Rules Are King

It's really beautiful! Come on, author

I don't want to complain, this book was recommended to me by Daily Recommendation. I just didn't know what to read, so I read it casually, and I was fascinated by it. I watched it from twelve o'clock to four o'clock in the morning, and I just finished watching the protagonist's resurrection from the dead. I just don't understand. There are a lot of plots in the Zodiac that imply that someone has understood the key points. I'm afraid that readers won't understand, so I made a book from a God's perspective and wrote it automatically. It's a prison and a jailer, all in one. It was extremely depressing and there were heavy casualties. I thought it was brewing to the climax. The protagonist had the wisdom and was using criminals to compete for him and create conflicts. He was ready to fight wits and courage to break the situation. As a result, I tell everyone that the protagonist died immediately and it was over. Well, it did break the game, which is pretty good. It's like you have channeled the girl's emotions into place, but you have entered the sage mode. It is understandable that some young people like the beauty of tragedy in plots, but there is nothing tragic about the protagonist coming back from the dead. In terms of effect, it is not as good as a near-death return. Before the resurrection, it was a piece of food. It was slightly flawed because the author was not confident enough. If he was more confident, the writing would be good. Resurrect this poison. I won't know later.

Since no one commented, I had no choice but to speak here and express some opinions on the relationship between the quality of the work and the data. Some people say that whether a book is good or not has nothing to do with data! But I think otherwise. Whether the book is good or not and the data is really important. For example, if a masterpiece (of course not mine) is perfect in terms of writing, worldview, and character creation, but its data is not good, others may not even read it, or they may just take a casual look at it, and then feel that the book is not good, and then give up decisively. On the contrary, a book with not very high quality will be scary if the data is good. Then others will read it carefully, and even if there are some mistakes and unreasonableness in the book, someone will patiently explain it to him, and then in the process of reading, he will have the feeling that this is a well-written book. Of course, this cannot be said to be bad. Nowadays, don't people just read novels for fun? As long as it brings the joy of reading, does the quality of the book really matter? The above is the conclusion I drew from the perspective of a reader and a new author. I hope it can give you some help.

I think if the author doesn't know how to write emotional scenes, he doesn't have to write them. It's a bit awkward for emotional scenes!

The first dungeon was quite interesting, and the suspenseful atmosphere was quite good. Then I started to list the poisonous points, adding some blunt jokes, and the description of the characters also collapsed. I could only put it down for now, and forget about these poisonous points. I will come back to read it later.

It's so beautiful www Come on, author! ! ! ! ! Blow it up! ! ! ! !

This book is a bit addictive. It's okay to just read the first copy. What's next? 😐

Come on author (ง •̀_•́)ง, I hope you will

It's really poisonous. The protagonist's resurrection after death is too deus ex machina. How can I put it, it feels like the author doesn't know how to write it well. With a snap of his head, he died and came back to life.

I just read the free chapters and the writing was average, some stories were okay. Compared with the more famous suspense and supernatural books, there is still a big gap. But considering this is the author's first book, the writing is actually quite good. Come on

It's okay, why doesn't anyone watch it?

This novel is really good and very good.

To be honest, the difference between the beginning and the end is probably that I hired a ghostwriter.

I think the article is a bit too long-winded, and the characters are just thrown out of the magic board. The readers really have no sense of involvement. The sense of involvement is very important. I think since the author wants to write the protagonist as a rational type, the IQ of the supporting characters must not be low, and there must be some interesting points and contradictions. Otherwise, it will be like a running account and plain water will not attract readers.

I couldn't get the title of this book, so now that I'm in a book shortage, I'm going to read it to make do with it. I didn't expect it to be quite good, but not many people read it. It's a pity.

It's beautiful, thank you to the author!

Good-looking and good-looking👍

How about this? 🙂

I just want to ask the author, why does the protagonist feel inferior? Poverty? Were you bullied growing up? You, a second-generation official, have inexplicable inferiority complex. Can you describe it

The chapter names of each of your chapters are really awesome.

Saw it in Daily Recommendations, collected it first, and will look at it when I have time.

Is... Luo Shui dead? Which chapter is this?

The first few chapters feel quite novel, come on

Who is that Luo Shui? Why does she appear so suddenly? Is she the heroine?

Who is Long Qing? Youshui Village suddenly appeared and said that he had cooperated with him before, but I completely forgot which plot he had cooperated with before.

I saw this book recommended in the daily guide again. Take a look. Monthly ticket 0. Four hundred chapters have been written. The book has not received more than 50 reviews. The author really worked hard. Come on. But I really don't dare to look at this data.

I've seen Zodiac. I feel like in this copy, the main character only takes up a little space, and there's very little sense of involvement, which makes it feel weird.

I put it down when I saw Huang reaching the 12th house.

Has anyone tried poison? Tell me, is there any serious conflict with the setting? Don't read the Holy Virgin

How to raise this, I haven't looked at the character settings yet