Atonement for Original Sin

The work is quite interesting! Collected! Take your time and watch! Come on update! Welcome to visit us again!

Seeing that the author may need to rewrite it, let me give you some personal insights. Internet articles are utilitarian from the very beginning, so before the author is ready to write, he must first clarify some things. 1. Purpose of writing: Self-satisfaction? To serve readers? If the latter is the priority, then consider the next question. 2. Selling Point Simply put, what do you want to give readers? But essentially what do readers need? It can be roughly divided into two categories: one is refreshing and the other is resonance. 3. How to embody the selling point This can only rely on your own accumulation and perception, and it is useless to say more. If you cannot conceive a plot around the above issues, no matter how much you work, it will be in vain. In addition, based on the author's existing writing, let's talk about another issue. 4. Perspective of View The author does not seem to have done much research on this issue, which leads to the fact that the protagonist in your eyes is actually just a somewhat special supporting role in my eyes. You might as well find a few books or film and television works and carefully figure out how their perspectives/lenses are designed.

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Keep up the good work and look forward to the next content~

Why is the envelope introduction I wrote missing🤔