doing things. The love between her and the man in her family is also very warm and sweet. Always support Da Da, love Nanxing❤

After seeing the introduction, I only had one idea: why is this book not finished? !

Oh my gosh, I'm late. Why isn't it finished? Why New Book Investments Are Not (Missed). . .

Come on, author, when will the update be released

😅 1v1 fast travel stories usually have a problem at the end, that is, they will sprinkle sugar crazily in the later stage, and then solve the problem and end it with just a few sentences. I hope this one will not...

Is the author here? Could it be that the worlds these protagonists travel through have more styles? For example, online games, magic systems, doomsday technology, comedy, etc... These types of worlds

It feels so good to be tortured, so beautiful! Add oil

Does the author have a book group?

The writing is great, but there are a few updates. I hope the author will work hard. Come on, it will be available soon. I look forward to it.

I came in after seeing the introduction, but it turned out that the book was not finished yet, ahhhh! ! !

Anyway, I think it looks pretty good. I like this kind of sadistic male protagonist. Not with the male protagonist.

As a straight man who only watches male videos, I accidentally clicked on female videos and then this book. After reading a few pictures, I actually felt pretty good 😰

Although it is still a new book, it is updated quickly_(:з)∠)_The plot is also light and simple. It is also great to take a few bites of candy after reading those thrilling plots.

After seeing the introduction, I only had one idea. The author is very good at making jokes.

I thought I found the fast-travel novel I wanted, but I ended up forgetting it.

After watching part of it, I hope the heroine can be stronger

Author, in the first chapter you wrote, you couldn't understand what the protagonist's original gender was?