Starting with the Fall of Shushan

Since the destruction of Shushan, I thought I would directly follow the path of the Sword Immortal. Let's see if entering martial arts now means taking the path of martial arts. And it doesn't feel like a Shushan disciple who has been practicing for six years, but more like someone who has just traveled through time.

I was also puzzled, why? As long as it is Zhu Tianwen, you must first brush it up in Wuxia. You are an immortal cultivator, so running to Wuxia will be useful. Why don't you go to Gaowu? Go to Swordsman, Godly Eagle, and the like.

Don't complain, Shushan disciples worship Dugu Qiubai as their teacher, he is still a person with Shushan heritage. What does the author think? Is the martial arts of Xianxia inferior to that of martial arts?

Take the Demon Locking Tower to a martial arts world without demons? After reading the first 20 or 30 chapters of Water This book is actually better to be set as an ordinary disciple of Shushan, with a certain ability to subjugate demons, and then travel through the demon locking tower to a world with monsters and monsters to subdue demons. It can be any zombie, monster, or zombie. What does it mean to travel through a divine eagle?

The idea is great, but the spirituality is not good. The protagonist feels like a puppet tightly tied with silk threads. After reading more than 30 chapters, the protagonist gives readers the feeling that he has no goals and no ideals, as if he is playing a game. , Although the writing is very good, the plot is too bland. I hope the author can describe less about martial arts and more about artistic conception. Shushan Swordsman has an ethereal artistic conception. He specializes in the lineage of immortals. He is a swordsman who practices spiritual energy. He needs to be unrestrained, pure and pure, and at the same time, he is a Taoist who has to kill evil and eliminate darkness. Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it

How can Big Brother's martial arts skills suppress Xianxia Think about it carefully

The protagonist is a good disciple of Shushan and has complete introductory skills, but he actually apprentices to Dugu Qiufei?

I just started reading it, and I have to say that the author made the wrong choice in the first world. One look at the protagonist's golden finger and one can tell that the core idea is to destroy demons and monsters. But if the protagonist goes to the human world and goes against people, that is inferior. The protagonist's first world is a world where spiritual energy is revived, or a world where demons are rampant in the Republic of China. It is a good thing to eliminate the little demons and monsters. It will be a bad start and it will be difficult to improve.

The writing is passable, but there is a problem at the front. Shushan Changjiao can take the protagonist's soul through time and space. After time travel, the protagonist can borrow his corpse to bring back his soul, why can't the Shushan Changjiao, who is still the original god, be able to do it?

If you want to be famous in the world, want to be famous in a world filled with ghosts and ghosts, want to become an immortal and an ancestor in a world that moves mountains and seas... Please leave the name of the Xia Mingxian downstairs, as well as the world level (such as martial arts, demons, myths). Arrange one by one. (⊙v⊙)